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The author has a pretty strange mind set. The MC is most interested in gold and nuclear bombs. I personally would be more interested in the portal than anything on the other world. There's far too many loopholes for it to be more than a lighthearted read.
I like the story. It starts pretty good but gets racist fast. Don't know if he was cracked down by SARFT around the 100th chapter or he's just xenophobic. Really wierd stuff to be ranting about too. Probably never left own country.
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it was fun and awesome until it wasn't especially when cultivation got involved it was unnecessary
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it started good but it turned somewhat racist and xenophobic at the middle. ..................................................................
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The story itself starts out mildly interesting. THEN ALIENS! The worst part is there was a warning and the stereotypical asian guy that just likes to go along with the flow just does that like any other person brainwashed by the society and denies what inevitably happens, surprise surprise, the aliens arrive to conquer the planet. Kudos to the translator that can stomach translating this drivel. Even I who doesn't really mind some cliches couldn't stand this novel, so I dropped it after chapter 100 to the scrap heap of history never to be read again!
It looks interesting at first, but it's really sad that it turns into something boring and contrived, and it's a story with lots of illogical choices and story inconsistencies. he has good racism.
Racism Racism............Racism...........Racism.....................Racism..................Racism.................Racism.............Racism...........
This book is not actually finished the author just decided to end it, so there is no real finale. Story starts off good, kinda of a replica of I have a mansion in the apocalypse, then yeah nationalist/racism theme sprout, then towards the end spin off stories and random introduction of new characters with zero development and lastly an attempt to start a new arc before an abrupt apology from the author ending the book since it kinda of spun out of control and was all over the place. Overall the ending is BS, even a rushed BS ending would be better than sorry my novels character is invicible so yeah the end, come on which MC doesnt have BS plot armor.
Absolutely love this story, minimal to no mistakes, great story progression and character design, long chapters gives lots of content allowing more reading for less coins
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I just love this story a lot. So beautiful and well written............................................. how lucky one can be without even looking
starts ok, but gets stupid at the end, the last hundred chapters still be a slog to get thru as they are just so stupid and have nothing to do with the primary story. it's like a second writer started writing in the same universe, and the author just added it in. can you imagine reading a detective novel and suddenly aliens show up for no reason in the last 1/4 of the book? it's that stupid.
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While I enjoyed reading the book it could have been a lot better. ..the Chinese racist propaganda is way over the top...then the MC goes from normal shut it loser to confident genius after finding the portal...his growth should have been a lot harder ..then mixing technology with cultivation was a mistake in my opinion...just muddled the waters...added very little to the story ...with 2 infinite universes and the MC barely did any exploring ..so much to see...so many aliens to meet both friendly and hostile ..missed opportunity there...
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I loved the story until it became harem. I was forced to drop it. At least Mc wouldn't kill for petty things. He developed many technology's although he already had it (waste of time). When the story started the story was in fast phase but it started to lag in many areas. They showed proper women character for 100 chapters and it started to change may be because the author forgot his true path where he started. Good points in story line: 1. He never tried foreign market to avoid problems (good idea because this usually prevent the Mc to kill or slaughter or discrimination of other countries like other novels). 2. Mc was not psycho killer. Bad: 1. No clear character establishment (makes the story looks bad). 2. After chapter-100 it suddenly became harem. 3. Cheating father with no conscience (Mc accept his cheating father even though his influence from his mother) - not logical. 4. Waste time without no clear plan. 5. He suddenly became mature according to the author ( but story say other). Wasted my time expecting it to be not a harem even 5 harem plots.[img=faceslap]
this is a racist novel and should be taken down ..................................I don't know why webnovel would allow such things on the app
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Bad thing that Chinese authors nowadays have a extrem Inferiority Complex that push them to be Racist... The idea of the plot is good but the Author develop in the ongoing history and characters fall down to the pit of Inferiority Conplex Chinese Version. A pitty (even without be of that countrys in the novel, it feel racist.)
the author is a racist guy that uses his mc to hide his racist way of thinking. the book has a bad background and a horrible development. blergh.
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Fuck **** ****........................ Worst mc💢 Selfish mc💢 Idiot mc💢 Greedy mc💢 Dickhead mc💢 Scaredy mc💢 #best Mc of the year💯 #psychopath Mc in another world👌 #best worst sh*t ever written 🎉🎉
no se porque tiene tantas criticas, a mi me gusto, tener cultivadores enfrentadose a la tecnologia es algo que siempre quiero leer y mas si es ciencia ficcion e.e, léela sin miedo, si no te gusta pues busca otra xd.
The nationalism with this one is so strong that i had to skimp other chapters. I love china but it's just too strong i still want to read it tho. Currently on chapter 350's.
The author has a pretty strange mind set. The MC is most interested in gold and nuclear bombs. I personally would be more interested in the portal than anything on the other world. There's far too many loopholes for it to be more than a lighthearted read.
I like the story. It starts pretty good but gets racist fast. Don't know if he was cracked down by SARFT around the 100th chapter or he's just xenophobic. Really wierd stuff to be ranting about too. Probably never left own country.
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it was fun and awesome until it wasn't especially when cultivation got involved it was unnecessary
揭示劇透 it started good but it turned somewhat racist and xenophobic at the middle. ..................................................................
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The story itself starts out mildly interesting. THEN ALIENS! The worst part is there was a warning and the stereotypical asian guy that just likes to go along with the flow just does that like any other person brainwashed by the society and denies what inevitably happens, surprise surprise, the aliens arrive to conquer the planet. Kudos to the translator that can stomach translating this drivel. Even I who doesn't really mind some cliches couldn't stand this novel, so I dropped it after chapter 100 to the scrap heap of history never to be read again!
It looks interesting at first, but it's really sad that it turns into something boring and contrived, and it's a story with lots of illogical choices and story inconsistencies. he has good racism.
Racism Racism............Racism...........Racism.....................Racism..................Racism.................Racism.............Racism...........
This book is not actually finished the author just decided to end it, so there is no real finale. Story starts off good, kinda of a replica of I have a mansion in the apocalypse, then yeah nationalist/racism theme sprout, then towards the end spin off stories and random introduction of new characters with zero development and lastly an attempt to start a new arc before an abrupt apology from the author ending the book since it kinda of spun out of control and was all over the place. Overall the ending is BS, even a rushed BS ending would be better than sorry my novels character is invicible so yeah the end, come on which MC doesnt have BS plot armor.
Absolutely love this story, minimal to no mistakes, great story progression and character design, long chapters gives lots of content allowing more reading for less coins
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DONT MIND ME IM FARMING EXP ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I just love this story a lot. So beautiful and well written............................................. how lucky one can be without even looking
starts ok, but gets stupid at the end, the last hundred chapters still be a slog to get thru as they are just so stupid and have nothing to do with the primary story. it's like a second writer started writing in the same universe, and the author just added it in. can you imagine reading a detective novel and suddenly aliens show up for no reason in the last 1/4 of the book? it's that stupid.
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While I enjoyed reading the book it could have been a lot better. ..the Chinese racist propaganda is way over the top...then the MC goes from normal shut it loser to confident genius after finding the portal...his growth should have been a lot harder ..then mixing technology with cultivation was a mistake in my opinion...just muddled the waters...added very little to the story ...with 2 infinite universes and the MC barely did any exploring ..so much to see...so many aliens to meet both friendly and hostile ..missed opportunity there...
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I loved the story until it became harem. I was forced to drop it. At least Mc wouldn't kill for petty things. He developed many technology's although he already had it (waste of time). When the story started the story was in fast phase but it started to lag in many areas. They showed proper women character for 100 chapters and it started to change may be because the author forgot his true path where he started. Good points in story line: 1. He never tried foreign market to avoid problems (good idea because this usually prevent the Mc to kill or slaughter or discrimination of other countries like other novels). 2. Mc was not psycho killer. Bad: 1. No clear character establishment (makes the story looks bad). 2. After chapter-100 it suddenly became harem. 3. Cheating father with no conscience (Mc accept his cheating father even though his influence from his mother) - not logical. 4. Waste time without no clear plan. 5. He suddenly became mature according to the author ( but story say other). Wasted my time expecting it to be not a harem even 5 harem plots.[img=faceslap]
this is a racist novel and should be taken down ..................................I don't know why webnovel would allow such things on the app
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email：luffyringdom@gmail.com
Bad thing that Chinese authors nowadays have a extrem Inferiority Complex that push them to be Racist... The idea of the plot is good but the Author develop in the ongoing history and characters fall down to the pit of Inferiority Conplex Chinese Version. A pitty (even without be of that countrys in the novel, it feel racist.)
the author is a racist guy that uses his mc to hide his racist way of thinking. the book has a bad background and a horrible development. blergh.
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Fuck **** ****........................ Worst mc💢 Selfish mc💢 Idiot mc💢 Greedy mc💢 Dickhead mc💢 Scaredy mc💢 #best Mc of the year💯 #psychopath Mc in another world👌 #best worst sh*t ever written 🎉🎉
no se porque tiene tantas criticas, a mi me gusto, tener cultivadores enfrentadose a la tecnologia es algo que siempre quiero leer y mas si es ciencia ficcion e.e, léela sin miedo, si no te gusta pues busca otra xd.
The nationalism with this one is so strong that i had to skimp other chapters. I love china but it's just too strong i still want to read it tho. Currently on chapter 350's.