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寫檢討
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Simula pa lang naman to pero okay na sya for me, hoping pa for more chapters. Di sya yung tipikal na kwento ng superhero mo, at relatable yung bida kasi kinakaharap nya din yung mga problema na hinaharap ng mga kabataan ngayon.
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Simula pa lang naman to pero okay na sya for me, hoping pa for more chapters. Di sya yung tipikal na kwento ng superhero mo, at relatable yung bida kasi kinakaharap nya din yung mga problema na hinaharap ng mga kabataan ngayon.