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So what are you doing now 👶 girl and she was like I was in a while to find out if the weather was so much fun with that one of those days when we were in a while back and I have no idea
My words done all left is tears..... Just hope you are safe and healthy dear author. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
So far the story is good. The plot in each chapter is well laid up, situatiner is detailed but not boring. Keep it up. Looking forward for updates to come.
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Hi author, l love this story so far. It's been a while since you have updated. Looking forward for more chapter updates soon. Thank you🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Dear author I love love this book its funny and interesting and I can't wait to read more about our male and female lead and the face slapping they will give
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I just saw this story while i ws browsing for a new read..i immediatley saved it but i was so saddened when i noticed that afte the 40th chapters there was no update anymore..your novel is really good..i hope you will update soon..
It is an amazing novel I liked it alot aside from the grammar mistakes and the late of updates it's incredible. ❤ I hope that you would come back strongly to make up for the months of absence.👍
Love this story. Sadly, it has not been updated in 5 months. Disappointed as a reader to be left hanging. I understand that authors and translators have lives that sometimes get In the way of continuing but to not bother to let the readers know what is going on is upsetting.
The story is interesting but i find it written poorly... the author keeps on writing unnecessary flashbacks... i find the mc a bit stupid since she's been given a chance to be reborn and correct the regrets she has... she should have at least a plan on how she live on her 2nd chance...
It's really nice webnovel.i enjoyed it alot.but it's updating speed is very bad.slow update and no update is just waste of emotions. I think webnovel should only give access to those novels whose updating speed is normal
The story is good.... But it would be great if you found an editor to correct the grammar mistakes that are everywhere. It becomes tiring trying to read a story while mentally correcting the mistakes made by the writer... The use of he/she is also confused here.... I don't understand whether the character is male or female.. overall the story is great!! And though there's a lot of mistakes I'm trying to read through the mistakes chapter by chapter
Thank you for publishing this novel. I hope you can publish more chapter as soon as possible after your work is done. All the best in the future and all the best in finishing the circumstances that you had.
The story so far is awesome and quite interesting but the author hasn't updated for last 3 months even the author's note about updating then after has been 2 months. It feels like the author has abandoned the story
Please don't stop this story dear author. Your story plot is really interesting. Believe in your story and we as readers will always support you from behind. And you guys should really this book a chance. The plot is interesting and very good. It's romantic at the same time especially the early chapter. Although it is short but it is sure worth to read.
I want to congratulate the author for very interesting plot. Making the leading actress encounter some drama in her make me wants to read the story more as will on how our leading man in the story will help our leading lady to overcome the obstacle to find a wonderful life with a family... . I want to know what illios will do to make shine's life perfect... I support the family smith.. What a beautiful family they have... GOOD JOB AUTHOR
I really like this story... Its sad as well as romantic... And more over I like the hero also... H is charming handsome and so supportive... I mean he lived her from past five years but still didn't tell her...and gilloow her like her shadow... Its absolutely remarkable... And the girl poor she...her family is really selfish one...first they used her and throw her like a tissue paper... But now I'm too much excited yo see revnhe game...he will surely punish all the people who play with His Shona's innocence...
Author comeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Masssssssssssssssss releaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleassseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
It bezt story I have read. I hope you can post as many chapters as you can after you are in your thought. all the best in the future. and thank you for writing the story! 😘
Ndjdjdjjdrhdhd is my bdjdjdjdjry is a day for Christmas and Christmas Day was the day we go to school and I have to school today I am going to go home now I am leaving my
揭示劇透 It's nice story with the attracting title.This story is also remarkable though as it depict the discrimination which practice in our daily life.
I really like the story... It is so interesting that makes me intrigue why does her parents choose her sister than her...and why and how did they meet that makes them become bestfriend///her number 1 in speed dial...
I like your novel but your grammar and punctuations should be fixed. I wish I can be your editor :blobsadreach: I can do it for free if I had free time, just give me your email.
The story was good and interesting to read... Please more updates for more chapters, author... I didn't even started to read but I'm already starting to like it...
It's nice story which depict reality in some ways.the novel name is quite intriguing and suitable for the story.but it should update instantly.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's sad what her family did to her. All she wants is there love but now she has A FAMILY ones that love her and want to see her happy and will do anything to protect her cause she brought back the son's sun back or light back to his world.
So what are you doing now 👶 girl and she was like I was in a while to find out if the weather was so much fun with that one of those days when we were in a while back and I have no idea
My words done all left is tears..... Just hope you are safe and healthy dear author. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
So far the story is good. The plot in each chapter is well laid up, situatiner is detailed but not boring. Keep it up. Looking forward for updates to come.
🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏
Hi author, l love this story so far. It's been a while since you have updated. Looking forward for more chapter updates soon. Thank you🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Dear author I love love this book its funny and interesting and I can't wait to read more about our male and female lead and the face slapping they will give
😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
I just saw this story while i ws browsing for a new read..i immediatley saved it but i was so saddened when i noticed that afte the 40th chapters there was no update anymore..your novel is really good..i hope you will update soon..
It is an amazing novel I liked it alot aside from the grammar mistakes and the late of updates it's incredible. ❤ I hope that you would come back strongly to make up for the months of absence.👍
Love this story. Sadly, it has not been updated in 5 months. Disappointed as a reader to be left hanging. I understand that authors and translators have lives that sometimes get In the way of continuing but to not bother to let the readers know what is going on is upsetting.
The story is interesting but i find it written poorly... the author keeps on writing unnecessary flashbacks... i find the mc a bit stupid since she's been given a chance to be reborn and correct the regrets she has... she should have at least a plan on how she live on her 2nd chance...
It's really nice webnovel.i enjoyed it alot.but it's updating speed is very bad.slow update and no update is just waste of emotions. I think webnovel should only give access to those novels whose updating speed is normal
The story is good.... But it would be great if you found an editor to correct the grammar mistakes that are everywhere. It becomes tiring trying to read a story while mentally correcting the mistakes made by the writer... The use of he/she is also confused here.... I don't understand whether the character is male or female.. overall the story is great!! And though there's a lot of mistakes I'm trying to read through the mistakes chapter by chapter
Thank you for publishing this novel. I hope you can publish more chapter as soon as possible after your work is done. All the best in the future and all the best in finishing the circumstances that you had.
The story so far is awesome and quite interesting but the author hasn't updated for last 3 months even the author's note about updating then after has been 2 months. It feels like the author has abandoned the story
Please don't stop this story dear author. Your story plot is really interesting. Believe in your story and we as readers will always support you from behind. And you guys should really this book a chance. The plot is interesting and very good. It's romantic at the same time especially the early chapter. Although it is short but it is sure worth to read.
I want to congratulate the author for very interesting plot. Making the leading actress encounter some drama in her make me wants to read the story more as will on how our leading man in the story will help our leading lady to overcome the obstacle to find a wonderful life with a family... . I want to know what illios will do to make shine's life perfect... I support the family smith.. What a beautiful family they have... GOOD JOB AUTHOR
I really like this story... Its sad as well as romantic... And more over I like the hero also... H is charming handsome and so supportive... I mean he lived her from past five years but still didn't tell her...and gilloow her like her shadow... Its absolutely remarkable... And the girl poor she...her family is really selfish one...first they used her and throw her like a tissue paper... But now I'm too much excited yo see revnhe game...he will surely punish all the people who play with His Shona's innocence...
Author comeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Masssssssssssssssss releaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleassseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plesseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
It bezt story I have read. I hope you can post as many chapters as you can after you are in your thought. all the best in the future. and thank you for writing the story! 😘
Ndjdjdjjdrhdhd is my bdjdjdjdjry is a day for Christmas and Christmas Day was the day we go to school and I have to school today I am going to go home now I am leaving my
揭示劇透 It's nice story with the attracting title.This story is also remarkable though as it depict the discrimination which practice in our daily life.
I really like the story... It is so interesting that makes me intrigue why does her parents choose her sister than her...and why and how did they meet that makes them become bestfriend///her number 1 in speed dial...
I like your novel but your grammar and punctuations should be fixed. I wish I can be your editor :blobsadreach: I can do it for free if I had free time, just give me your email.
The story was good and interesting to read... Please more updates for more chapters, author... I didn't even started to read but I'm already starting to like it...
It's nice story which depict reality in some ways.the novel name is quite intriguing and suitable for the story.but it should update instantly.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's sad what her family did to her. All she wants is there love but now she has A FAMILY ones that love her and want to see her happy and will do anything to protect her cause she brought back the son's sun back or light back to his world.