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Author here, being shameless again. I'm trying to hit two birds with one stone here. The two things I wanna say are 1.) The story is not a harem. I don't know why someone tagged it like that. Haha 2.) I regretted giving my novel four stars before so I'm now taking this chance to give it a 5 hahaha THANKS BTW FOR READING THIS REVIEW AND STORY! <3 GUYS! XD
The story is quite interesting. This is an x-rated story. The description of the incident is very detail and words used are harsh and not suitable for some who cannot handle it. The story line portrays what is happening somewhere in the real world that other cannot see. It's dirty but it's reality. Some people are unfortunate to be in that life.
scum male cheats fl and sleeps with others. fl is treated like a whore by him while she is pure and chaste for him. hypocrisy to the fullest.
its a decent read but the novel is surely not for weak hearts like the author mentioned. i think author is biased to ML most than the fl. she keeps on telling us that ml has a lot *** experiences with several women but likes the fl. he treats her as his bed mate. i felt bad reading about how fl is treated without respect. also fl is pure and naive while ml is a used garbage and he is shamelessly possessive. can't fl be possessive as well and have a virgin male lead, can only ml have a virgin while he is not?
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this is one of the best read book . really in love with the book. the story is amazing and beautiful. thaer ***, suspense, thrill, and drama. I'm kinda i love with it.
Ughh i just dont like the mc it's like this u know she is too dumb and stupid to mske full use of the system she's toooooo NAIVE!!!!
Very interesting. That Daddy of hers needs to steal her heart before she has second thought 😂 there both meant for each other. They kill well not really kindaaa, uuhm addicted to each other, etc. I’mma keep quite. Can’t wait to keep reading!
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Okay I love this story Love the content Love the malicious Intent Love the characters Love that they are in high school And they are this raw Keep it up author Even though I still trying to Understand who a system is.... Hehehe
I like this novel Lol even though I fail to understand If a real system As such could exist But it's a very funny And crazy ***** novel That could keep you Going Good work author
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Interesting development of the story, with the addiction of loves discovered and become stronger, mysteries and above all the desire to become stronger driven by the fear of losing loved ones despite the enormous sacrifices to be made.
The story is good i love it all but ffs the entire novel is wasted by the stupidity of the FL so idiot and such a waste i don't think i can handle it anymore i survive all this bull**** of immoral thing but can't stand the sutpidity of the FL gg Mr.Author !
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It was wierd at first because i thought the premise the book revolved around was wierd and not very well thought out but soon i found my eyes glued to the screen reading more
worst novel! MC is the dumbest. she is very folish. there are other people with the same ability as her. she is not unique at all. I don't see why she is the MC. does all the female MC have to be naive and foolish? instead of upgrading her stretgh and intelligent attribute she wastes all the points in study skill. why? attributes are more important than any of those skills or devices right now. and to think that there are other people with the same system as her. she doesn't deserve to be mc.
I don't know maybe it's just me but the content as the story goes on becomes boring, maybe it started at 150ish or 200ish+ chapters (?) I'm not sure coz I discontinued reading it two months ago. The excitement or the hook whatever you call it is no longer there. I stop reading this coz i already lost the enthusiasm. Hopefully, the content is not boring anymore when I decided to read it again coz I really like this story and I want to finish reading this.
Very nice character and world building. The story contains a lot of twist and unpredictable plot. Initially, I thought this is just a simple concept but as I read more chapters, it surprisingly unfolds a well thought story line.
I'll recommend this novel to both the male and female lovers of web novel. Keep up the good work author👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊 I'll recommend this novel to both the male and female lovers of web novel. Keep up the good work author👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊
badly wishing it updates regularly again. that's all...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Nice story👍...hope both MC's will end up together no matter what will happen coz I live seeing them together hehehe😀😀😀😀💃💃💃💃💃👏👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Ugh, I can’t get enough. Each characters seem to have their personality’s and that’s what makes the story come to life. The story was slow at developing but well worth the wait!
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nice story .... with amaaazing content 😏 - good english ✅ - hot and protective ML 😍✅ - till now no boring b*tches who scheme against the FL ✅😊 - no genius FL ✅ (I hate the too overpowerd FLs 😂) - very funny (system comments) ✅ —> All in all, just great ☺️
Author here, being shameless again. I'm trying to hit two birds with one stone here. The two things I wanna say are 1.) The story is not a harem. I don't know why someone tagged it like that. Haha 2.) I regretted giving my novel four stars before so I'm now taking this chance to give it a 5 hahaha THANKS BTW FOR READING THIS REVIEW AND STORY! <3 GUYS! XD
The story is quite interesting. This is an x-rated story. The description of the incident is very detail and words used are harsh and not suitable for some who cannot handle it. The story line portrays what is happening somewhere in the real world that other cannot see. It's dirty but it's reality. Some people are unfortunate to be in that life.
scum male cheats fl and sleeps with others. fl is treated like a whore by him while she is pure and chaste for him. hypocrisy to the fullest.
its a decent read but the novel is surely not for weak hearts like the author mentioned. i think author is biased to ML most than the fl. she keeps on telling us that ml has a lot *** experiences with several women but likes the fl. he treats her as his bed mate. i felt bad reading about how fl is treated without respect. also fl is pure and naive while ml is a used garbage and he is shamelessly possessive. can't fl be possessive as well and have a virgin male lead, can only ml have a virgin while he is not?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this is one of the best read book . really in love with the book. the story is amazing and beautiful. thaer ***, suspense, thrill, and drama. I'm kinda i love with it.
Ughh i just dont like the mc it's like this u know she is too dumb and stupid to mske full use of the system she's toooooo NAIVE!!!!
Very interesting. That Daddy of hers needs to steal her heart before she has second thought 😂 there both meant for each other. They kill well not really kindaaa, uuhm addicted to each other, etc. I’mma keep quite. Can’t wait to keep reading!
揭示劇透 Okay I love this story Love the content Love the malicious Intent Love the characters Love that they are in high school And they are this raw Keep it up author Even though I still trying to Understand who a system is.... Hehehe
I like this novel Lol even though I fail to understand If a real system As such could exist But it's a very funny And crazy ***** novel That could keep you Going Good work author
¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯¯\_(☯෴☯)_/¯
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Interesting development of the story, with the addiction of loves discovered and become stronger, mysteries and above all the desire to become stronger driven by the fear of losing loved ones despite the enormous sacrifices to be made.
The story is good i love it all but ffs the entire novel is wasted by the stupidity of the FL so idiot and such a waste i don't think i can handle it anymore i survive all this bull**** of immoral thing but can't stand the sutpidity of the FL gg Mr.Author !
thumbs up ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..........................epic plot .............................................................................................................................
It was wierd at first because i thought the premise the book revolved around was wierd and not very well thought out but soon i found my eyes glued to the screen reading more
worst novel! MC is the dumbest. she is very folish. there are other people with the same ability as her. she is not unique at all. I don't see why she is the MC. does all the female MC have to be naive and foolish? instead of upgrading her stretgh and intelligent attribute she wastes all the points in study skill. why? attributes are more important than any of those skills or devices right now. and to think that there are other people with the same system as her. she doesn't deserve to be mc.
I don't know maybe it's just me but the content as the story goes on becomes boring, maybe it started at 150ish or 200ish+ chapters (?) I'm not sure coz I discontinued reading it two months ago. The excitement or the hook whatever you call it is no longer there. I stop reading this coz i already lost the enthusiasm. Hopefully, the content is not boring anymore when I decided to read it again coz I really like this story and I want to finish reading this.
Very nice character and world building. The story contains a lot of twist and unpredictable plot. Initially, I thought this is just a simple concept but as I read more chapters, it surprisingly unfolds a well thought story line.
I'll recommend this novel to both the male and female lovers of web novel. Keep up the good work author👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊 I'll recommend this novel to both the male and female lovers of web novel. Keep up the good work author👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊
badly wishing it updates regularly again. that's all...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Nice story👍...hope both MC's will end up together no matter what will happen coz I live seeing them together hehehe😀😀😀😀💃💃💃💃💃👏👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Ugh, I can’t get enough. Each characters seem to have their personality’s and that’s what makes the story come to life. The story was slow at developing but well worth the wait!
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nice story .... with amaaazing content 😏 - good english ✅ - hot and protective ML 😍✅ - till now no boring b*tches who scheme against the FL ✅😊 - no genius FL ✅ (I hate the too overpowerd FLs 😂) - very funny (system comments) ✅ —> All in all, just great ☺️