/ Eastern / An Esper In XianXiaWorld (Reloaded)
摘要
Hello friends, this my re-edited version of my first novel. Although it took so many month, I am finally ready to publish regularly.
As for those who waited for all this time, I apologize for the wait.
Synopsis:
Jiang Jie was a very powerful Esper.
He was so powerful that even he himself would be unable to control it sometimes.
After encountering a man of another dimension and getting bored of his mundane life, he decided to see what exists beyond the fabric of reality surrounding his world.
Using his powers, he tore open a hole in reality and traversed through dimensions, only to find himself in a brand new and exciting world.
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Horrible, story is very slow, the protagonist was strong at first, got weak and then strong, I do not understand anything. This last bow is very boring and boring, he could defeat everyone with a thought, but he stares through a mirror, out of which he is very idiotic and ungrateful. I do not recommend, the previous version was ten times better.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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I'm always waiting for more as you're loyal reader and I look forward to more chapter's and hopefully there there will be more soon very soon. I like the esper in a martial arts world hehe and being op is fun ;þ
I liked how the protagonist didn't jump to rescue anyone, and isn't an a-grade asshole. Nor did he take advantage of his power when the girl rejected him. He didn't kill the cultivator, and even gave him his house for information, also warning. He didnt go on disrespecting and slaughtering any one, so his moral character and views seem to be idealistic but not overly so. The writing though could use some editing. Looking forward to other chapters. Do get a beta reader and an edited please.
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation I really like the concept, hoping you do not abandon him 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
I like this novel cuz of this OP mc that have a godly powers that it bored him to death but i hope that Author will never abandon this treasure ever again...
卷 1 : Divine Wind Continent
- 1 Prologue 6 years ago
- 2 Old Monster Ye’s Bad Luck 6 years ago
- 3 Jiang Chao! 6 years ago
- 4 Jiang Family 6 years ago
- 5 Jiang Family(2) 6 years ago
- 6 When Troubles Comes Knocking 6 years ago
- 7 Jiang Jie Intervenes 6 years ago
- 8 Wang Rong 5 years ago
- 9 Weird! 5 years ago
- 10 I will walk you home! 5 years ago
- 11 The Beautiful Sect Master 5 years ago
- 12 Sect Master's Thoughts 5 years ago
- 13 Hou'er 5 years ago
- 14 Jiang Tao 5 years ago
- 15 The So-called Cultivation 5 years ago
- 16 Arrival of Fang Family 5 years ago
- 17 Fang ZhiLing 5 years ago
- 18 Is This Fate! 5 years ago
- 19 Thoughts! 5 years ago
- 20 The Monkey Show! 5 years ago
- 21 Forbidden Ability: Event Strings Tugging 5 years ago
- 22 Unexpected plot-twists(1) 5 years ago
- 23 Unexpected plot-twists(2) 5 years ago
- 24 Two Vs One(1) 5 years ago
- 25 Two Vs One(2) 5 years ago
- 26 A Terrifying Truth(1) 5 years ago
- 27 A Terrifying Truth(2) 5 years ago
- 28 When the wicked meets the Devil 5 years ago
- 29 An Unexpected Breakthrough 5 years ago
- 30 Conclusion 5 years ago
- 31 Loyal Subjects 5 years ago
- 32 Isolated Ruins 5 years ago
- 33 Calamity of Misty Pearl Pavilion part 1 5 years ago
- 34 The calamity of Misty Pearl Pavilion Part 2 5 years ago
- 35 The calamity of Misty Pearl Pavilion Part 3 5 years ago
After many twists and turns and trying my hand in different types of genres, I am finally back to where I started everything. This novel, although looks like a light-hearted story about the daily life of a op mc, I can assure you that it isn't. There will be plots, twists, unexpected situations and problems that would make our mc to bang his head on the wall to get a solution. you will see through this novel that, even though you have enough power, there are something in the world where you can't solve it through brute force alone. Have fun guys.