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- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
The stories not that bad, I just think the main character is annoying, and the story doesn't make sense at time. Can't really give a reason why I think that, but that's my impression. Here's an example of the story not making sense, how is a bunny of all things going to fight other monsters with sticks, when he doesn't have thumbs. I know he's a former Demon King, but that doesn't change biology. He's a bunny.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The stories not that bad, I just think the main character is annoying, and the story doesn't make sense at time. Can't really give a reason why I think that, but that's my impression. Here's an example of the story not making sense, how is a bunny of all things going to fight other monsters with sticks, when he doesn't have thumbs. I know he's a former Demon King, but that doesn't change biology. He's a bunny.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.