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I won't read this but 5 stars to that title 5555🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔
Amazing!! I don’t normally like to read stories like this but you do a really good job with developing the characters and giving them personality.
I love this book, great content, don't read in public. ;) Genuinely though, excellent work, I love this book so much. For a fanfiction, the work is surprisingly well done.
Its not done but I enjoy reading it so far its great doesn't update often but its still an amazing read I would recommend it if you're looking for a fanfic
I loved this, its so good. I can’t wait for more updates. The story line is very good. So I’m very happy with the story, I honestly think certain parts could use a little more detail other then that I love it
Love the story read it for the second time. Love it as much as the first time.[img=update][img=recommend] hope for there to be more soon. But no need to rush with everything that's happened.
I won't read this but 5 stars to that title 5555🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔🕔
Amazing!! I don’t normally like to read stories like this but you do a really good job with developing the characters and giving them personality.
I love this book, great content, don't read in public. ;) Genuinely though, excellent work, I love this book so much. For a fanfiction, the work is surprisingly well done.
Its not done but I enjoy reading it so far its great doesn't update often but its still an amazing read I would recommend it if you're looking for a fanfic
I loved this, its so good. I can’t wait for more updates. The story line is very good. So I’m very happy with the story, I honestly think certain parts could use a little more detail other then that I love it
Love the story read it for the second time. Love it as much as the first time.[img=update][img=recommend] hope for there to be more soon. But no need to rush with everything that's happened.