摘要
She opened her eyes to an endless cycle of pain, tragedy, and love.
Every time she tried finding a loophole, she ended up dead.
A man, who she always relied on, became her lover, fiancee, husband, and killer, slowly surrounding her, and choking her with insanity until her last moments.
And he would tell her, as they were dying, “We will always be together.”
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LOVE THIS! it is full of mysteries and thriller, and to be honest, at first I was hesitant to read it, but I'm in love now and glad that I gave it a chance.
Brilliant novel! It's interesting thriller worth reading, I finished reading all existing chapters to date. Diana is a fighter. Every chapter is a cliff hanger you will be constantly guessing what will happen next. It's very promising! I found some errors though, but once edited properly, this novel will shine like gold! Good job author!
The story has an interesting premise that has you wondering just what would happen in the future. Looking forward to seeing how the plot flows with this novel. There are a bit of grammatical errors and places where the sentence construction could improve. But otherwise, it's an interesting read.
Interesting story that makes you want to continue to read and find out why this is happening to her. Writing could use some improvement but you can still get a pretty good idea of what’s going on and why so far. I also like her fiancée name Ellis.
Thanks for checking out/reading this story! If you still haven't, please do give it a chance ♥ I'm open to criticism and sharing your ideas and thoughts with me. There will be fantasy elements in this alongside mystery and many more, it will be an adventure in a unique world and some twisted love!
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : Butterfly Effect
- 1 The Edge of the Beginning 5 years ago
- 2 Her Identity 5 years ago
- 3 The Three Patterns 5 years ago
- 4 The Manipulation Symphony #1 5 years ago
- 5 The Manipulation Symphony #2 5 years ago
- 6 The Manipulation Symphony #3 5 years ago
- 7 The Manipulation Symphony #4 5 years ago
- 8 The Hidden Master #1 5 years ago
- 9 The Hidden Master #2 5 years ago
- 10 All Surrounded #1 5 years ago
- 11 All Surrounded #2 5 years ago
- 12 All Surrounded #3 5 years ago
- 13 The Betrayal #1 5 years ago
- 14 The Betrayal #2 5 years ago
- 15 The Edge of the End #1 5 years ago
- 16 The Edge of the End #2 5 years ago
- 17 The Edge of the End #3 5 years ago
- 18 The Edge of the End #4 5 years ago
I haven't read much mystery thriller novels on this site, so this definitely stands out to me, even though the trope of being stuck in a time loop has definitely been used before. I enjoy how the writing reflects the MC's thoughts and feelings really well (good close 3rd person POV). My one critique would be that there are several grammar errors concerning tense (ex. switching from "will xxxx" to "xxxx-ed" if that makes sense?), but that's about it. Overall, I'm interested to see how the mystery unravels!