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What an awesome novel!! Normally, I like more of a focus on a romance, but this author does such a wonderful job of writing awe-inspiring fighting scenes that keep me riveted! It is truly too unfortunate that this novel wasn't continued. I was so sad when I got to the point where the author stopped writing, but at least it didn't end on a sad note I guess.
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i love this work, i love this so bad. i feel so bad, who was that dck head? to said those things to you?is he/she perfect? tell them to write their own and fck off. gosh i wanna hurt someone so bad 😠😠😠 you see dear author you made a one hella work of art, we really really appreciate this work of yours. this is one of the best so far, it is exciting and blood chilling, i wanna know the secrets left behind, i miss erza so bad, im really looking forward to the stories , pleaaaase continue this 😭😭😭
Shoot. This one is sooo fckin good , this one is sooo awesome, i hope the author continue this work of art, i feel bad for those peope who dont appreciate this artwork, i can only say that this one is one of the best ive read here. I really hope the story can continue 😭😭😭
I've really really enjoyed reading your book, your characters are enjoyable and your world sounds stunning, I can't wait for the next part of your story
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I hope that this novel isn't finished or is being dropped, I really wanna see what happens when Erza knows the truth about Beel, and what she does about it will she forgive her big brother for leaving her like that or will she shed tears of joy knowing hes still alive...and I wanna see what kind of ruler she will be. Will she be a kind ruler or rule by force!! I still have yet to see, my imagination on seeing what the future of this webnovel holds is still yet to meet my expectations...I've read this novel inside and out and yet it still fascinates me. Only one thing I can describe about this webnovel and it is an absolute masterpiece! I truly hope to read the very last chapter or should I say "final ending" as a bookworm this book caught my attention and I wish to fully satisfy my 'bookworm desires' and that can only be done by reading the end of it. Every bookworms worse nightmare is not being able to finish a book which is deemed worthy of it's precious words of art. A treasure among treasures is worthy of being read if it catches the eyes of it's reader!.
Author have mercy on us na we need an update please continue the novel its sososososo interesting that i cant even get my mind off it can't bring myself to delete the novel either
I hope you'll continue writing. Just don't mind the people who want to destroy your work . They're just jealous about your work or stories. Just pleaaaassseeeee UD sooooonnnn 😊😊😊😊
I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much ....
This is an awesome book, unfortunately someone bad mouthed the author so it has stopped til further notice, still a good book to read. It is full of action and the MC doesn't always win but it still has so many good points in the book and so much left unanswered that you don't want to stop reading especially after it stops, if only there were such arrogant, self centered, idiotic, baboon related, fudge knuckles in the the world, this would be an even better book (talking about the person who arrogantly bad mouthed the awesome author).
Tsalagi you are a human trash.. The autor said that this story is inspired by outher stories. What the **** is wrong with this... all historys are inspired by another history. Thx you just ****ed 230 or more persons who like thid story... Despicable human trash.
This was the first book i read on here and i have absolutely fell in love with it. Please dont give up. I hope that those haters dont stop you writing and i really hope to continue reading more of your works i the future if you make the decision to continue. Nevertheless if this is where erza's story ends (really hope it isnt though) then i wish tou well for the future.
Don't stop...keep writing..I am having lots of fun in this story which is unique and have its own charm.Whatever changes you made is interesting to read ...keep it up.
Please you gotta write more!! Continue, who cares what they think? Yours is better in more ways than one and a story can be told in more than one way. Don't take out your anger on us readers by quoting your novel! You might just make me die of a heart attack or a nervous breakdown if you choose to stop the novel. I'm serious right now. Because, I'm like in suspense right now and its not good for my fragile heart. Please keep on writing , this story is very very good, and it'd be a shame if its left untold
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I see you have not updated in the past week, but you updated almost daily B4 that... then I go to check if you said why in your most recent chapter, and what do I see? "There is no need for me to continue something which people don't appreciate it that they got it for free." ... I think that is only something a quitter should say... if you are a quitter, then feel free to let that stop you (in my mind all quitters are loosers), otherwise continue writing, if nothing else, in spite of the hater! Positive Feedback: I think you have a well planned out, well executed story that you are doing really well on... all characters seem unique and the plot is not predictable as I would sometimes expect with these stories.;,;. Personal Feedback: If you will continue writing this story, I will continue reading... otherwise it's pointless, and I will drop it here at chapter 5... please reply letting me know which I should hold to.;,;. Score: SoU: 4/5 Rest: 5/5
Amazing work by exalted emperor. So real and I can really relate. Thanks for a good work done. I'll be certain to follow you all the way through. Thumps up to you
So so in love with the storyline. Please don't stop here. Just know that those haters are meant to keep you going. You're doing an excellent job. You're so talented. Keep it up and please continue.
Awesome storyline. Everything on point and so captivating. You really feel alive reading every chapter and it feels like you're even part of the the whole story. Indeed you're an exalted emperor. Don't mind the haters and keep up the excellent work you're doing. Hope to keep receiving further updates
Yeah shameless is the word that schould be used to describe you. I really liked this story, but the moment i noticed, that i magically know some parts even though it should have been an original, was the moment it went south. If you had put it up as a fanfic and only....i mean really only....used some names of other stories or characteristics of them i would not have mind it. But stealing, in such a obvious manner, and exclaim it as your own.....man know some shame. You thought yourself smart huh? If some of you dont know what i mean here are some examples: World God Empress Chapter 94 Senior Envoys During that night in the guise of darkness, a gigantic flying beast suddenly landed on top of the city lord's mansion. Thanks to the bright illuminations around the building, the shape of the flying beast could be roughly determined. It looked like an eagle with pitch black feathers and its wings spanning out to around twenty meters. From its back, two figures suddenly emerged and descended onto the ground below with their clothes billowing in the wind. In the courtyard, Caesar stood by with a group of soldiers standing behind him nervously. Yet there was also an expectant look on each one of their faces. "This one is honoured to greet the envoys!" ... *Dong dong dong dong…* In the early morning of the Mole Clan's courtyards, the large knocking sounds of the door suddenly broke the silence. Chaotic Sword God Chapter 235: Senior Envoys In the pitch dark night, a large flying magical beast suddenly descended upon the city lord’s mansion. Thanks to the bright illuminations by the building, the shape of the flying magical beast could be roughly determined. It looked like an eagle with pitch black feathers and its wings spanning out to around twenty meters. On its back, two figures suddenly dropped down onto ground below with their clothes billowing in the wind. In the courtyard, Yun Li stood by with a group of soldiers standing behind him nervously. Yet there was also an expectant look on each one of their faces. As the flying magical beast descended, Yun Li continued to wait, but the moment it drew close, Yun Li called out to the two figures, “This one is honored to greet the envoys!” …… “Dong dong dong dong…” In the early morning of the Kai clan’s courtyards, the large knocking sounds of the door suddenly broke the early silence. Is it still your own blood sweat and tears if you steal in such a manner. my blood boils. shameless shameless
Well, here goes my first review, honestly, so far i love the story, i binged everything in 1 day and felt empty afterwards xD I certainly like the way this novel is written and this really seems like a hidden gem that's not getting the recognition it deserves. I only wish there were more chapters or more releases :( Anyway, good job and keep it up author.
If you are hesitating to read this, I am telling you I definitely recommend this to those readers who like actions as the author describe them in a very detailed manner. It is kind of slow paced but the story is good and enjoyable. Although the characters are in the age of a child, the way they handle their ‘relationships’ are very ****-like and not like their age at all. This isn’t like a typical revenge story because the mc just wants to find out about her real identity and become powerful to protect her loved ones. If you want an overpowered mc, you should pick this book and follow her journey into achieving her ambitions and solving the mysteries of her life.
Every chapter is intriguing. You kind of find yourself in it. Really interesting. Keep sending updates daily because I can't wait and look forward to those updates every morning. Big ups to the author.
really dont know what to write. BUT ONE THING I MUST TELL YOU, this novel always left you hanging/wanting for more!!!! hahahaha some of the character cant remember all of them now i guess i need a list. but the chapter always kinda short
The MC is ridiculously OP and behaves very arrogantly and spoiled. She has never gone through any kind of hardships (other than not knowing her birthparents, but she's still brought up with lots of love from her adopted mother), but because she has memory of a certain test/illusion, that she went through as a young child, she views herself as a major victim and kills whoever she wants, even though the people she kills have done her nothing wrong other than maybe, just maybe, become a hindrance or enemy to her in the future. I found it kind of hard to continue reading this novel about a spoiled teenager on a killing spree.
Excellent story very riveting plot and outstanding heroine. The storyline takes you from magic to steely determination in one fell swoop. Ezra is brilliant and very determined can’t wait for more.
Excellent story, great characters, the translation isn't the best but it is good mostrar of the tome. The development of the story is really good.
Badass mc, interesting side characters that feel like actual people, great world building and never has any chapters that fell like they are not needed!! What more could you ask for? This is in my top 3 light novels that I have read and I would highly recommend you giving it a try as I believe it is worth your time. 4.9/5
me after 4 years of it being dropped still coming in to check once every while hoping for a miracle 😔😭😭😭
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
What an awesome novel!! Normally, I like more of a focus on a romance, but this author does such a wonderful job of writing awe-inspiring fighting scenes that keep me riveted! It is truly too unfortunate that this novel wasn't continued. I was so sad when I got to the point where the author stopped writing, but at least it didn't end on a sad note I guess.
揭示劇透 i love this work, i love this so bad. i feel so bad, who was that dck head? to said those things to you?is he/she perfect? tell them to write their own and fck off. gosh i wanna hurt someone so bad 😠😠😠 you see dear author you made a one hella work of art, we really really appreciate this work of yours. this is one of the best so far, it is exciting and blood chilling, i wanna know the secrets left behind, i miss erza so bad, im really looking forward to the stories , pleaaaase continue this 😭😭😭
Shoot. This one is sooo fckin good , this one is sooo awesome, i hope the author continue this work of art, i feel bad for those peope who dont appreciate this artwork, i can only say that this one is one of the best ive read here. I really hope the story can continue 😭😭😭
I've really really enjoyed reading your book, your characters are enjoyable and your world sounds stunning, I can't wait for the next part of your story
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I hope that this novel isn't finished or is being dropped, I really wanna see what happens when Erza knows the truth about Beel, and what she does about it will she forgive her big brother for leaving her like that or will she shed tears of joy knowing hes still alive...and I wanna see what kind of ruler she will be. Will she be a kind ruler or rule by force!! I still have yet to see, my imagination on seeing what the future of this webnovel holds is still yet to meet my expectations...I've read this novel inside and out and yet it still fascinates me. Only one thing I can describe about this webnovel and it is an absolute masterpiece! I truly hope to read the very last chapter or should I say "final ending" as a bookworm this book caught my attention and I wish to fully satisfy my 'bookworm desires' and that can only be done by reading the end of it. Every bookworms worse nightmare is not being able to finish a book which is deemed worthy of it's precious words of art. A treasure among treasures is worthy of being read if it catches the eyes of it's reader!.
Author have mercy on us na we need an update please continue the novel its sososososo interesting that i cant even get my mind off it can't bring myself to delete the novel either
I hope you'll continue writing. Just don't mind the people who want to destroy your work . They're just jealous about your work or stories. Just pleaaaassseeeee UD sooooonnnn 😊😊😊😊
I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much ....
This is an awesome book, unfortunately someone bad mouthed the author so it has stopped til further notice, still a good book to read. It is full of action and the MC doesn't always win but it still has so many good points in the book and so much left unanswered that you don't want to stop reading especially after it stops, if only there were such arrogant, self centered, idiotic, baboon related, fudge knuckles in the the world, this would be an even better book (talking about the person who arrogantly bad mouthed the awesome author).
Tsalagi you are a human trash.. The autor said that this story is inspired by outher stories. What the **** is wrong with this... all historys are inspired by another history. Thx you just ****ed 230 or more persons who like thid story... Despicable human trash.
This was the first book i read on here and i have absolutely fell in love with it. Please dont give up. I hope that those haters dont stop you writing and i really hope to continue reading more of your works i the future if you make the decision to continue. Nevertheless if this is where erza's story ends (really hope it isnt though) then i wish tou well for the future.
Don't stop...keep writing..I am having lots of fun in this story which is unique and have its own charm.Whatever changes you made is interesting to read ...keep it up.
Please you gotta write more!! Continue, who cares what they think? Yours is better in more ways than one and a story can be told in more than one way. Don't take out your anger on us readers by quoting your novel! You might just make me die of a heart attack or a nervous breakdown if you choose to stop the novel. I'm serious right now. Because, I'm like in suspense right now and its not good for my fragile heart. Please keep on writing , this story is very very good, and it'd be a shame if its left untold
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I see you have not updated in the past week, but you updated almost daily B4 that... then I go to check if you said why in your most recent chapter, and what do I see? "There is no need for me to continue something which people don't appreciate it that they got it for free." ... I think that is only something a quitter should say... if you are a quitter, then feel free to let that stop you (in my mind all quitters are loosers), otherwise continue writing, if nothing else, in spite of the hater! Positive Feedback: I think you have a well planned out, well executed story that you are doing really well on... all characters seem unique and the plot is not predictable as I would sometimes expect with these stories.;,;. Personal Feedback: If you will continue writing this story, I will continue reading... otherwise it's pointless, and I will drop it here at chapter 5... please reply letting me know which I should hold to.;,;. Score: SoU: 4/5 Rest: 5/5
Amazing work by exalted emperor. So real and I can really relate. Thanks for a good work done. I'll be certain to follow you all the way through. Thumps up to you
So so in love with the storyline. Please don't stop here. Just know that those haters are meant to keep you going. You're doing an excellent job. You're so talented. Keep it up and please continue.
Awesome storyline. Everything on point and so captivating. You really feel alive reading every chapter and it feels like you're even part of the the whole story. Indeed you're an exalted emperor. Don't mind the haters and keep up the excellent work you're doing. Hope to keep receiving further updates
Yeah shameless is the word that schould be used to describe you. I really liked this story, but the moment i noticed, that i magically know some parts even though it should have been an original, was the moment it went south. If you had put it up as a fanfic and only....i mean really only....used some names of other stories or characteristics of them i would not have mind it. But stealing, in such a obvious manner, and exclaim it as your own.....man know some shame. You thought yourself smart huh? If some of you dont know what i mean here are some examples: World God Empress Chapter 94 Senior Envoys During that night in the guise of darkness, a gigantic flying beast suddenly landed on top of the city lord's mansion. Thanks to the bright illuminations around the building, the shape of the flying beast could be roughly determined. It looked like an eagle with pitch black feathers and its wings spanning out to around twenty meters. From its back, two figures suddenly emerged and descended onto the ground below with their clothes billowing in the wind. In the courtyard, Caesar stood by with a group of soldiers standing behind him nervously. Yet there was also an expectant look on each one of their faces. "This one is honoured to greet the envoys!" ... *Dong dong dong dong…* In the early morning of the Mole Clan's courtyards, the large knocking sounds of the door suddenly broke the silence. Chaotic Sword God Chapter 235: Senior Envoys In the pitch dark night, a large flying magical beast suddenly descended upon the city lord’s mansion. Thanks to the bright illuminations by the building, the shape of the flying magical beast could be roughly determined. It looked like an eagle with pitch black feathers and its wings spanning out to around twenty meters. On its back, two figures suddenly dropped down onto ground below with their clothes billowing in the wind. In the courtyard, Yun Li stood by with a group of soldiers standing behind him nervously. Yet there was also an expectant look on each one of their faces. As the flying magical beast descended, Yun Li continued to wait, but the moment it drew close, Yun Li called out to the two figures, “This one is honored to greet the envoys!” …… “Dong dong dong dong…” In the early morning of the Kai clan’s courtyards, the large knocking sounds of the door suddenly broke the early silence. Is it still your own blood sweat and tears if you steal in such a manner. my blood boils. shameless shameless
Well, here goes my first review, honestly, so far i love the story, i binged everything in 1 day and felt empty afterwards xD I certainly like the way this novel is written and this really seems like a hidden gem that's not getting the recognition it deserves. I only wish there were more chapters or more releases :( Anyway, good job and keep it up author.
If you are hesitating to read this, I am telling you I definitely recommend this to those readers who like actions as the author describe them in a very detailed manner. It is kind of slow paced but the story is good and enjoyable. Although the characters are in the age of a child, the way they handle their ‘relationships’ are very ****-like and not like their age at all. This isn’t like a typical revenge story because the mc just wants to find out about her real identity and become powerful to protect her loved ones. If you want an overpowered mc, you should pick this book and follow her journey into achieving her ambitions and solving the mysteries of her life.
Every chapter is intriguing. You kind of find yourself in it. Really interesting. Keep sending updates daily because I can't wait and look forward to those updates every morning. Big ups to the author.
really dont know what to write. BUT ONE THING I MUST TELL YOU, this novel always left you hanging/wanting for more!!!! hahahaha some of the character cant remember all of them now i guess i need a list. but the chapter always kinda short
The MC is ridiculously OP and behaves very arrogantly and spoiled. She has never gone through any kind of hardships (other than not knowing her birthparents, but she's still brought up with lots of love from her adopted mother), but because she has memory of a certain test/illusion, that she went through as a young child, she views herself as a major victim and kills whoever she wants, even though the people she kills have done her nothing wrong other than maybe, just maybe, become a hindrance or enemy to her in the future. I found it kind of hard to continue reading this novel about a spoiled teenager on a killing spree.
Excellent story very riveting plot and outstanding heroine. The storyline takes you from magic to steely determination in one fell swoop. Ezra is brilliant and very determined can’t wait for more.
Excellent story, great characters, the translation isn't the best but it is good mostrar of the tome. The development of the story is really good.
Badass mc, interesting side characters that feel like actual people, great world building and never has any chapters that fell like they are not needed!! What more could you ask for? This is in my top 3 light novels that I have read and I would highly recommend you giving it a try as I believe it is worth your time. 4.9/5
me after 4 years of it being dropped still coming in to check once every while hoping for a miracle 😔😭😭😭