Uzumaki Touma

The main character is quite fleshed and has a nice background, his powers are creative and really smart for an uzumaki. The only problem I have on Touma is how his intelligence fluctuates between serious/innocence/clown/dense/genius... Everything else is really good. The grammar is godly, frankly author's prose and rhythm is really good. His timing and creativity is the best thing on this fiction. The story so far so good, yet some things aren't clear: Tsunade- She only participated on the third war at the start, when Dan and Nawaki died she retired to healing-only duty, she only left the leaf when Orochimaru's experiments resurfaced. Thus she should have been able to help Touma's father. Kakashi was Minato student the year before the war started, and then they got the full team, where are them? Not even a mention? That's weird, knowing how Kushina or Minato are, they would have spoken of them. Well, still, 9/10. Awesome.

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