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Interesting concept poor execution. The main leads are boring, they aren't interesting to read not to mention the inconsistent of the writing quality.
Like all his other works the grammar is not one of the best, other than that the story isn't bad enough for me to give you 1 star as the updating stability is good and I can't say nothing about the background obviously because it's a fanfiction of one piece.
I don't even know what to say about this story, honestly, I don't know what to say other than that it's not for me, I went. I don't even know what to say about this story, honestly, I don't know what to say other than that it's not for me, I went.
I love this fanfic/novel, even though i don't like the way that the brother is going to take all the one piece characters girl as his harem, but other than that i love everything in this story
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If you want to read a Really good, like Really Really Good Written one-piece fanfiction than consider this fanfic "one-piece this bites" just search it up using that name and I promise you it will blow your sock off It, not an op mc, not a system, not a genius fighter, or anything. It about a guy that wishes to be in One piece than he appears in one piece but with his body like a normal body of a normal person on Earth which is super weak compare to the normal body of any person on One Piece, like one hit from Nami would knock him out for about Five minutes I don't know how to actually make a better synopsis than what is above but just give it a chance and read it, "one-piece this bites" will 100% not disappoint you
was this fanfic ever on royalroad.com because i swear i've seen it there cause i remember being on that website and reading this till yhe authour put it on hiatus,i don't know maybe I'm just tripping
I really like how thIs no el is playing out. i cant wait for the next update hopefully soon. If you need funds to Progress the story just let me know i want to see this no el to the end.[img=update][img=update]
When are you going to updait this fan fiction? Because this light novel is good, but you are letting it go down --------------------------------------------------------------- Ps. I don't understand the people that speak of ******, love between sister and brother is normal but no *** obviously. The harem concept is structured very well, congratulations
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揭示劇透Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés
Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés
System with two ownership is new to me so I try to read this one. so far for me there's something missing on the storyline maybe because of time skip or because the ML having amnesia and disrupting the expected development of story. Or missing POV of the other characters for us reader to understand more about the other characters. Just my own opinion. 🤗🤗🤗🤗
Novel was good around 3.5 stars but the author stopped writing all his novels and kept making excuses saying he is coming back and now he has disappeared for months
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Interesting concept poor execution. The main leads are boring, they aren't interesting to read not to mention the inconsistent of the writing quality.
Like all his other works the grammar is not one of the best, other than that the story isn't bad enough for me to give you 1 star as the updating stability is good and I can't say nothing about the background obviously because it's a fanfiction of one piece.
I don't even know what to say about this story, honestly, I don't know what to say other than that it's not for me, I went. I don't even know what to say about this story, honestly, I don't know what to say other than that it's not for me, I went.
I love this fanfic/novel, even though i don't like the way that the brother is going to take all the one piece characters girl as his harem, but other than that i love everything in this story
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Hard. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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If you want to read a Really good, like Really Really Good Written one-piece fanfiction than consider this fanfic "one-piece this bites" just search it up using that name and I promise you it will blow your sock off It, not an op mc, not a system, not a genius fighter, or anything. It about a guy that wishes to be in One piece than he appears in one piece but with his body like a normal body of a normal person on Earth which is super weak compare to the normal body of any person on One Piece, like one hit from Nami would knock him out for about Five minutes I don't know how to actually make a better synopsis than what is above but just give it a chance and read it, "one-piece this bites" will 100% not disappoint you
was this fanfic ever on royalroad.com because i swear i've seen it there cause i remember being on that website and reading this till yhe authour put it on hiatus,i don't know maybe I'm just tripping
I really like how thIs no el is playing out. i cant wait for the next update hopefully soon. If you need funds to Progress the story just let me know i want to see this no el to the end.[img=update][img=update]
When are you going to updait this fan fiction? Because this light novel is good, but you are letting it go down --------------------------------------------------------------- Ps. I don't understand the people that speak of ******, love between sister and brother is normal but no *** obviously. The harem concept is structured very well, congratulations
👌 incest 👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️👮♀️
揭示劇透Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés
Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés
System with two ownership is new to me so I try to read this one. so far for me there's something missing on the storyline maybe because of time skip or because the ML having amnesia and disrupting the expected development of story. Or missing POV of the other characters for us reader to understand more about the other characters. Just my own opinion. 🤗🤗🤗🤗
Novel was good around 3.5 stars but the author stopped writing all his novels and kept making excuses saying he is coming back and now he has disappeared for months