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章節 188: i want to be criticized

Hello readers, this is the author blue cloud.

As the author of this novel, i want to improve my self and the novel. The best way for it is to hear the opinion of you, readers.

If you could spend some of your time to point out the things that i fall short at, i would be extremely grateful for you.

The more criticism that i get, the better i would become at the future. So, i want you to criticize me with everything you got.

I will put this chapter later in the axillary volume so it will not stay awkwardly in the fourth volume.


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