摘要
This is a young man of twenty years who was reincarnated in High School DXD carrying with him a system to ascend beyond its limits.
The first time I make a fan-fic note is that some characters will not be present.
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The High School DXD does not belong to me, nor any character.
English is not my language
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4.02
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At the beginning i didn't know what to think but after reading about 60 chapters i really like it. Please continue it until the end. DO NOT DROP IT!!! As i said,i really like it and i'd prefer to read it until the end. Keep up the good work,author!
I really liked this novel, it is rare to find a novel of dxd that is not the same formula repeated 99% of the time. And luckily the mc is not that kind of character with those totally generic personalities of animes. The story is progressing very well, the updates are at a good pace. The only problem was grammar, but it was only in the older chapters, now everything is fine. I recommend it, it's really a good story to spend time reading.
Well, 4.1 is overrated, mostly via Rating bots :(. From what I've seen, the author is from spain and writes in spanish and has little to zero english knowledge. His chapters are machine translated and some early and late ones are edited by another one with a little more english skills. Like most pseudo p*rn authors, the 18+ chapters are written by a virgin who gathered experience by watching po*n. Null Imagination, null seduction. MC gathers his harem members only by being strong. There is zero affection or romance. MC is also an irresponsible asshole. He is about 10 years away from home. Because of circumstances he was unable to return. His parents and brother are worried sick. But MC's thoughts about that are: I've sent them enough Money, they should be happy. So even when he returned, he let his family wait for anothersome weeks just to chase some more skirts. The MC starts as a likeable person with overly responsible behaviour and transforms with time into a typical chinese xianxia asshole MC that is meaninglessly arrogant and kills everyone he doesn't like. It is rather sad to see a Story, that started so promising only with bad grammar and is now at a point with relatively good grammar but shi*ty plot :( The characters have no noticeable personality. Girls see the MC and love him, boys admire or hate him - whatever is better for the plot. But there is nothing special about anyone. If one or two of his wives die, because the author forgets about them, you probably wouldn't even realize it. Writing Quality ** Stability of Updates ***** Story Development ** Character Design ** World Background **** average ***
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A story about what a newly added character can achieve I never liked some anime events and I always had different thoughts than the author ... That's why I decided to make this fan-fic I wanted to express my ideas maybe they are not of their tastes but at least I'm satisfied when I finish it ...
bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic
You should put that english is not your first language! Or just find an editor to fix the wrong typings. My head hurts when i read your story because it feels like watching a video that was chopped and then skipped every 5 seconds.
Story is decently written. I can see that there is potential with the whole 'fixing the plot' troupe and I like it. The writing quality is average with alot of mistakes like alot of stuff on this site. The thing u should work on the most is your pronouns. Like all the women are always 'he' or 'his' when they should be 'she' or 'hers'. Just a thought.
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Weak MC. .. .useless system .. Beta MC. .. .. Spicy Chicken MC. .. .. Naive MC. .. .. Brainless author .. ... .. Fucking shitty trash novel .. .. ..
Cannot read anymore. It's gotten impossible. And the story makes no sense either. he is somehow attracting women who are 4 times his age and it's honestly pissing me off. Some weird pedophile ****. On top of that the grammar is atrocious. So much untranslated and unedited content it's becoming far too hard to read at all. And this is just at 33% through the story at chapter 32. What's next? Full spanish or japanese chapters? No not reading anymore.
Besides few grammatical error, there is no problem in this novel. Original story is quite good. Issei is realistic, MC is badass, and his harem is almost perfect. One of the best thing is that author didn't write many chapters of MC childhood, which I personally hate for wasting time.
The grammar!!!...please fix it!!! I can’t read a good story with bad grammars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 140 words😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
Could be better. The story itself is fine but the grammar hurts. So many mistakes but I can understand that English is not the authors first language but it wouldn’t hurt to use some editor program online to edit the chapters.
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Very good novel. I like it. Only grammar is bad, but that’s to be expected from a non English speaker. I really wish someone would edit the chapters. Other than that, keep up the good work! I’ll support you!
Good book don't give up on it.....................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the story a lot though it needs a little bit better Gammer it is a good story and has very good potential. 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😼😻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👍👍✅✅✅✅😍❤️❤️❤️😍😍
Brother, nothing against you, but do you realize that Freezer can wipe out one planet with his finger in its weakest form? But you put here the DB force under the power of DXD? Do not you think that's a little over the top to make the SSJ so weak? Please do it right SSj never loses against Loki so please a little stronger for the DB force.
I know all the him and her is confusing and all that but i have to admit this one of the most fulfilling fanfic i have read and i seriously beg the author not to drop like other's.
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Dying strangely 5 years ago
- 2 I have been reborn 5 years ago
- 3 *Category* 5 years ago
- 4 Over the years 5 years ago
- 5 Let my story begin 5 years ago
- 6 The missions have been activated 5 years ago
- 7 Surprises and one more step forward 5 years ago
- 8 Points of view 5 years ago
- 9 Breaking the limits 5 years ago
- 10 Confession and visit 5 years ago
- 11 Unexpected gains 5 years ago
- 12 Party 1 5 years ago
- 13 Party and surprise 5 years ago
- 14 Meeting 5 years ago
- 15 Meeting 2 5 years ago
- 16 Training instructor 5 years ago
- 17 Training instructor 2 5 years ago
- 18 Discovery and departure to the underworld 5 years ago
- 19 Underworld 5 years ago
- 20 Knowledge 5 years ago
- 21 Battle 1 5 years ago
- 22 Battle End 5 years ago
- 23 *Thanks to my followers* 5 years ago
- 24 POV 5 years ago
- 25 The little dragon 5 years ago
- 26 Oka-san 5 years ago
- 27 Moving a faction 5 years ago
- 28 The plans 5 years ago
- 29 It is time to act 5 years ago
- 30 Jealousy? 5 years ago
- 31 Akeno and Shuri 5 years ago
- 32 Some writings with immense affection 5 years ago
- 33 Mission complete 5 years ago
- 34 Brand 5 years ago
- 35 Petition 5 years ago
- 36 Fairy Garden 5 years ago
- 37 The first wife 5 years ago
- 38 Return 5 years ago
- 39 POV Girls 5 years ago
- 40 Yasaka +18 5 years ago
- 41 Weapon and Souls 5 years ago
- 42 Sairaorg 5 years ago
- 43 Issei 5 years ago
- 44 Gotei 13 5 years ago
- 45 Discovering 5 years ago
- 46 Academy 5 years ago
- 47 Academy *2* 5 years ago
- 48 Ophis And Grayfia 5 years ago
- 49 POV Grayfia 5 years ago
- 50 Raynare & Kalawarner 5 years ago
- 51 Feelings 5 years ago
- 52 Of adventures 5 years ago
- 53 Shuri 5 years ago
- 54 Shuri 2 5 years ago
- 55 Visit to Grayfia 5 years ago
- 56 Shuri +18 5 years ago
- 57 Relationships 5 years ago
- 58 One day before 5 years ago
- 59 One day before - 2 5 years ago
- 60 Wedding - 1 5 years ago
- 61 Weddings - 2 5 years ago
- 62 Rias +18 5 years ago
- 63 Appointment with Ophis 5 years ago
- 64 Factions 5 years ago
- 65 POV Sirzechs 5 years ago
- 66 POV Misla 5 years ago
- 67 Kuroka and Grayfia +18 5 years ago
- 68 Great Red 5 years ago
- 69 Great Red - 2 5 years ago
- 70 Connection with the fallen angels 5 years ago
- 71 Clans Baels 5 years ago
- 72 Clan Bael 2 5 years ago
- 73 Weird woman 5 years ago
- 74 Punishment 5 years ago
- 75 An uncomfortable sairaorg 5 years ago
- 76 The fury of a dragon - 1 5 years ago
- 77 The fury of a dragon - 2 5 years ago
- 78 The fury of a dragon - 3 5 years ago
- 79 The fury of a dragon - 4 End 5 years ago
- 80 Misla / Coriana +18 5 years ago
- 81 Faction Bridge 5 years ago
- 82 Data 5 years ago
- 83 Talk between a King and a Valkyrie 5 years ago
- 84 Chat between Kings 5 years ago
- 85 ¿This is real? 5 years ago
- 86 An unexpected visit 5 years ago
- 87 Khaos Brigade 5 years ago
- 88 Mother 5 years ago
- 89 Arrival at the Yokai faction 5 years ago
- 90 Evil Resurrection 5 years ago
- 91 ¿Peace? 5 years ago
- 92 DOH 5 years ago
- 93 I love you? +18 5 years ago
- 94 Parents - 1 5 years ago
- 95 Parents - 2 5 years ago
- 96 Parents - 3 5 years ago
- 97 Parents - End 5 years ago
- 98 Why do I feel that so many problems are coming next? 5 years ago
- 99 Legacy? 5 years ago
- 100 Should I visit them? 5 years ago
- 101 How powerful will the owner of that sword be? 5 years ago
- 102 Do you even have pride? 5 years ago
- 103 But honey ... I could have done that paper 5 years ago
- 104 It's my chance to take revenge! 5 years ago
- 105 Little Suzaku 5 years ago
- 106 Is that the Barrier of the shadow? 5 years ago
- 107 Hostile or Ally? 5 years ago
- 108 This was not what I planned 5 years ago
- 109 She will not cause problems 5 years ago
- 110 I already have many problems in hand 5 years ago
- 111 Kokabiel (1) 5 years ago
- 112 Kokabiel (2) 5 years ago
- 113 Himejima (1) 5 years ago
- 114 Himejima (2) 5 years ago
- 115 Dinner (1) 5 years ago
- 116 Dinner (2) 5 years ago
- 117 Grandparents (1) 5 years ago
- 118 Grandparents (2) 5 years ago
- 119 I want to be trained by you 5 years ago
- 120 Meeting with her childhood friend 5 years ago
- 121 Honest 5 years ago
- 122 And the fragments? 5 years ago
- 123 Fragments of Excalibur 5 years ago
- 124 Curiosity killed the cat 5 years ago
- 125 I want... 5 years ago
- 126 I did not go 5 years ago
- 127 *Excuse Me* 5 years ago
- 128 Arrival (1) 5 years ago
- 129 Arrival (2) 5 years ago
- 130 Arrival (3) 5 years ago
- 131 Magic 5 years ago
- 132 Hostages (1) 5 years ago
- 133 Hostages (End) 5 years ago
- 134 Aura 5 years ago
- 135 Do you want my help? 5 years ago
- 136 Gates (1) 5 years ago
- 137 Gates (2) 5 years ago
- 138 Gates (End) 5 years ago
- 139 Next meeting 5 years ago
- 140 Enemies (1) 5 years ago
- 141 Enemies (2) 5 years ago
- 142 Enemies (End) 5 years ago
- 143 We can talk? 5 years ago
- 144 Uncomfortable moment 5 years ago
- 145 Demi-God 5 years ago
- 146 Faction Reunion (1) 5 years ago
- 147 Faction Reunion (2) 5 years ago
- 148 *Explanation* 5 years ago
- 149 Faction Reunion 3 5 years ago
- 150 Faction Reunion (4) 5 years ago
- 151 Faction Reunion (END) 5 years ago
- 152 She is not yours nor mine 5 years ago
- 153 The escape of the Goddesses and their General Commander 5 years ago
- 154 Call me Oji-san! 5 years ago
- 155 How to sing a hymn 5 years ago
- 156 Prisoners and Punishment 5 years ago
- 157 Eternal Peace? 5 years ago
- 158 Transcend 5 years ago
- 159 *NEWS...* 5 years ago
- 160 Preparations (1) 5 years ago
- 161 Preparations (2) 5 years ago
- 162 Preparations (3) 5 years ago
- 163 Preparations (4) 5 years ago
Es una historia exelente, y tienes mi apoyo al 100% me encanta, la empeze a leer hoy y voy en el capítulo 29 ... Eh leido comentarios quejándose de algunas faltas gramaticales y me gustaría ofrecerte mi ayuda si aún no tienes alguien que te edite en inglés ya que soy bilingüe, será totalmente gratis, como dije me encanta tu trabajo y espero que no lo dejes, si te interesa por favor contáctame y puedo editar tu trabajo antes que lo postees, claro no es por leerlo antes que nadie claro que no jejeje ares040508@gmail.com este es mi contacto espero que lo consideres como dije no quiero nada a cambio, solo que sigas haciendo un exelente trabajo