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Instant System

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作者: SacredThree

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摘要

Anyone could look at Julius and say he’s just an ordinary dude.

His talent for martial arts is normal.

His background is normal.

Even his looks are normal.

What no one knows is that he is anything but ordinary.

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daoist_xuanshen

i can see a whole lot of potential for this! i actually really like it so far, don’t understand why more people haven’t read this, and why people are giving bad comments, because to be honest, i don’t see anything bad, keep on updating!

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Doris_Clinton

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Katheriner

Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

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Ken_Ringdomstory

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True_Sheol

Another dead novel that has been abandoned for several months. The characters and writing is mediocre with little world building or engagement. Don't bother.

5yr
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GodharemZ

It's actually ****y 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕😈😈🖕🖕🖕😈🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🤬🖕🖕🖕🤔😾🖕😠🖕😡🖕🤬🤬😾😾😠🤬🤬😠🤬🤬😡😡🤬😠😠😈😈🖕

5yr
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Overlord24

It’s still early in the story but the postential is clearly their. Love the pace so far and can’t wait to see the MC develop into a great character. Keep up the good work author 👍

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