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The novel is hilarious and the characters are very well and uniquely designed! A few mistakes here and there but it does not break the flow. Overall it's a nice story! :)
A light novel indeed! 👍 First of all, this novel does not lack sense of humor.(Its rich of it. I laughed) 👏 Second, it's just hilarious.! Lastly, it's truly hilarious. Haha It might be more funny and cool to read if correct grammar will be observe. (e.g. Correct spelling, punctuation mark and quotation mark for conversation.) Also, it might be more clearer if there are additional details like the reaction of a characters when they chat/converse/argue... Proofreading is highly recommended.. Overall, this is a cool novel. Keep it up.! 👍
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I read some chapters of your story and really liked it. The characters were very diverse and defined. The imagery was up to the point as I could imagine the characters as mentioned. Overall, a good read and definitely recommendable.
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I think it is a nice read even though there is quite a few spelling errors. The characters are interesting and the story has easy going humor. When giving descriptions it takes a decent imagination. So that needs work. Otherwise if you like a really fast paced story then this could be one of the few I’d recommend. It’s a decent story.
The novel is hilarious and the characters are very well and uniquely designed! A few mistakes here and there but it does not break the flow. Overall it's a nice story! :)
A light novel indeed! 👍 First of all, this novel does not lack sense of humor.(Its rich of it. I laughed) 👏 Second, it's just hilarious.! Lastly, it's truly hilarious. Haha It might be more funny and cool to read if correct grammar will be observe. (e.g. Correct spelling, punctuation mark and quotation mark for conversation.) Also, it might be more clearer if there are additional details like the reaction of a characters when they chat/converse/argue... Proofreading is highly recommended.. Overall, this is a cool novel. Keep it up.! 👍
Like the story can't say anything else and the characters are great ajajsbdjsjabzoh xsphzvszohsvzpha sph sxphaz aphzbaajzv luv it very much so keep it up author-kun
I read some chapters of your story and really liked it. The characters were very diverse and defined. The imagery was up to the point as I could imagine the characters as mentioned. Overall, a good read and definitely recommendable.
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I think it is a nice read even though there is quite a few spelling errors. The characters are interesting and the story has easy going humor. When giving descriptions it takes a decent imagination. So that needs work. Otherwise if you like a really fast paced story then this could be one of the few I’d recommend. It’s a decent story.