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Cute story. The back story maybe could have been done in a Prologue. I didn't care for those chapters as much. I liked the actual story more. Are vampires known in the world and accepted? He seemed to take her being a vampire with a pretty chill attitude. The dialogue is pretty natural and I enjoyed how light it was. It is a good feel good kind of story. Only some minor errors, but nothing that really is offensive. We are all human, so no biggie. Good job. I wish there was a bit more description of the setting. You did a good job in the beginning of chapter 1, but nothing much since then. Good job
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It is a good book.. Giving readers something fresh to look for and that is amazing. I really appreciate the writer and I'm going to be so addicted
Despite myself I'm enjoying this. Perhaps because of snarky mc. Reminds me of Hotel Transylvania and that vampire documentary. Patriarch Petyr? Lol Hope there won't bee too much sappy romance and decent comedy in future haps.
This is a promising novel. It has a lot of breathing room, and needs to grow a little in terms of bringing out the emotional parts of the story, but the idea is sound, and the writing doesn't really feel rough. Few grammar mistakes, and I can see the comedy. If you want a light read, this is a good top ten pick, everyone. Give it a try!
Hello, this is the author. I hope you enjoy this romantic comedy novel. Have a nice day and good luck in your (love) life! -----------------------------
Story Premise (5 out of 5): - A vampire romance story but with a nice twist. I like that. Writing Quality (5 out of 5): - Good array of vocabulary and smooth grammar in each chapters. A first-person POV which has not been done in a long while, specially in this website. Easy to read and the flow of it is good. Story Development (5 out of 5): - What can I say? I like it! The initial chapters already set a temporary goal, which is nice. The pacing is great. Good flow of the story. Character Design (4 out of 5): - I'm a little critical on this one. I only know how Chloe looks like, but Owen needs more description. And also Chloe's siblings. The dialogues are great! Rare to see that these days. Each characters have distinct personalities that make each one identifiable. World (4 out of 5): - It's modern day( I guess?). I know where the characters are and what they're doing, so that's good. I just hope that I know where they are in real life if it's set in real time. And one last thing. This story piqued my interest, and it''s mainly due to the chemistry between Chloe and Owen. Good stuff. I'll be sure to read this as I have it in my library now.
Cute story. The back story maybe could have been done in a Prologue. I didn't care for those chapters as much. I liked the actual story more. Are vampires known in the world and accepted? He seemed to take her being a vampire with a pretty chill attitude. The dialogue is pretty natural and I enjoyed how light it was. It is a good feel good kind of story. Only some minor errors, but nothing that really is offensive. We are all human, so no biggie. Good job. I wish there was a bit more description of the setting. You did a good job in the beginning of chapter 1, but nothing much since then. Good job
揭示劇透 It is a good book.. Giving readers something fresh to look for and that is amazing. I really appreciate the writer and I'm going to be so addicted
Despite myself I'm enjoying this. Perhaps because of snarky mc. Reminds me of Hotel Transylvania and that vampire documentary. Patriarch Petyr? Lol Hope there won't bee too much sappy romance and decent comedy in future haps.
This is a promising novel. It has a lot of breathing room, and needs to grow a little in terms of bringing out the emotional parts of the story, but the idea is sound, and the writing doesn't really feel rough. Few grammar mistakes, and I can see the comedy. If you want a light read, this is a good top ten pick, everyone. Give it a try!
Hello, this is the author. I hope you enjoy this romantic comedy novel. Have a nice day and good luck in your (love) life! -----------------------------
Story Premise (5 out of 5): - A vampire romance story but with a nice twist. I like that. Writing Quality (5 out of 5): - Good array of vocabulary and smooth grammar in each chapters. A first-person POV which has not been done in a long while, specially in this website. Easy to read and the flow of it is good. Story Development (5 out of 5): - What can I say? I like it! The initial chapters already set a temporary goal, which is nice. The pacing is great. Good flow of the story. Character Design (4 out of 5): - I'm a little critical on this one. I only know how Chloe looks like, but Owen needs more description. And also Chloe's siblings. The dialogues are great! Rare to see that these days. Each characters have distinct personalities that make each one identifiable. World (4 out of 5): - It's modern day( I guess?). I know where the characters are and what they're doing, so that's good. I just hope that I know where they are in real life if it's set in real time. And one last thing. This story piqued my interest, and it''s mainly due to the chemistry between Chloe and Owen. Good stuff. I'll be sure to read this as I have it in my library now.