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20% The Ultimate Dōjutsu In A Cultivation World (Naruto / Anime System / Another World) / Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Reincarnation of Chaos Emperor Regret Sin

章節 1: Chapter 1: The Reincarnation of Chaos Emperor Regret Sin

"Regret Kyoto Sin, Emperor Of Chaos, oh how you've fallen," an unknown voice said in the dark void

"Who are you?" A young man wearing black combat boots, black cargo pants, a black v-neck t-shirt and a black trench coat, with black chin-length straight hair, slightly covering his right eye, asked of the voice

"My name is Nemesis, Goddess of Revenge, It's good to finally meet you."

"I would say the same, you know, if I knew where I was and what was happening first," The teen responded.

"Well you make an excellent point. This is what my family calls the void. It is a place where figures of great strength are sent once they die"

"So I've died again... I see... but last time I was sent to a world of pure light and met the god Wrath?"

"Ah yes Wrath..." Nemesis grumbled at the mention of the name. "While you were sent to two different places, it was for only slightly different reasons. In your first life, as you were from a world of such low rank, you were unable to achieve a high amount of neither Good nor Bad Karma. While you leaned towards good you barely had enough for reincarnation. This time however, things were different, you reached the rank of GodKing, becoming the Chaos Emperor, ruling over twelve thousand worlds. Although your Bad Karma was incredibly high, with your Sin of Wrath one of the highest I've ever seen, it stills pales in comparison to your Good Karma, giving you enough to reincarnate, with benefits."

"I see, so what might these benefits be?"

"I'm glad you asked. You have been granted three wishes to bring into your reincarnation, along with a few gifts that will be revealed later?" She replied smiling

"Three things you say? Well then..." He began to laugh like a maniac

"Excuse me, are you alright?" She asked

"Oh I'm better than alright, I'm perfect! HAHAHAHAHAHA"

"...oh no..."

It took over half an hour before his laughter ended...

"Alright then Mrs. Nemesis, I have my three wishes," he said with a finally calmed voice

"At last? Fantastic, what might those be?"

"First I would like a Compendium with all knowledge of everything and anything, that I cannot lose and cannot be read by others"

"Done" She immediately said as a podium with a closed two inch thick book titled "Tome of Deathless Knowledge: Chapter of The Chaos Emperor" "The books is nearly infinitely long, so it has been compressed into a much more manageable size, however some knowledge how been sealed until your next incarnation is strong enough"

"I see... Well thank you. My next wish is for The Rinne-Sharingan from the Manga Naruto on Earth. And by Rinne-Sharingan I mean the full thing with all its powers; the ability to switch to previous forms i.e. the Sharingan, Mangekyou Sharingan, and the Rinnegan, along with the ability to use all releases regardless of Kekkei Genkai or Kekkei Tota, along with Yin, Yang and Yin-Yang release," the boy asked with an eager tone

"You sound like you didn't spend over 25,000 years conquering planets, and are just some kid who heard he can live his fandom," Nemesis said defeatedly "But- it had been done"

"Yes!! And for my last wish, I would like to have my most recent life's corpse, with all its equipment of course, I mean I can't have it desecrated by my enemies and looted"

"Uhh... I'll have to ask my superior" she said before a light shined and shined again, her leaving and coming back within two seconds. "Congratulations I have permission to grant your corpse back" A light flashed and a set of black and gold armor appeared floating horizontally in front of Regret

The armor was made of large oddly shaped black plates with gold edges layered into a scale-like design. The plates were like a triangle that was rounded on a cylinder before being attached atop another scale, partially covering the top of it. The helmet was completely destroyed and a wound could be seen through the chest of the armor, coated in blood. Under the helmet the face of a 16-18 year old adolescent in perfect condition, identical to Regret, the only blemish being the blood stains going down form the side of their mouth.

(For image of armor see Ausar the Vile's Vile Armor from the Infinity Blade Trilogy)

Taking a ring off the Chaos Emperor's left hand, Regret put it on his left as well and pointed it at the Chaos Emperor who then disappeared, Regret then placed his left hand on the Tome which also disappeared.

"Well I guess I'm ready..."

"Alright then, preparing reincarnation sequence...." a pillar of light engulfed Regret, "Goodbye Regret Sin, I hope we don't need to meet again too soon!"

With a flash, both Nemesis and Regret were gone, with only the pillar of light still there, which slowly dimmed before dispersing completely, leaving The Void, empty and silent once more.


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Don't worry, the story is just beginning, and the writing will actually be good later. The story will start in a few more chapters, just wait a bit, please?

Sorry for how long it was between when I said I would post the first chapter and when I did, no one will care for my excuses so I wont say them.

I wrote chapters 1-3 in the last 6 hours, and its two in the morning right now so I'll continue writing later today, Sunday, December Second. Chapter 2 and maybe 3 will also be up by then, Bye!

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