Siren Song

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gents46

So happy for the outcome that Chang and Jian are now reconciled. Excited to know what would become of their lovelife once they would start a new beginning!

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Book_Keeper

Hello, your novel has been reviewed by Virtual Bookshelf. A review excerpt is as follows: Writing and Style: You have a certain style to your writing and employ a nice range of vocabulary. Settings and Flow of Scenes – Overall, this is very well done. You have vivid descriptions and the scene transitions are fluid for the most part. Characters: Great visual descriptions for all of them. Chang – The throwing of herself into the dumpster is a great hook into her character as it shows some quirkiness and ability to disregard appearances for the sake of her plans. At times she feels too mellow for a character; mellow meaning nothing particularly stands out about her yet nothing necessarily negative either. Other times, she’s rather funny in her actions, almost like a child. These all aren’t bad things, and while this female lead is above average to the many of which are poorly created and developed, Chang has so much more potential to even be better. Currently, she’s a very well made cookie cutter female lead in a romance story. Chapter 72, the story about her father is nice, but it isn’t very necessary to the story in terms of giving any more insight to her character nor for introducing a character which is dead. Deceased characters can certainly spur development of characters and plot, but this one didn’t. It’s a nice Segway into Jian’s return, but this could be accomplished in other ways which more relevantly tie into future developments. We see a little more personality in her attempt to escape in chapter 101. It links back to the character she showed when she dumped herself in the dumpster—determination. Jian – He comes off as the typical mysterious, attractive, and possessive male lead. It does seem a little odd that he would get this obsessively attached after being married for one month with Chang. He becomes more charming as the story progresses as he tries his best to make her trust him. Justin – Initially, his character comes off as a best guy friend, flirty but nice—I’m sorry if it wasn’t your intention, but he’s almost reminiscent of how a gay best friend would be. There’s nothing wrong with this, and while not everyone would get that inkling, I thought I should point this out anyway. Later on, my feelings were asserted by his behavior toward Jian, so good job distinguishing his character! After the first few dozen chapters, he’s forgotten until Chapter 150. This isn’t…the best thing to do with semi-important/fleshed out side characters. Li Hua and Jid – Done well, but nothing in particular which really distinguishes them as very memorable or unique to their roles characters. Jid’s role heavily lacked after instilling the idea that he would significantly help Jian be with Chang. .........(cont.) The full review: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/03/26/review-siren-song-kayalicia/ Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)

LV 10

Laya28

Well i havent read it yet so im gonna put this on my library first.........i think i found this story quite interesting by reading the plot/sypnosis.... ill rate u back once i started reading it... more power to ur work.. 😁

LV 5

olabo76

Hmmmmm! I love this story, I like the writer's portrayal of Chang's character as being ***** and jian's character as matured, bold and daring enough to face his father. Please, more updates, thank you

LV 11

gents46

This story is well- written especially from the start to the scene after Chang's escape in Lahat. I am just a bit disappointed in the decisons of Chang and the reaction of Jian. Wish they will end up well.

LV 11

Kayalicia

It may be shameless, but I wanna review my own work. This has been a labor of love born from a heartbreak and an overactive imagination. I can't help but smile or laugh or cry when I write as I have invested a lot of my heart and soul into this story. So thank you to everyone who picks this up and follows this❤️ - Kaya

LV 4

Korelan

So far had several good laughs in the story, can't wait to find out what happened between the Ml and FL! I really like the FL shes pretty cool

LV 5

PeiMeiRin

I've really been enjoying the story, it's something the same yet also different, told in a different way. the main character is quirky and yet enjoyable to read about. I love the background world described in, but I wonder about characters that were so richly described earlier. They were brought into story only to disappear, did they get wrote out after convenience sake? Thank you for the story I look forward to seeing where this goes!

LV 4

babyljaie46

I finished reading the book in juat two days. Can't stop reading...the story is so well - progressed.. Though, there are confusing sentences but I can understand and relate because I also never want to edit rigt after writing. The author's brilliance is well - reflected.. Please update fast.. I'm looking forward to the next chapters!

LV 5

ziyajm

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LV 6

LChew

Easy reading. Female lead's characters a bit weak and irritating but not to the stage you want to knock her head..lol. overall, quite entertaining.

LV 4

Keyll

I hope they wil meet chang ang her husband it has been long time i realy thought the grandfather of chang will help their relationship but im wrong he will do what he did to his son the father of chang so dissappointing person...lets see for the next chapter....

LV 4

JaniceVardham

Lovely story fell like reading onn and onn. Keep wondering what will happen next. All characters in the stoey seem live. please update the story.

LV 4

Keyll

So thats it she's not poor and a damb cousin she have a pervert , when will they meet a wife and hasband lets look forward to it hoe the way it is.....thanks for the effortsssssss.....👍

This book is recommended to me by an author with a code name gents46. And wow, she is right.This is a very wonderful story, written so wonderfully. I love every bit of it.

LV 4

babyljaie46

When I wake up this morning, I checked for an update and I'm a little sad that there was none. The story just won't make my mind rest whenever I start to open my app ro read or write. Very well -written, wonderful story line! Wanna recommend it to everyone...

LV 5

ahmda

Hmmmmmmp, nice story thrill and a lot of suspence, 😍😘😍🤩😍😍🤩😍😛😍😋😛😋😛😋😋😋😛😋😛😋😛😙😛😋😛😋😙😛😙😛😙😛😙😛😙😜😙😜😙😙😙😛😙😜😙😜😛😙🤩🤩😙

LV 13

crystalgabel

Wonderful I hope you keep riding it and I hope you do it massive update thank you so very much you are wonderful Arthur the characters are great I appreciate your time and effort you put in this book and I hope to continue read it in the future thank you

LV 2

jaiejede

A very well - written book and a very wonderful story! The plots are so page - turning that I can't help myself from checking for updates. Author, please update fast!