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11.11% A traveler that changes the world [IS BEING REWROTE!!!!] / Chapter 4: First meeting .

章節 4: First meeting .

I woke up, because something that was keeping me warm suddenly left. Morning chill penetrated into my body and implanted itself in my bones. I let out a displeased sound, to let my new parents know that I'm freezing. I am a grown up on the inside, but my body is that of a baby. Even if I want to do something, I'm powerless.

Now I finally understand why children cry so much. They just can't do anything on their own. This body is so helpless! I can not move as I want, nor can I ask help properly. It's kind of annoying.

Since no one came, I try to cry a little louder, but felt that I was again lifted, so I shut my mouth. This time hands that were holding me were not stable. They were shaking but caring at the same time. I focused my vision and what came into my few was a young adult in his middle twenties. He had fiery-orange eyes and short, messy brown hair. His masculine face was beaming with self-confidence. He brought me closer to his broad chest and showered me with soft, warm gazes. Wide smile was glued on his face .

I could feel his deep affection and gave him my best smile. His face lit up, eyes became moist and this mesmerising smile became even more profound.

"Dear! Our Mirta woke up! Ha-Ha-Ha! She looks a lot like you! Looks like my daughter will be as beautiful as my beloved! I'm truly the happiest man in the world!"

From his words I could conclude that he is my father and that my appearance is similar to that Angel I saw after I got reborn.

I heard rushed footsteps and I was carefully taken away from my father. My eyes were tired from concentrating so I closed them.

"Really? As I can see, she is definitely asleep. Kelm, couldn't you wait for her to properly wake up?"

I didn't want my new father to feel awkward so I hurriedly opened my eyes, but instead of angry and troubled faces , I was met with Angelic laugh of mother and happy Father.

"Look, I told you that she was awake. Aren't those eyes the most beautiful thing in the world?"

Mother ignored his comment regarding my eyes and spoke to me instead.

"Hi, my little girl. Did this uncle scare you?"

"Hey! That hurts, you know? Weren't you the one that said that you liked how I look?"

"So what? Let us leave him here and go outside together."

She carried me while having this funny exchange of phrases with father. The moment we stepped outdoors was the most breathtaking moment in my two lives.

Clear, fresh air; bright,cerulean sky and welcoming raise of two suns combined with distant cheerful chirping of surreal birds and soft, warm breeze formed an image of matchless beauty.

"Look at our angel, Amella. she can't take her eyes of the scenery! Her eyes shine like two ruby stars!"

God, I still feel a little guilty for leaving my family from my past life, but thank you for giving me this loving family and beautiful world.


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mdrm mdrm

Hi! people, I'm sorry for forgetting to explain why was MC shot in the head. When an idea came to my head I searched in the internet to find a way to quickly take her heart and get here reborn. So, somewhere( I don't remember where), when a donor is still alive but wants to give his/her heart away after some procedures and papers, the get shot in the head (since poison/ suicide e.t.c. doesn't work)

thank you all for reading this chapter.

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