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21.42% journey of a fallen / Chapter 2: talent awaking

章節 2: talent awaking

Gil PV

in the hall with people around the middle

Gil: it's finally time big sis

Elizabeth: yeah hopefully it will be fine

i hope it will be a top class talent so i can get all the girls and build my own harem

(I KNOW RIGHT HE IS F****K 4 years old AND HE HOPE TO BUILD A HAREM ITS JUST MY OWN WISH AND IT WILL NEVER BE SO WHY NOT MAKE IT IN MY OWN NOVLE)

Grandpa he is a handsome looking man but don't let the look miss guide you he is 70 years old and his talent is thunder sword

***(talent can be a sword or nuture elements or a bow etc... and can be both but this is rare and you can have a double that is super rare )

he is one of the 12 guards of the light church

he is super cool and he loves me and my big sis so much to the point that is frighten me

his name is Alex

Alex:come on children let's get this thing over with

says while smiling

both: ok grandpa

Alex: HOW MANY TIMES i need to tell you not to call me grendpa infornt of the people call me call me Grandfather

says angrily while me sis and the crowd laughter

Maddle aged man:ENOUGH!!!

That man is our father he is strict father but overall is kind and care a lot about us

his name is William

William:Elizabeth and Gil come on and let your grandfather see what talent both of you got.

A beautiful middle age women walks in and said

:don't scream old man you frightened me

that women is our mother her name is Della

she is caring and super kind mother she almost never let us get hurt or do anything

Alex:alright this enough Gil Eli come here

both: alright

me and Eil went there and grandpa start to do the awaking first to go is my sis she got super rare sword with a light element

(imagine Excalibur)

Alex:ohhhhh we get a genius

Della:thats my child

William: nice but talent is not everything

Gil:sis you soooooo great

every one was in shock and was happy the hall was full of rejoice and excitement

Eli:thanks Father mother grandpa and lil brother

Eli said while smiling from ear to ear

Alex:now Gil it's your turn

says grendpa passionate

i came to him (no hom) and he activated the cristal

i waited and waited but nothing come out and it was it this moment i know why i had a bad feeling because i don't have a talent


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TKOO TKOO

hi how was the joke part i hope you enjoyed it and if not tell me so i won't do it and this it tnx for reading

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