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Realm of the Seven Gods

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作者: ItzSenpie

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Long Er'Du, the universe's strongest martial cultivator, someone looked upon as an existence akin to god, was punished by the heavens for being too talented and for threatening the position of the nine heavens.

His final legacy is left with an unlucky boy in birth who came from a branch family of the overlord clan in his continent, Wan Long.

Join Wan Long in his journey to becoming the one known as the All-Devouring Dragon God.

P.S. (this is my first novel ever created so please do leave a comment on what i can improve on)

P.P.S (i know my vocabulary is not very broad but let me know what i can do)

Realms:

Body Refinement

Soul Forming

Houtian

Xiantian

Dansheng (Rebirth of Dantian)

Divine Soul

Life Rebirth

General Audiences

每周推薦票狀態

Rank -- 推薦票 榜單
Stone -- 推薦票

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  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景

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zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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cLancelot

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zd4zaaa

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WaqiMalik

Pretty much a xianxia with a Mc that is considered trash and untalented but gets a fortuitous opportunity and becomes stronger than those more talented than him. As there are not too many chapters so I will refrain from making too many points but it has plenty of usual problems. For Example, The background is loosely explained with little to no interactions and the ones that do happen are bland or forced with the usual looking down on Mc. Characters are not fleshed out and author seems to be trying to focus on Mc alone with other characters only being there for convenience.

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作者 ItzSenpie