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Waking up in fucked up world and with a father that has mental disorder is not what I had in mind. at least I have a system
I might change some things from the books and the show. Don't expect too much on the quality because this is my first time writing a novel.
I don't own GOT or asoiaf books everything belongs to GRRM. writing for entertaiment only.
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This story is aimed for the younger readers, but it's a fanfic of the Game of thrones, so M.C has to be a bit more cruel. Like seriously. It won't make any sense if his mentality stays the same as a kid from earth, specially since he has seen the cruelty of that world. Why is the title 'kingslayer', bad.? He cares about a fuckin' title so much that he can see his own mother being violated.? That was just one of the examples. Shouldn't have chosen the game of thrones if there were going to be that many timeskips. The action scenes are not as detail as you would expect from a game of thrones fanfic either.!
This feels more like a draft than anything else. The action is rushed, worldbuilding too fast, and the time skip too brutal. I advise to scrap it and redo it properly
I'm a fan of GOT so i really like this novel MC is op but that's ok. I wish you could make your chapter release 2/day if you can't it is ok as long as there's a release I'll vote for this novel everyday 👍👍👍
This story is cool so continue. Game of Thrones in fanfiction is cool and as an author you do a good job and there is a good development for the story so continue
Sorry to inform all of you readers that the author have passed away. I will be the first to miss him. Our prayers are with you and your family. Thanks again for your work.😶
Started out really good, but the longer I read the worse it got. Story is filled with irrational decisions and actions taken by the MC with little explanation or reason behind them. For instance, the MC builds up a power base in Essos but after an assassination attempt (wasn't even the first, but I guess this attempt was 'special' or something), he freaks out, packs up, and decides to hide in Dorne where he doesn't have the support of his massive army to guard him or his sister. The author does this for little other reason other than him wanting the MC to be in Westeros to 'watch the books plot unfold with his own eyes'... Its just one of the many plot points the author forces to happen in this not-thought-out-at-all story...
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i was excited to read this fanfic, but was a little disappointed, it is not that bad, but i found that the story was too rushed and fast paced, plus the writing was a little childish. i read the fanfic that inspired you, and it was one of the best, so maybe it influenced me into having too high of an expectation to your story, but i believe that you will continue improving as you write so don't give up.
Great fanfiction. The mc is as op as a normal human can be (only thing magical about him is that he can use dragon fire) and i like it. Hope it's not dropped. .........................................................................................................
This is beautiful.... pls dont stop writing because it is truly oh too beautiful. pls also as a suggestion he should have planted his own spies over the last few years in Westeros including the tyrells
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Any chance you will not drop this one and continue any chance there will be a continuous wave of chapters you intent to publish anyway like your fanfic pls keep it up 👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Perfect Game of Thrones fan-ficion, i read like a madman and now can wait for more realeses. The timing, MC and system are perfect congrats to author.
Oof finally found something different to read, with all those naruto-one piece types it was too much. Never thought i would find a GOT fanfic, thank you for writing this. Liked the character you have choosen to be the MC. So far too good. Will you add gore and other (*wink wink) elements? Please make it 2 chaps a day and dont drop. Thanks again👻👻👻
The story has been great, so far. If you are looking a good read then i would recommend this. It doesn't feel forced and the mc is within the bounds of being a system mc. would recommend, 4.2 if only because there are not that many chapters yet.
I 💕 this ✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑💯⚡️⚡️💯💯💯💯💯supports keep writing I love how the mc is op some characters in game of thrones need some face slapping
whats there not to like ........ so far so good im loving the got theme too good ...... this can go many ways i look forward to reading more but plllllllllllleeeeeeeease author-kun release more for my valerian steel saber is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to endure the thirst for more!
Game of Thrones? And the Harem too? *nodded* You deserve 5 stars from me! ________________________________404___________________----__________________________
I've only read 6 chapters so far, but i can already tell its going to be a good story. Author, please don't drop this. You might not get a lot of people in the first few days to couple weeks, but with a story that's really good so far, they will flock to it soon enough. Also, don't forget to Incorporate the classic george rr martin story telling style. Dont want the mc to have it too easy.
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5 star for me but could you please somehow turn it to a harem it's game of thrones after all MC already stated that he will have a harem (don't want an ****** we have Jamie and Cersei for that part 😏). Can't wait for Tyrion Lannister to appear 😡😎