摘要
"Mom, don't go, please I begging you!!" Qi Diran kneeling in front of her mother Qi Zira and hug her mother feet.
Qi Zira also bend her knees like her daughter and hug her daughter in her arms
"Baby, Mommy just go for work you have Daddy to take care of you, be good alright princess?"
"Alright" Qi Diran hug her mom tightly reluctant to let it go
This man is rich and handsome just married to my mother yesterday you can also call him a stepfather.
Because I'm still 14 years old, Mom find a guardian to take care of me while Mom have a work in America and I wait for her to come home in China.
"Daddy I want ice-cream" Qi Diran said to Zhu Min while pleading her eyes look like pussy cats from movie Shrek and Princess Fioana make someone hard to reject her wish
"You can't" Zhu Min turn his head to avoid Qi Diran pleading
"Why?"Qi Diran asking unsatisfy with that rejection
"Because you're baby, you need to take care of your teeth"Zhu Min answer Qi Diran question while patted Qi Diran head
"But I already grown up"Qi Diran pouted her mouth with hands cross at her chest.
"To me you still my baby"Zhu Min patted Qi Diran hair coax Qi Diran like a child.
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I don't know what story it'll be but the writing is good. But the writer don't need to put xu everywhere , just put the short form. The story will be more fluid to the readers. It's annoying to see xu xu every now and then. Story development is quite good. Also I'm very much satisfied with the word chosen , they are not very hard and easy for readers to understand. Let's see now what will be the main story goes.
This is a good story and I hope she can grow up and act like ***** . I hope her stepfather and her can fall in love and it look werid when she called him daddy. Will they both fall in love and I want her to grow up very soon so he can marry her I can't wait . Please update more chapters And it look werid he marry her mom . I don't want that .
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