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I liked how the book started, haven't finished it yet though, but I have to say almost all the characters are too indecisive. I hope they start to grow at some point.
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Ur story is good,,, i read more,, ur writing quality is 5,,there are plenty to learn what the story will be,,, i think i wil try to read this and finish,,, good job, author 😇😇😇😇
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One of the best stories i came across. Both the leads have a very interesting story to tell. This story is not like the same other stories where all the characters are super rich. How they came together and how they are building their relationship. But the only bad thing is author has stopped updating the story due to school. And i feel like i have wasted my time reading this half story.
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I liked how the book started, haven't finished it yet though, but I have to say almost all the characters are too indecisive. I hope they start to grow at some point.
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Ur story is good,,, i read more,, ur writing quality is 5,,there are plenty to learn what the story will be,,, i think i wil try to read this and finish,,, good job, author 😇😇😇😇
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One of the best stories i came across. Both the leads have a very interesting story to tell. This story is not like the same other stories where all the characters are super rich. How they came together and how they are building their relationship. But the only bad thing is author has stopped updating the story due to school. And i feel like i have wasted my time reading this half story.
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