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This is beautiful, I truly enjoyed this master piece. Too bad it didn't get a sequel, I was really looking forward to it until I found out that it was planned a year ago.😭😭😭
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Yes its Xaio Qiangwei I miss you dawg!.......................................................................................................
—————————————————————————————————————————————————————— I just finished this novel and it’s probably the first no game no life fanfic I’ve read, I enjoyed almost all of it as like most story’s the beginning seems both a little rushed and maybe to slow not sure how to describe it but. If you do write a sequel to this I will support it all the way
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This is amazing and I hope the other readers think so as well and I hope the future readers will love it as much as I do 😍😍😍😍 the writing of this book is one of a kind
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I'm shameless*********************************************************************** ************************************
MC is prideful and arrogant. Sometime hard to put up with. However, I can understand why. The concept is not bad, also I'm kind done with the so many harem and 💩💩💩. This is good for me.
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I WANT MORE CHAPTERS , beatifull story, waiting new chapters , WAITING i will not get killed until i finish this novel, a really funny and happy novel
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I was just looking through the multitude of books you made after finishing extrue god and I found this book and then this review and I realised something...
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揭示劇透 This is beautiful, I truly enjoyed this master piece. Too bad it didn't get a sequel, I was really looking forward to it until I found out that it was planned a year ago.😭😭😭
Sequel? ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 ............................................................................................i.................................................................
揭示劇透 Yes its Xaio Qiangwei I miss you dawg!.......................................................................................................
—————————————————————————————————————————————————————— I just finished this novel and it’s probably the first no game no life fanfic I’ve read, I enjoyed almost all of it as like most story’s the beginning seems both a little rushed and maybe to slow not sure how to describe it but. If you do write a sequel to this I will support it all the way
揭示劇透 This is amazing and I hope the other readers think so as well and I hope the future readers will love it as much as I do 😍😍😍😍 the writing of this book is one of a kind
HohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHohoHoh
I'm shameless*********************************************************************** ************************************
MC is prideful and arrogant. Sometime hard to put up with. However, I can understand why. The concept is not bad, also I'm kind done with the so many harem and 💩💩💩. This is good for me.
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揭示劇透 I WANT MORE CHAPTERS , beatifull story, waiting new chapters , WAITING i will not get killed until i finish this novel, a really funny and happy novel
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揭示劇透 I was just looking through the multitude of books you made after finishing extrue god and I found this book and then this review and I realised something...
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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