/ Eastern Fantasy / Ancient Astral God
摘要
In a world where Martial Cultivation was everything, a young master of the Xie Clan called Xie Tian was born. His mother died during his birth and his father was the clan's patriarch and he mysteriously died a week after Xie Tian's birth. Xie Tian was then given to his uncle who became the next patriarch.
Xie Tian had a special unknown Bloodline, Spirit Root, and Dantain. But he was born with broken meridians meaning he couldn't cultivate the Yuan Qi on earth and so it was impossible for him to follow the path of Martial Cultivation. Due to this inability, his Uncle threw him into a servant home and told him to serve his daughter, and so he was forced to suffer humiliation every day.
But one night after he was beaten to near death a light enveloped his body and a small glowing figure appeared in his mind, a red string of fate attached him to the stars above the sky and he learnt of an ancient cultivation method which was called the Astral Cultivation!
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Good so far, but you should mass release first few chapters so that readers know the basic story atleast. There is nothing given about world background. you can add that as auxiliary chapter .
Its got good starting poimt from this it actually pinpoints its gon be a good novel so i look forward to it and thanks for the novel cuz it aint easy to come up with these ideas so thanks
The story leads same as the ancient godly monarch. Here also there are 9 clouds just as 9 heavenly layers but only mc can practice them. Same as Qin Wentian's he also have the astral meridians.
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