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I loved the magic and system. The rest of the story, not so much. A lot of the impactful scenes like someone dying or an attack on the kingdom were glossed over and never described that vividly. In the end, nothing even matters because of magic. Even the action and final battle, opponent uses X move, MC: I actually prepared for this off screen so it doesn’t work. This pattern really makes the MC a Gary Stu that can just pull any solution out of his pocket for any situation without much development. I still read through the whole story and enjoyed it, but it didn’t feel as impactful as I should’ve been.
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
The author does a great job with the character development and character interactions. When the main character is a child and interacting with the femail lead there is no romance which makes the story better because they are children and need to be children.
I really love this peace of art. I'm just sad that I only found it now. The characters are more than perfect and I'm looking forward to read more work of this author ^^
One of the best books on webnovel free good and literally no downside I have found too this book If you haven't read it do so it's great only one I've reread so far
I'm enjoying this more than I would have thought. I feel like it'd be better if the mc were 17-18 rather than 7-8, he could still expect to be dismissed because of his age by most. I really like the GURPS based magic system, it brings me back.
Best story I have read in a long time. The only story that I think is perfect for all to read. Had some few spelling mistakes. Paints a vivid picture in my mind when reading. And the character design is perfect.
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I find this story a very good read but has a couple of things that some people might not like. I advice you to READ the book and not take my points to heart. 1)I saw some people comenting early on that they were annoyned the MC was too young. It picks up pace mid story so dont worry about it too much 2)This is something that was briefly questioned about in the story but the MC and other main cast aint no goody twoshoes and does some morally questionable actions layer on. 3)This story has tragedy in it. More than a decent amount of it. But the author did put in some heartwarming slice of life drama in it to ease the tragedy. All in all its a good read and i advice to to read it.
its a very nice story. i like it that is sure and does not drag over 2000+ chapters like other stupid authors. the idea is very well defined. the ending is very nice and the epilogue chapters are a very nice bonus. plus the last one with flying swords hahahaha overall: you really have to read it
Excelente ,me encantaron los personajes el desarrollo de cada uno y como nunca olvidaste a ningún personaje,siempre apareciendo mencionandolo. No sabes lo feliz que fui no fue tedioso ni nada por el estilo y no sabes lo agradecida que estoy como desarrollaste el amor de Joseph y Stella yo tenía miedo que tenga muchísimo dramas o tendría que esperar mil años te juro que lloro de felicidad como lo desarrollaste y se sintió el amor tan profundo 😍 💘 dios es bellísimo sería genial que lo hagan un manhwa ya me lo puedo imaginar Fui tan feliz gracias por todo ❤️
Muito bom, Tudo perfeito mesmo 10 de 10 Se pudesse avaliaria com ainda mais So achei que uns trechos foram um pouco corridos, mas nao e nada que atrapalhe na Obra
Overall this is one of the best books I've ever read on Webnovel and I sincerely recommend that you at least give it a go if you enjoy books with lots of magic and overpowered mc
This is a fun story that follows a reincarnated person who has access to a powerful system. The growth speed of this story is a little fast but well written. overall a great story
Muito Bom de vdd, faz tempo q Nao leio uma historia boa do comeco ao fim . A qualidade é sim permanente, apensar de deixar uns arcos secundarios abertos no fiNal
I loved everything about the book the storytelling the world and character building the sheer comedy of the main character talking to his system and and the times the system was confused at how he did things honestly if there were more books like this I would love to read them and i somewhat wish that there were more books to follow this one like an abuse of magic two and three there's so much that can be done like him becoming a god because of the people worshipping him there's also the effect of him going against the gods that are enemy's with him as well as the church groups author I give you full marks for this book and hope you can make more like it
honestly one of the best books I've ever read on this website and the ending felt so complete and concluding something I haven't had the privilege of witnessing after spending most of my time reading books on the site
An excellent novel! If you like a well-developed romance (single, not harem!) this is a nice novel to read. There are also amazing fights and a very interesting development of magic and 'laws'. While there's the kingdom-building part that some people dislike, the author managed to work in an interesting approach thanks to how the plot developed. So, while we can see it all over the novel, isn't in the way of the other parts, but well blended. One of the parts I disliked in the novel till a certain point, was the MC age being too young for no apparent reason, but since helped meaningless talks about romance and stuff off the novel while the MC grew his strength turned really nice since we had a nice time-skip with the MC and heroine together.
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Cool story..............................................................mmmmm.................................................................
beautiful amazing astounding bewildering breathtaking extraordinary impressive marvelous miraculous spectacular staggering startling striking stunning stupefying stupendous wonderful wondrous etc etc...it's just a amazing magic novel with a good magic system deserving the full score i gave it. it's a bit bumpy at the start but you can SEE the improvements in quality from good to top notch
This is an amazing story, there are a couple sPots about half way where it almost Seems to become an OP story and Then within the next chapter you see that its required and earned!!!!
im only on ep 30 but i love the story: the system isn't overpowerd, someting like kill 1 enemy reward infinite mana don't happens here. The story is also really good, it isn't too fast but also not too slow. The characters give me the feeling i'm reading about real people. I also get how the world works in like 5 episodes wich is actually pretty fast for such a big world, I like it. It is also good we sometimes have an episode from someonne elses standpoint. If you start at least read the 20 first episodes even if you dont like the first episodes
system stories copies every where .but nobody take series of develop a stories that could mesmerising reader .its making feels sick .I'm tired this kind of stories
story about system is good to mix with stuff . it include adventure and world back ground is not much . characters are also minimal .store line is bad
I greatly enjoyed reading this novel. The character’s progress towards his goals seemed more balanced than in other novels I have read, and his achievements felt earned.
love this book♥️😍. i just found it while searching randomly....the male lead is talented and pictured perfectly . i also like the female lead ,i like her ruthlessness. I don't like his mother though . she is a bit nosy in my opinion. his father is also great. i recommend this story to others. thanks .☺️
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this, ladies and gentlemen , I'd say is one of the finest works on this platform engaging story with almost perfect plot, not too op and not too boring .it was just as much tear-jerkingas it was madly hilarious . it was so well written that a lot of the time it felt like a biography. the system was the best I've ever seen and the magic was fantastic! best of luck to the Author and I sincerely encourage you to have experienced this wonder
I loved the magic and system. The rest of the story, not so much. A lot of the impactful scenes like someone dying or an attack on the kingdom were glossed over and never described that vividly. In the end, nothing even matters because of magic. Even the action and final battle, opponent uses X move, MC: I actually prepared for this off screen so it doesn’t work. This pattern really makes the MC a Gary Stu that can just pull any solution out of his pocket for any situation without much development. I still read through the whole story and enjoyed it, but it didn’t feel as impactful as I should’ve been.
揭示劇透 Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
The author does a great job with the character development and character interactions. When the main character is a child and interacting with the femail lead there is no romance which makes the story better because they are children and need to be children.
I really love this peace of art. I'm just sad that I only found it now. The characters are more than perfect and I'm looking forward to read more work of this author ^^
One of the best books on webnovel free good and literally no downside I have found too this book If you haven't read it do so it's great only one I've reread so far
I'm enjoying this more than I would have thought. I feel like it'd be better if the mc were 17-18 rather than 7-8, he could still expect to be dismissed because of his age by most. I really like the GURPS based magic system, it brings me back.
Best story I have read in a long time. The only story that I think is perfect for all to read. Had some few spelling mistakes. Paints a vivid picture in my mind when reading. And the character design is perfect.
揭示劇透 I find this story a very good read but has a couple of things that some people might not like. I advice you to READ the book and not take my points to heart. 1)I saw some people comenting early on that they were annoyned the MC was too young. It picks up pace mid story so dont worry about it too much 2)This is something that was briefly questioned about in the story but the MC and other main cast aint no goody twoshoes and does some morally questionable actions layer on. 3)This story has tragedy in it. More than a decent amount of it. But the author did put in some heartwarming slice of life drama in it to ease the tragedy. All in all its a good read and i advice to to read it.
its a very nice story. i like it that is sure and does not drag over 2000+ chapters like other stupid authors. the idea is very well defined. the ending is very nice and the epilogue chapters are a very nice bonus. plus the last one with flying swords hahahaha overall: you really have to read it
Excelente ,me encantaron los personajes el desarrollo de cada uno y como nunca olvidaste a ningún personaje,siempre apareciendo mencionandolo. No sabes lo feliz que fui no fue tedioso ni nada por el estilo y no sabes lo agradecida que estoy como desarrollaste el amor de Joseph y Stella yo tenía miedo que tenga muchísimo dramas o tendría que esperar mil años te juro que lloro de felicidad como lo desarrollaste y se sintió el amor tan profundo 😍 💘 dios es bellísimo sería genial que lo hagan un manhwa ya me lo puedo imaginar Fui tan feliz gracias por todo ❤️
Muito bom, Tudo perfeito mesmo 10 de 10 Se pudesse avaliaria com ainda mais So achei que uns trechos foram um pouco corridos, mas nao e nada que atrapalhe na Obra
Overall this is one of the best books I've ever read on Webnovel and I sincerely recommend that you at least give it a go if you enjoy books with lots of magic and overpowered mc
This is a fun story that follows a reincarnated person who has access to a powerful system. The growth speed of this story is a little fast but well written. overall a great story
Muito Bom de vdd, faz tempo q Nao leio uma historia boa do comeco ao fim . A qualidade é sim permanente, apensar de deixar uns arcos secundarios abertos no fiNal
I loved everything about the book the storytelling the world and character building the sheer comedy of the main character talking to his system and and the times the system was confused at how he did things honestly if there were more books like this I would love to read them and i somewhat wish that there were more books to follow this one like an abuse of magic two and three there's so much that can be done like him becoming a god because of the people worshipping him there's also the effect of him going against the gods that are enemy's with him as well as the church groups author I give you full marks for this book and hope you can make more like it
honestly one of the best books I've ever read on this website and the ending felt so complete and concluding something I haven't had the privilege of witnessing after spending most of my time reading books on the site
An excellent novel! If you like a well-developed romance (single, not harem!) this is a nice novel to read. There are also amazing fights and a very interesting development of magic and 'laws'. While there's the kingdom-building part that some people dislike, the author managed to work in an interesting approach thanks to how the plot developed. So, while we can see it all over the novel, isn't in the way of the other parts, but well blended. One of the parts I disliked in the novel till a certain point, was the MC age being too young for no apparent reason, but since helped meaningless talks about romance and stuff off the novel while the MC grew his strength turned really nice since we had a nice time-skip with the MC and heroine together.
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Cool story..............................................................mmmmm.................................................................
beautiful amazing astounding bewildering breathtaking extraordinary impressive marvelous miraculous spectacular staggering startling striking stunning stupefying stupendous wonderful wondrous etc etc...it's just a amazing magic novel with a good magic system deserving the full score i gave it. it's a bit bumpy at the start but you can SEE the improvements in quality from good to top notch
This is an amazing story, there are a couple sPots about half way where it almost Seems to become an OP story and Then within the next chapter you see that its required and earned!!!!
im only on ep 30 but i love the story: the system isn't overpowerd, someting like kill 1 enemy reward infinite mana don't happens here. The story is also really good, it isn't too fast but also not too slow. The characters give me the feeling i'm reading about real people. I also get how the world works in like 5 episodes wich is actually pretty fast for such a big world, I like it. It is also good we sometimes have an episode from someonne elses standpoint. If you start at least read the 20 first episodes even if you dont like the first episodes
system stories copies every where .but nobody take series of develop a stories that could mesmerising reader .its making feels sick .I'm tired this kind of stories
story about system is good to mix with stuff . it include adventure and world back ground is not much . characters are also minimal .store line is bad
I greatly enjoyed reading this novel. The character’s progress towards his goals seemed more balanced than in other novels I have read, and his achievements felt earned.
love this book♥️😍. i just found it while searching randomly....the male lead is talented and pictured perfectly . i also like the female lead ,i like her ruthlessness. I don't like his mother though . she is a bit nosy in my opinion. his father is also great. i recommend this story to others. thanks .☺️
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this, ladies and gentlemen , I'd say is one of the finest works on this platform engaging story with almost perfect plot, not too op and not too boring .it was just as much tear-jerkingas it was madly hilarious . it was so well written that a lot of the time it felt like a biography. the system was the best I've ever seen and the magic was fantastic! best of luck to the Author and I sincerely encourage you to have experienced this wonder