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Such a great Love story! True love was found and that is the greatest love of all. I cried and I laughed and my heart melted in the end. Definitely recommend reading this! Thank you to the writer!
Awesome read! Loved it a loooooooot ❤️ ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️
it's such a addictive story; wanted to read at one go... I plunged, immersed in this living document of emotionally thrilling equilibrium, not less than a blockbustor movie script... it's systematically decorated, touchy, relating, mesmerising, pleasurous, shivering & spontaneously memorable... it's full of suspense, twists, tipping emotional intimacy of purest lovely nascent sparks... sense of satisfaction, trust-distrust, humiliation, bonding, ethical dilemma at the same time... literary liberty is taken.. Climax is subjective, depends on our belief system; & was shocking as well as disturbing for me... last speeches of both leads could have been more effective but still it was not a elocution comp...☺️haha...characters played their best, well narration, nice use of phrases, places events r described alive- I still wander at rooftop of college or in river splashing water... etc twists r as interesting as the story... the novel taught me the values like devotion, dedication, sacrifice, patience and importance of confession at right time!😊... with due respecting the thoughts of author i would like to thank her for providing such a thing not less than a surprise gift... i appreciate the efforts... All the best...👍👍👍
I hav been reading the same from past 3 days ....but got stuck in middle as there no chapters updated ahead ..plz release fast....luv the story line
A cute love story , has lot of twists,I'm loving it a lotttt. And not a cliche love story,the writer is doing a very good job keeping the readers in the edge of their seat 😍😍
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It was real a very beautiful story ..I m waiting for more ..the love between Mia and Ray is very cute and romantic ...waiting to read about their love life further
Mia and Jun. June has loved Mia since they are just kids when he saw her at the hill. This is a journey of jun's quiet love and mia's unknown love to each other. The intriguing and suspenseful romance story which started with an unnamed husband in the present of Mia and a travel back in time to their younger selves. You will love this love story too
Hello .. please Doo update fassttt. It's soooo interesting ... You write well.. but updates faterrrrrrr... Please....,,,,, Miaa junnn Ray areeee awesome trio
Heyyyyyy veryyy good stooory... Nice narration but updating is little late . But worth waiting.. but please try to update... I love the selfless Mia character
Feel Good one.....need updating soon.. Keep writing amazingly. U deserve five star....keep going.. but please update regularly..,..............
Interesting every chapter . Jun and Mia are too good.. please update regularly.best cool novel.. neat description. Keep going all the best.........,.....
Can't wait for new chapter again n again... Please update soon... You ryt so different from others .. friendship ,love family ..many memories
This story is getting interesting day by day.,it shows imp of friendship and love. You narrated Soo well..all d best keep going. Update soon
Please update frequently. I keep on checking and waiting. But author narration is great it is lively every chapter is interesting keep going . Hope to c update soon. Can't wait
Such a good story , author narration is so well that it looks so livelybut i have to check daily for update please do update story up to d date
A cute love story that always makes your heart smile........ . . you enter their world and forget about the tensions and stress........... With the writing details you experience Mia's story.......... Overall an light funny cheerful love story with a pinch of suspense
Writting quality is excellent... Story characters are cute and cool.... Story updates 2 chapters per week but it's ok... Love this story....
This story is about school life and different experiences we get in school ....In the end of the chapter there is always suspense.. so people who love school life love story this story is best!
Hello there! I'm so happy to have come across such a nice story. Actually, I wasn't much impressed with the synopsis, bt I just gave it a try and started liking it from the first chap. Each chapter keeps me at suspense, though it is a romantic story. And the sad part is the suspense seems to continue to the end! I can't wait already! If you ppl r those that cherish ur school days, school friendship, ur first crush at school and also if ever been betrayed by ur friends then this novel is one to include to ur library. Thnx author, for such a nice story.
This story is very interesting and its very cute. M very excited to read next chapter so please author keep on updating next chapter and dnt stop updating on the half...... I want know how the story end
The story is sweet as well as it gets intresting at times❤️ But the story updates are quite slow Need to increase the speed of posting stories and should be regular☺️ Other then slow posting the story is great Loving this story a lot Keep it up♥️♥️
This story is really interesting.... I am liking it!! Story writing is good . This story has cute scenes which I never seen anywhere... this story is good!!👍😘
This is a very cute love story and whenever I read that novel there is a smile on my face and for sure this novel is best and novel is so interesting
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this is so beautiful, lovely, amazing, ossum ,magical, fantastic, 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
Such a great Love story! True love was found and that is the greatest love of all. I cried and I laughed and my heart melted in the end. Definitely recommend reading this! Thank you to the writer!
Awesome read! Loved it a loooooooot ❤️ ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️🧡💛💚💙💜❤️
it's such a addictive story; wanted to read at one go... I plunged, immersed in this living document of emotionally thrilling equilibrium, not less than a blockbustor movie script... it's systematically decorated, touchy, relating, mesmerising, pleasurous, shivering & spontaneously memorable... it's full of suspense, twists, tipping emotional intimacy of purest lovely nascent sparks... sense of satisfaction, trust-distrust, humiliation, bonding, ethical dilemma at the same time... literary liberty is taken.. Climax is subjective, depends on our belief system; & was shocking as well as disturbing for me... last speeches of both leads could have been more effective but still it was not a elocution comp...☺️haha...characters played their best, well narration, nice use of phrases, places events r described alive- I still wander at rooftop of college or in river splashing water... etc twists r as interesting as the story... the novel taught me the values like devotion, dedication, sacrifice, patience and importance of confession at right time!😊... with due respecting the thoughts of author i would like to thank her for providing such a thing not less than a surprise gift... i appreciate the efforts... All the best...👍👍👍
I hav been reading the same from past 3 days ....but got stuck in middle as there no chapters updated ahead ..plz release fast....luv the story line
A cute love story , has lot of twists,I'm loving it a lotttt. And not a cliche love story,the writer is doing a very good job keeping the readers in the edge of their seat 😍😍
Thnxxxxxxxxx😍❤🤔❤🤔👈👈🤔😗👍❤😗😍❤👍😗😅😗❤😊❤😍❤😍❤😍❤🤔❤😍❤❤😍❤😍❤😍❤😍❤😍❤😊😊❤😍❤😊❤😊❤❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😊❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤❤😍😍❤😍❤😍😍❤❤😍❤😗❤😗❤😗❤😗❤😗
It was real a very beautiful story ..I m waiting for more ..the love between Mia and Ray is very cute and romantic ...waiting to read about their love life further
Mia and Jun. June has loved Mia since they are just kids when he saw her at the hill. This is a journey of jun's quiet love and mia's unknown love to each other. The intriguing and suspenseful romance story which started with an unnamed husband in the present of Mia and a travel back in time to their younger selves. You will love this love story too
Hello .. please Doo update fassttt. It's soooo interesting ... You write well.. but updates faterrrrrrr... Please....,,,,, Miaa junnn Ray areeee awesome trio
Heyyyyyy veryyy good stooory... Nice narration but updating is little late . But worth waiting.. but please try to update... I love the selfless Mia character
Feel Good one.....need updating soon.. Keep writing amazingly. U deserve five star....keep going.. but please update regularly..,..............
Interesting every chapter . Jun and Mia are too good.. please update regularly.best cool novel.. neat description. Keep going all the best.........,.....
Can't wait for new chapter again n again... Please update soon... You ryt so different from others .. friendship ,love family ..many memories
This story is getting interesting day by day.,it shows imp of friendship and love. You narrated Soo well..all d best keep going. Update soon
Please update frequently. I keep on checking and waiting. But author narration is great it is lively every chapter is interesting keep going . Hope to c update soon. Can't wait
Such a good story , author narration is so well that it looks so livelybut i have to check daily for update please do update story up to d date
A cute love story that always makes your heart smile........ . . you enter their world and forget about the tensions and stress........... With the writing details you experience Mia's story.......... Overall an light funny cheerful love story with a pinch of suspense
Writting quality is excellent... Story characters are cute and cool.... Story updates 2 chapters per week but it's ok... Love this story....
This story is about school life and different experiences we get in school ....In the end of the chapter there is always suspense.. so people who love school life love story this story is best!
Hello there! I'm so happy to have come across such a nice story. Actually, I wasn't much impressed with the synopsis, bt I just gave it a try and started liking it from the first chap. Each chapter keeps me at suspense, though it is a romantic story. And the sad part is the suspense seems to continue to the end! I can't wait already! If you ppl r those that cherish ur school days, school friendship, ur first crush at school and also if ever been betrayed by ur friends then this novel is one to include to ur library. Thnx author, for such a nice story.
This story is very interesting and its very cute. M very excited to read next chapter so please author keep on updating next chapter and dnt stop updating on the half...... I want know how the story end
The story is sweet as well as it gets intresting at times❤️ But the story updates are quite slow Need to increase the speed of posting stories and should be regular☺️ Other then slow posting the story is great Loving this story a lot Keep it up♥️♥️
This story is really interesting.... I am liking it!! Story writing is good . This story has cute scenes which I never seen anywhere... this story is good!!👍😘
This is a very cute love story and whenever I read that novel there is a smile on my face and for sure this novel is best and novel is so interesting
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