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More chapters! Definitely can not read this in public! I'm new to this! When do chapters usually come out? Cause I don't think I can wait any longer!
揭示劇透 très "bonne" histoire continue stp. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This novel need more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review more review
揭示劇透 I'm on this sit only because someone told me that novel was on of the best ero of the moment I'm not disappointed !!!!!!! 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌140 character suck
揭示劇透 Good hero novel with a femal mc, that really rare, I wait for more chapter. Too the author: add some Tag like R18, herotic .... That will make your novel more visible. 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈👍
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write plz. I was liking the novel again, upload more episodes, thanks for your content. Now I need to write more to let me comment, hello mom!
揭示劇透 I am gonna shamelessly review my book and rate it amazing... I have read a lot of we novel and I am frustrated with authors telling their stories but never showing the readers what he sees. I plan to change that... #lotsofsex #loophole #exploitation #bold #sexy #tease
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.