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寫檢討
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
I think updates is the only thing your lacking honestly a good foundation ok grammar need more info on the system and characters and more chapters but the story is paced a little to fast so it would be beneficial to add in some details about the base and world and zombies and powers available
I'm normally only a fan of Genderbenders if it involves a dude fully becoming a chick, I rarely find anyone where a guy turns into a futa. But this isn't a bad story, I am kind of enjoying it with the current amount of chapters out. I do kind of feel that the MC could've been a chick from the start and still remained a chick in her new life. I don't think much would change and would probably help the lackluster reaction the MC has to turn into a chick. Lastly, I'm not the biggest fan of this just being a game set up by gods or something like that. But I do enjoy a lot of the other things such as the little sister to take care of and the fact the MC isn't gonna be afraid to kill anyone. Hell, I'm really hoping for some Tank or Attack Helicopter action.
so far i like it good start love zombi thems keep up the good work please dont drop it . sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Base on author's previous novels I think this novel is quite promising. And the other reason is because I love apocalyptic theme novels so I'm gonna give a 5 star.
Well, I always wanted to write a novel about apocalypse, zombies and ****, so this is just and attempt. Furthermore, don't expect perfecta grammar and all. There will be cliché, maybe a lot, I am not sure. This might seemed a little e weird as well because the main character of the story had some sort of inter*** condition and all. anywayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyjfbfbfgbfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfffnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnffmfmfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfgggggggggkgjkgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjg Shameless sect : 5 stars
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖
I think updates is the only thing your lacking honestly a good foundation ok grammar need more info on the system and characters and more chapters but the story is paced a little to fast so it would be beneficial to add in some details about the base and world and zombies and powers available
I'm normally only a fan of Genderbenders if it involves a dude fully becoming a chick, I rarely find anyone where a guy turns into a futa. But this isn't a bad story, I am kind of enjoying it with the current amount of chapters out. I do kind of feel that the MC could've been a chick from the start and still remained a chick in her new life. I don't think much would change and would probably help the lackluster reaction the MC has to turn into a chick. Lastly, I'm not the biggest fan of this just being a game set up by gods or something like that. But I do enjoy a lot of the other things such as the little sister to take care of and the fact the MC isn't gonna be afraid to kill anyone. Hell, I'm really hoping for some Tank or Attack Helicopter action.
so far i like it good start love zombi thems keep up the good work please dont drop it . sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Base on author's previous novels I think this novel is quite promising. And the other reason is because I love apocalyptic theme novels so I'm gonna give a 5 star.
Well, I always wanted to write a novel about apocalypse, zombies and ****, so this is just and attempt. Furthermore, don't expect perfecta grammar and all. There will be cliché, maybe a lot, I am not sure. This might seemed a little e weird as well because the main character of the story had some sort of inter*** condition and all. anywayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyjfbfbfgbfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfffnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnffmfmfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfnfgggggggggkgjkgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjgjg Shameless sect : 5 stars
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email haiweiweian1994@163.com