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Naruto Uzumaki arrives at the marvel universe distraught as his people were killed by his enemies. ( This is my first try at writing so I hope you can help me improve and please review to show me my mistakesand help me improve.)
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Very nice. I love it. love Naruto/Marvel crossover stories. Like Patronus Maximus which everyone should read. I hope you don't drop this story. ......................................
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I didn't know you could write a review yourself. So here I am giving it full stars. Feels kinda weird. Hope you guys comment to give me reactions to help me improve my faults.
It's a nice story. The only thing is, misspelled words do detract from the story. It would be a recommendation of mine to try finding someone to help you edit...