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my mate is a superstar

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作者: shezz1

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have you ever heard of werewolves ??
humans who can turn into wolves and have various powers with strength!
cool right?
but not for a girl who lost all hope in life and thinks death is better than living...

he is the king
dangerous and powerful
rules over 50000 wolves and stays in the hearts of millions
but secretly he is a softy
always wishing to have a sweet life with his mate just like his parents.

A cute love story of a demon king who is a complete fluffy bear to his wife and pampers her to the end of the world

A Scene from chapter 27 ( Male lead's POV )

" I told you to not drink much " I tried to be angry at her... keyword 'tried'

" this is the first time I am so happy...teddy "

TEDDY who ??

" Echo who am I? " I ask her turning her towards me

" you are my fluffy teddy " she replies

"who am I Echo? " I repeat again

" The one who truly loves me, " she says with a drunk cute smile

her cheeks are pink and her eyes are watery

"The one who will always keep me safe "

" the one who I am not worthy for " this broke my heart

I held her cheeks and kissed her forehead, her eyes, her nose, her cheeks, and finally her lips...

" You are the only one who is worthy of me"



Author's Note
English is not my first language, neither did I edit my novel ... try 2-3 chapter so you can consider whether it's readable.
hope you ignore the mistakes
and This is inspired by wattpad


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Anonymoussssssssss

Before you attack me for the 1 star, I can genuinely say I did try to read this story. I really did. Not only was it not my cup of tea, but in fact, I’m sure anyone with eyes and a logical mindset with agree. This is definitely an atrocity to grammar. To the English language. To English literature. For goodness sake, what are “warewolves”? In fact, here’s even more (copied and pasted): “Did i really speak about my mate so much.. oh gosh i am acting to girl when i was supposed to be manly .. but still i can't thinking about her makes my mind go giddy ... taking her to my bed and doing things with her to make her cry my name .. " Your such a pervert " my wolf said " don't say you are not " " only to my mate " he replied with a growl " me too wolfy" What? Seriously? Can I throw a dictionary in your direction, as well as basic punctuation that’s taught to an elementary-aged student? Author claims to be 17, but even my seven year old sister can write better and actually knows what to write lmao Even garbage doesn’t describe this story. No plot, no grammar, no originality. Just call it a BAD copy and paste of other cliché stories on wattpad, okay? Please, for the love of God, do not bring such nonsensical sh¡t to WN. Stick to your wattpad, okay? There, you can find your alphas, bad boys, stepbrothers, and billionaires. For anyone of you who thinks I’m hating, I’m not. I’m genuinely disgusted. To hate would be to hate an emotion... something that I am not even willing to waste on this awful “book”.

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PlantIsSafe

I can't even- D*mn. The grammar is so awful it is impossible to read the story without cringing every second. "Warewolves" wtf is warewolves. What even. Have you ever heard of capitalization? I don't think so. The fact that it's a typical wattpad werewolf type of story doesn't make things better. Webnovel is legit becoming another Wattpad. Disappointed af.

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DIMPLEQUEEN101

I absolutely love this novel so so so much It is so nice to read a ****** minded novel where falling in love happens in an instant .. Better than frustrating novels I just noticed author started the novel two days ago and she already got many views and likes hope she does well in the future also And i also loved the side stories as other review said ALL THE BEST AUTHOR 🙃

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kate1221

This a novel which would never make you frustrated nor make you bored .. it's just right It has just begun so let's see how it goes.. I really sugest you read this.. Its really nice Author has added many funny scenes to .. which are like behind the scene .those are damn funny 😂😂

5yr
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greenlove11

I Love the story and the author so much It is really nice I don't know why people gave 1 star here.. but i honestly don't give a fu*k about the punctuation when the story is good .. I am happy when i read it and that's good enough for me ..

5yr
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greesh

Really really loved it.. A bit of grammatical errors are there. Except that loved it. Funny and cute. Especially when author has crush on second Male lead. And their story is so fucking adorable. I loved their story more Author did a good job using cringe lines to seduce the second ML .. especially the proposal scene is couple goals.. but who proposes in a washroom?? Still love this crazy author.

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La_Light

Nice story! The style of writing is way different from other novels. It's good to read and can have a try. The way author and the male lead interacts in between is so nice and keeps the story lively. Looking for more developments in the story.

5yr
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hiddenaccount

I am not suppose to put a review but still did .. as i am a hidden account Good story Good beginning nice humour .. not the best Waiting for romance Chapter titles are bang on good I will check out the other book .. Few review is true about yhe the punctuation but who the hell cares about it anyway

5yr
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Lady_Ale

So yeahh!!! After reading ur novel(confession) I decided to read this tooo......and I really loved the way Ash treats echo💯🔥and I would love to read ur other novels too but then I dunno if there are other novels of urs other than these two 🤔 I hope you keep writing such cute cute stories 💞 and yeah ,I'm an Indian💃🙈 you see I got so excited when I you told that you were Indian 😂but then I dunno why !!! Lastly , ur novels made my day💘

5yr
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mahekmehta104

Love the story and i just started reading very mind blowing just love it👍👌💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💖💕💖💕💕💕💕💖💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💖💕💖💕

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Bilivia_Rose

I love the idea of the book and what the author did to portray it and the story line is really interesting. But then there's the Character thing so mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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mmara
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Got lots of rooms for improvement. Some novels take it slow. Hopefully this one wont be left behind. I will keep tab on this novel. Work harder writer 😊😊

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Iris_Lee_

I love the storyline and the extra chapters which are really funny. The character are amazing the drama is also really exciting. I would suggest this to anyone who enjoys a cheesy romance and lots of drama.

5yr
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sommiefrance

I so love the story...the story line is so on point..and if u are looking for a teasing, heart melting novel..go for this...the author also removes unnecessary story line...I love...thank u author

5yr
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XiaoYuFu

This is a clear example of how a cliche baseplot can turn into something that is totally unexpected, and since I have like to make more words to make a review of something that can be said in something short, I am rambling here. Sometimes, almost always, it is better to be concise instead of just saying thing over and over again. 😆😆

5yr
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elenoraella

I gave five stars only beacause os Ashton He is soo cute . I really wished such men existed , story is also good. Author is uploading 3-4 chapters daily and makes us laugh between every 3 chapters with side stories Its a bomb TRY it full on

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greesh

Bring it on warewolf .. Have high expectations if this But i want to say i liked " incomplete life " more The title gave the story a misterous vibe This is good too Author can improve But heck this story deserves a five star... You don't like it don't read it .. author fighting P.s even i like kpop and kdrama

5yr
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sweetbeauty

Its a good story Not the best .. but can always improve Read authors other book before coming herw loved it a lot. Hope to read this I recommend to give it a try I liked it you may

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lisichengMRS

This literally made me calmer today after reading 99th divorce .. Not the best... But still Really good Guys give it a try .. It is worth it. Just don't understand why she is getting abused Maybe there is more to come which will explain the story better Happy happy More updates author

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vinayrao

I liked wolfs from the beginning.. Wolfs are so cool .. Warewolf would be cooler I always liked warewolfs more even in twilight i liked the wolf more Sorry edward fans Not happening Giving it a try , liked it so far

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