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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Hello， This is Avarohm Leslie, a representative editor from another platform which focuses on adventurous and high concept genres. I really think your story is intriguing with unique appeal to readers. Sincerely hope that we can have a chance to discuss further cooperation with you. If you are interested, please reach out to me at avarohm_review@outlook.com. Looking forward to introduce more to you. Thanks.
I liked the unique theme of the story (nature vs humanity, mutations/superpowers, etc), and I felt that it has a lot of future potential, if the author doesn't end up dropping the series. I would have liked some more character development, as some of the characters (Kip's family) seem bland.
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Great story development. I like how bits of facts and world building are interspersed through out the chapters. I personally like it as it doesn't feel like a web novel, more like I am reading something off of my kindle. I look forward to seeing how this story develops! You have my vote to keep writing!
This really needs to be made into a movie already! I would happily go through about 3 tubs of popcorn. First things first, though, get me to the end of this story, but, take your time, I've enjoyed the ride.
Really enjoyed the unique world you have created. You set scenes very well. Looking forward to reading more about Kip and Yogi! Keep it coming.
I like it please keep updating :) ****************************************************************************************************************************************************
Well if anybody can give it a 5-star review, it would be me right? :) I wrote and edited this over a week to submit it in time for the #48 Evolution contest. If it is well received, I will make regular updates to it, if not. It was a good writing exercise if nothing else :).
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Get Your Book Hardcover Published & Win $50,000 Hi! Over 11k authors joined SWA I, and had won over $200,000. This time we have launched SWA II, focusing on entertaining novels and raising the first prize to $50,000! It is time to monetize your book! We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access of winning the grand prizes and hardcover publishing. Imagine your book is put on the shelf with a best seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can participate. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves way much more. Join us now! Please visit https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy for more information or contact:emily9213@outlook.com
Hello， This is Avarohm Leslie, a representative editor from another platform which focuses on adventurous and high concept genres. I really think your story is intriguing with unique appeal to readers. Sincerely hope that we can have a chance to discuss further cooperation with you. If you are interested, please reach out to me at avarohm_review@outlook.com. Looking forward to introduce more to you. Thanks.
I liked the unique theme of the story (nature vs humanity, mutations/superpowers, etc), and I felt that it has a lot of future potential, if the author doesn't end up dropping the series. I would have liked some more character development, as some of the characters (Kip's family) seem bland.
揭示劇透 Great story development. I like how bits of facts and world building are interspersed through out the chapters. I personally like it as it doesn't feel like a web novel, more like I am reading something off of my kindle. I look forward to seeing how this story develops! You have my vote to keep writing!
This really needs to be made into a movie already! I would happily go through about 3 tubs of popcorn. First things first, though, get me to the end of this story, but, take your time, I've enjoyed the ride.
Really enjoyed the unique world you have created. You set scenes very well. Looking forward to reading more about Kip and Yogi! Keep it coming.
I like it please keep updating :) ****************************************************************************************************************************************************
Well if anybody can give it a 5-star review, it would be me right? :) I wrote and edited this over a week to submit it in time for the #48 Evolution contest. If it is well received, I will make regular updates to it, if not. It was a good writing exercise if nothing else :).
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.