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章節 43: Major?!

Alan couldn't believe what he was seeing. The richest businessman was comforting the daughter he threw out on the street.

But something was off in his mind, 'they look quite alike, it looks like they from the same family'. When Alan was thinking about it he caught on the word 'family'.

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"Why do you two look so alike?"

Hearing this, Valencia and James looked at Alan. "Of course we look alike. We are family after all."

Alan didn't get at first, but then it came to his mind. "WAIT! So you're the one she hooked up with!" while saying this he pointed at James. "I don't need to tell you anything".

"Anyway, how did you get here?". Valencia could not believe he found her here on purpose.

Hearing her answer, Alan started to tell them what has happened in the past years.

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"So if that is true, can I see my brothers tomorrow". Alan paused for a second to think 'this isn't going to affect anything so I might as well agree to it'

Alan looked at Valencia, "Yes you can, you can see them. But you need a pass to go through the military base". Valencia nodded. " We don't have to worry about that, I already have a pass to the military base. We can go right now if you want".

"*sigh* we can go right now, it's only 12 right now" Alan had no choice but to agree, going today. Valencia started to get excited about meeting her little brothers again.

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It didn't take that long get to the base. (like it only took 40 minutes to get there.)

They got there, they had to check their card. They went one by one, checking their cards.

Valencia was the last one to be checked when the soldier checked Valencias. He was in shock, he saluted to Valencia "Major!" Alan looked back to see what was happening, and what he saw shocked him. Even though Valencia knew why she was saluted to she was still shocked. "You don't have to call me that, I retired from being a Major a long time ago."

[past check]

[So Valencia was a major in the army before she was in a coma. Even though she started at the age of 14. It only took a year for her to get to Major. She retired the day she went to a coma.]


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