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Sad that this story was dropped I really liked the power of mc I also liked personality needed morrrrre pleeeeeaaaasssseee can u make a my hero academia story I really think u can be a really good author
your sypnosis is really confusing man don't try to be deep but who cares story is terrible................'znxbxnnzbcjdnzndnxbxnxdjiedjdkshsisk
Your writing is really good and your story too. I have read some other Naruto fanfics stories but this is the best I had read. I wish you will continue this story and good luck with writing!😊👍🏻
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It's a good read considering with what is written so far no clue if it is dropped or paused but if it ever starts back up i would continue to keep reading it
Naif MC not good ,full of bull**** dream, too bad it's not good, but thankfully this novel has not continued......This novel is only for weak people
When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!!
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I love the story and cant wait for more and i wonder if gaara and the mcs relationship as siblings is good for them bolth and not a toxic one
dude this novel is the best novel of naruto of this site, i'm really need more, here are you author? i'm cant live without chapters of this novel ;-;
******************PLEASE READ THIS UNTIL THE END AND LIKE! this is my honest full review for this work. thank you********************* ok i say this with a whole heart. THIS SHIT IS DOPE BOI!! ok but seriously now, the author's writing quality is good whit correct grammer and all which we all now that on this site's fanfic section is as rare as phoenix feathers and qilin horns. frequent chaper uploads as in several per week (though the last one was uploaded about a week ago so im hoping its something like a creative block or proper pre-writing of the chapters and not something cataclysmic like this story being DROPPED, no, for real don't). great story development, it sticks to the original plot while allowing new and original content to be smoothly integrated and part of the world which makes it feel like reading the old naruto series but with new spices on the table. the author allows a good pace to the story wth good character building as well as power leveling but without it feeling like the MC is god tier before even graduating the academy. amazing character design with a fersh lookout (personally) on a potentialy powerful MC with great story development for emotional attachment. as for world background and side character development, like i said, the MC is fully integrated to the world around him without feeling detached from it or the company around it. the dialogue between the MC and the other characters or just between characters has a good flow to it and an inner look into their thoughts at the moment for a proper understanding of both sides of the conversation and their thought process. overall, you can see the care the author has put into this work and it shows. this story does not get nearly as muck credit and attention as it deserves and in my eyes this should not be a fanfic and could be its own stand-alone novel. thats how much i appreciate your work here shadowrose13. good job and godspeed.
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A new and refreshing way to experience again naruto. Realy like it till now. You are doing a great job plz continue. I personaly would love to to continue reeding it till the end. So dont leave it half way. XD
I really love how the story progressing. The character is cute and it is a huge bonus that he doesn't really know about the world that much, but has at least some knowledge from his past life. Giving this book full 5 stars and hope for more with the same quality. ***: can't wait for brothers to meet each other
(Up to Chapter 8) This is the most emotionally moving fanfic I've read. I'm looking forward to how things will progress from now on. Keep it up.^^
This is a good novel please continue it. I like this novel because it is not like the other fan fiction the protagonist have a story and progress a bit a bit.
This novel is quite good. The author is not only interactive with his reader but takes there thoughts and suggestions into consideration thus both improving his story and making it quite interesting. I am quite big Naruto fan so I'll only say this that this story has a lot of potential and is walking on the path of OP-ness. So any Naruto fan who like OP protagonist should give it a try atleast. Thanks for the Fanfic👍🏼
This is awesome thank you for writing this...................................................................................................
Sad that this story was dropped I really liked the power of mc I also liked personality needed morrrrre pleeeeeaaaasssseee can u make a my hero academia story I really think u can be a really good author
your sypnosis is really confusing man don't try to be deep but who cares story is terrible................'znxbxnnzbcjdnzndnxbxnxdjiedjdkshsisk
Your writing is really good and your story too. I have read some other Naruto fanfics stories but this is the best I had read. I wish you will continue this story and good luck with writing!😊👍🏻
揭示劇透 It's a good read considering with what is written so far no clue if it is dropped or paused but if it ever starts back up i would continue to keep reading it
Naif MC not good ,full of bull**** dream, too bad it's not good, but thankfully this novel has not continued......This novel is only for weak people
When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!! When is the next update? Please don’t drop this novel!!
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
I love the story and cant wait for more and i wonder if gaara and the mcs relationship as siblings is good for them bolth and not a toxic one
dude this novel is the best novel of naruto of this site, i'm really need more, here are you author? i'm cant live without chapters of this novel ;-;
******************PLEASE READ THIS UNTIL THE END AND LIKE! this is my honest full review for this work. thank you********************* ok i say this with a whole heart. THIS SHIT IS DOPE BOI!! ok but seriously now, the author's writing quality is good whit correct grammer and all which we all now that on this site's fanfic section is as rare as phoenix feathers and qilin horns. frequent chaper uploads as in several per week (though the last one was uploaded about a week ago so im hoping its something like a creative block or proper pre-writing of the chapters and not something cataclysmic like this story being DROPPED, no, for real don't). great story development, it sticks to the original plot while allowing new and original content to be smoothly integrated and part of the world which makes it feel like reading the old naruto series but with new spices on the table. the author allows a good pace to the story wth good character building as well as power leveling but without it feeling like the MC is god tier before even graduating the academy. amazing character design with a fersh lookout (personally) on a potentialy powerful MC with great story development for emotional attachment. as for world background and side character development, like i said, the MC is fully integrated to the world around him without feeling detached from it or the company around it. the dialogue between the MC and the other characters or just between characters has a good flow to it and an inner look into their thoughts at the moment for a proper understanding of both sides of the conversation and their thought process. overall, you can see the care the author has put into this work and it shows. this story does not get nearly as muck credit and attention as it deserves and in my eyes this should not be a fanfic and could be its own stand-alone novel. thats how much i appreciate your work here shadowrose13. good job and godspeed.
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揭示劇透 A new and refreshing way to experience again naruto. Realy like it till now. You are doing a great job plz continue. I personaly would love to to continue reeding it till the end. So dont leave it half way. XD
I really love how the story progressing. The character is cute and it is a huge bonus that he doesn't really know about the world that much, but has at least some knowledge from his past life. Giving this book full 5 stars and hope for more with the same quality. ***: can't wait for brothers to meet each other
(Up to Chapter 8) This is the most emotionally moving fanfic I've read. I'm looking forward to how things will progress from now on. Keep it up.^^
This is a good novel please continue it. I like this novel because it is not like the other fan fiction the protagonist have a story and progress a bit a bit.
This novel is quite good. The author is not only interactive with his reader but takes there thoughts and suggestions into consideration thus both improving his story and making it quite interesting. I am quite big Naruto fan so I'll only say this that this story has a lot of potential and is walking on the path of OP-ness. So any Naruto fan who like OP protagonist should give it a try atleast. Thanks for the Fanfic👍🏼
This is awesome thank you for writing this...................................................................................................