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章節 1590: Endure

Though she was quite strong, Theo's stamina was not unlimited, so, after playing around for the better part of three hours, the fun gradually came to an end. Afterward, she was beyond exhausted, but, like an affectionate cat, she lay across Vahn's lap, emulating the sound of purring as he stroked her hair and body. His hand would meander about periodically, but, more often than not, it would end up near Theo's butt, causing her to nuzzle against him whenever he gave it a gentle squeeze...

At the same time that Vahn was caressing her body, Theo was returning the favor, a silken glove on her right hand as she absentmindedly stroked his still-erect member. There was a glazed look in her eyes, and, though they had never had sex, Theo had become rather fond of her Master's marginally oversized meat rod. It was a little excessive, but, much like the man it belonged to, it was incredibly warm, and, despite appearing intimidating at a glance, she knew it would never hurt her. Rather, at some point in the not-so-distant future, she knew it would bring her unparalleled pleasure and an unequivocal sense of comfort.

Seeing Theo's mouth edge closer to his shaft, Vahn lightly smacked her butt, muttering, "It seems the kitty isn't quite satisfied..."

Without any discernible sense of shame, Theo released a sonorous 'Nyaa~' before languidly raising her body to a seated position. Then, after a bit of adjustment, she was straddling his waist, her labia wrapping around his startlingly hot rod so that she could grind against him. She was exceptionally tired, but, knowing they would soon be parting ways, Theo didn't want to just fall asleep and waste the night away...

Understanding Theo's thoughts, Vahn just lightly shook his head, a wry yet affectionate smile on his face as he extended his hands to pinch her perky nipples. They were a lighter shade than the rest of her body, their base coloration a pale pink that made them stand out quite a bit. If not for the large crest at the center of her chest, they would have been the most dominant feature amidst the gentle brown slopes.

If he were being honest, Vahn was a little annoyed whenever he saw Vrixho's crest, but, unless Theo wanted it removed, he had no intention of bringing it up. Instead, he intended to learn a little more about Vrixho's character when the opportunity presented itself...

Due to her Master's use of [Hands of Nirvana], Theo's hips gradually slowed to a stop as she steeled herself against his teasing. She was forced to bite her lip, her eyes shut as she fought the urge to try and stop his actions. What she didn't expect was, just as it started to become unbearable, he moved his hands from gently rolling her nipples to cupping her face. Her fur-covered ears began to waggle against her will, and, even before she opened her eyes, Theo already knew what her Master had in mind, her mouth parting in anticipation.

After pulling Theo close enough that their lips could brush against each other, Vahn surprised Theo quite a bit by whispering, "I want to form a Pactio with you..."

Though she would normally wait for permission, a shudder ran through Theo's body as a heavy volume of love juices erupted from her lower body, staining Vahn's stomach and the bed beneath. Her first instinct was to apologize, but, before she could form the words, Vahn sealed her lips with his own, gently kissing her until she was able to calm enough to answer, "Please...I want it...a Pactio with Master..."

---

Not far from where he was sharing an intimate moment with Theo, a very similar scene was playing out in the room Vahn shared with Eva. She was also wearing nothing but silky white lingerie, and, as a 'precaution' against him going too far with Theo, she had been keeping him company for the last three hours. She had resolved herself to having sex, but, knowing she wasn't 'truly' ready, Vahn had managed to keep his sensibilities despite having two youthful beauties allowing him to lead them as he pleased...

With Eva straddling his lap in much the same way as Theo, Vahn ran his thumb along her bottom lip, an impassioned yet reflective look on his face as he muttered, "She said yes...are you ready?"

Hearing Vahn's question, Eva swallowed hard, a ruddy hue extending all the way down to her neck as she answered, "Just do it..."

Without waiting further, Vahn began to kiss Eva rather passionately as a magic circle seemed to draw itself beneath the sofa. Even the creator of the Pactio system might not be able to compete with him in its use, so, even without using the special chalk, Vahn was able to produce the magic circle in less than three seconds.

Generally speaking, the person with weaker magical power would become the Ministra in a Pactio, but, due to the influence of his Source Energy and the willingness of the participants, Vahn was able to retain his status as the Magister. This was extremely easy with Theo, as she sincerely viewed him as her Master, but, in Eva's case, Vahn had to spend the last three hours 'convincing' her to entrust herself to him. Though this had been made easier by the four years they had spent together, it was still difficult for Eva to fully commit to a relationship.

Even now, Eva still believed she was beyond redemption, so, rather than say she didn't trust him, it was more accurate to say she didn't trust herself. The last four years had helped to melt the walls around her heart, but, until she could complete her vengeance, she was unable to allow herself to move forward. She had a fear deeply rooted in her heart that warned her of ever getting truly close to people, a trauma engraved into her very existence by the Mage of the Beginning...

As the light from the magic circle began to gradually fade away, a rather ornate tarot-like card fell to the ground. It was customary to grab the Pactio card to determine what kind of Artifact had been obtained, but, without minding the card in the slightest, Vahn and Eva continued to kiss for nearly ten minutes before the latter finally turned her face to the side, gasping for air.

Seeing Eva's tomato-red face, Vahn's smile became even more affectionate as he gently guided her to look back at him. Her icy-blue eyes appeared slightly hazy in the low-light of the room, and, even if she tried to hide it, Vahn could see the love contained within. Thus, despite knowing she would be troubled by his words, Vahn mustered up all his sincerity, stating, "I love you, Evangeline Athanasia Katherine McDowell...if that card shows the symbol for 'Eternal Partners', I hope you'll finally accept my proposal..."

Hearing Vahn's words, Eva furrowed her brows quite a bit as a conflicted look flashed across her countenance. She had recently been considering whether or not she wanted to live the life of a mortal after they defeated the Mage of the Beginning. Immortality had brought her a lot of pain, but, despite her misgivings, she ultimately nodded her head before asking in a meek voice, "If it doesn't...are you finally going to stop proposing to me every day...?"

Without any delay, Vahn shook his head, plainly stating, "No way. If it doesn't say Eternal Partners, that just means I'll need to work harder in the future. I've told you countless times, Eva...no matter what, I'm not going to give up on you. Even if you-"

Before Vahn could say anything about her falling in love with someone else, Eva covered his mouth with both of her hands, a slightly angry look on her face as she said, "I told you not to say stuff like that..."

After waiting for Vahn to nod his head, Eva removed her hands from his mouth, leaning over to pick up her Pactio card. She was actually extremely nervous, as, for a number of reasons, she could easily imagine it showing the symbol for eternity. Vahn held the most important position in her heart, and, if he had been more 'forceful' in his methods, she wasn't confident she could actually resist him...

As this thought crossed her mind, Eva cautiously flipped over her Pactio card at an angle that Vahn wouldn't be able to see. The moment she saw her own appearance on the card, the redness of her face compounded. Illusory steam began to rise from her head, and, without even reading the runes and text on the card's face, Eva hid it against her chest, shouting, "You can't look...!" on instinct.

Before Vahn could try to coax her into showing him the card, Eva floated free from his lap before taking things a step further by teleporting away. This left the former with a wry smile as he sat alone and naked on the sofa. He was tempted to give chase, but, knowing how quickly Eva could resort to violence when she was like this, he decided to give her a minute or two to calm down first...

---

Knowing it wouldn't be too long before Vahn came looking for her, Eva found a secluded place in the middle of the jungle. Then, after manifesting some clothes to properly cover her body, she, very slowly, took a peek at her Pactio card. The image on the surface caused a fresh shade of crimson to creep onto her face, but, rather than look away, Eva inspected it closely, her throat feeling tense and dry as she read the words 'Socium Aeternum' near the bottom.

Though she had thought herself prepared, Eva's legs became weak when she read the words. This actually wasn't too surprising, but, when she saw what she was wearing in the Pactio image, it was hard to remain calm. After all, rather than a normal raiment or artifact, the version of herself in the image was, quite literally, wearing a white wedding dress. She was even holding what appeared to be a bouquet of Orange Blossoms, five-petaled lily-like flowers that represented 'eternal love'.

Feeling a little overwhelmed, Eva buried her face into her hands in a vain attempt to try and calm herself down. Whenever she peeked between the cracks of her fingers, however, the card was still there, a vibrant smile visible on the veiled woman depicted in the card. Part of her was tempted to activate it, but, knowing Vahn would appear shortly, she quickly dismissed that thought. Then, for a very brief moment, she considered ripping up the card then and there, but, imagining the look on Vahn's face, she simply didn't have the heart to do so.

Realizing she had made an irrevocable mistake, Eva couldn't help but lightly mutter, "Fuck..." as she stared blankly back at the card. She knew Vahn wouldn't force her against her will, but, now that it had come to this, it was almost impossible to refuse his proposal. Rather, she had already agreed to his terms before and after making the Pactio, so, even if he didn't insist, her pride would compel her to agree. This made her feel simultaneously exhilarated and terrified, feelings of warmth contending against the urge to pull out her own hair...

Just as Eva began to consider the viability of 'running away', she sensed a subtle fluctuation in the surrounding space. This was Vahn's way of letting her know he was about to arrive, as, if he really wanted to, even she wouldn't be able to sense his movement through the void. Others had to force a transfer using a phenomenal amount of magic power, but, as if it took absolutely no effort at all, Vahn was able to 'walk' through the void to reach his destination in an instant.

Realizing it was 'impossible' to run away, Eva's shoulders drooped slightly as a familiar warmth appeared to her right. She made no attempt to stop Vahn from picking up the card, her long bangs more than capable of covering her eyes when her head was lowered...

---

Though he was momentarily distracted by the stunning image of Eva in an ornate white dress, Vahn managed to tear his eyes away long enough to read the words written across the bottom. He could feel his heart palpitate before his brain fully processed them, but, having noticed Eva's state before he arrived, he did his best to restrain his excitement. He wanted nothing more than to flit away into the moonless sky with her in his embrace, but, until she had officially said yes, doing something so 'extreme' probably wasn't the best idea...

Since he might not get a better moment, Vahn decided to push his luck a bit by moving to the front of Eva and taking a knee. Her head raised slightly in response to his actions, so, taking advantage of the opportunity, Vahn preferred one of his proudest masterworks. Like every wedding ring he had forged, it was the absolute pinnacle of what he could achieve as a blacksmith, and, though it looked relatively simple, it was one of only two SS-Rank Artifacts he had ever forged...

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[Endurance]

Rank: SS (Divine)

P.Def: 0

M.Def: 0

Abilities: Indestructible(Divine), Yin Elemental Affinity Increase(SS), Magic Nullification(S), Physical Nullification(S), Abnormal Status Immunity(S), Soulbound(Unbound)

Use: 'Permanence': For the duration of three minutes, the user is completely impervious to all forms of harm, cannot be bound, and has unlimited control over Yin, Darkness, and Ice Elemental Energy. (Warning: Item destroyed after use.)

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Feeling a powerful resonance with the ring proferred forth by Vahn, Eva's eyes instinctually followed it's movements. Part of her was terrified by it, but, compared to the overwhelming anticipation that was steadily rising within her heart, it was completely negligible. She knew Vahn must have forged it himself, and, despite never seeing it before, Eva had the distinct impression the ring was an intrinsic part of her, something precious and irreplaceable...

Though he had proposed thousands of times before, this was the first time Vahn had brought out a ring. This added a palpable amount of gravitas to the situation, to the point Eva didn't even register the long speech Vahn had prepared. It was only when he called her name that she pulled her eyes away from the ring, meeting his loving gaze as he asked, "Eva...will you marry me...?"

Unlike all the other times he had asked her, Eva didn't immediately answer. Instead, she just stared at him, her blue eyes showing an incomprehensible mix of emotions, all buried behind a surprising mask of calm. This continued for nearly an entire minute, her expression slowly transitioning into a deadpan as she averted her eyes and answered, "Fine...I'll marry you...idiot..."

Unable to contain himself any further, Vahn wrapped up Eva in his arms, and, like a rocket aiming for a distant world, he took off into the night sky, laughing like an idiot the entire way...

(A/N: Alternate Titles: 'Oh my...','Eva stealing the show xD...','Rocket man~')

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章節 1591: Understanding

Around the same time that Vahn was being berated by a flustered and embarrassed Eva, Theo was eagerly trying on her raiment. Though it lacked the designation of Eternal Partners, the rarest type of Pactio, it was anything but common. Near the bottom of the card, where is denoted the type of Pactio that had been formed, Theo's had the words Servitum and Fides in bold text. This literally translated to Servitude and Faith, so, while not nearly as rare as Eternal Partners, it demonstrated that the relationship between them was rather 'unique', to say the least...

Fortunately, while Theo was very serious about their relationship as Master and Sub, she was, first and foremost, a future Empress who enjoyed brawling. Her raiment consisted of a black halter-top that left most of her back and shoulders exposed, black armbands that covered her arms down to the fingertips, and a rather baggy pair of white trousers that tapered at the calves. To complete the outfit, she had a hempen rope tied around her waist, light plating hanging on the sides, and leather wrappings around her feet that left the toes and heels exposed.

Overall, Theo's outfit made her look like a martial artist, and, with her unique Asauchi, consisting of plated gauntlets, it wasn't difficult to imagine her physically beating her opponents into submission. As for her Artifact, 'Arma Asura', it took on the form of a flower-patterned golden disk that floated behind her back. From this disk, two large white arms would manifest, each capable of imitating her movements or acting independently to protect her body. It was an exceptionally suitable Artifact for Theo, and, though it would take some time to master, she was bound to become a monster at hand to hand combat.

Since she was using Vahn's energy to manifest her Raiment and Artifact, Theo found herself filled to the brim with energy. If not for them being inside, Vahn could easily imagine her attacking him just to test her Artifact on a strong opponent. Fortunately, despite being a little excitable at times, Theo was a rather sensible young woman who took others into consideration. It was currently very late at night, so, rather than try to convince him to do battle, she deactivated her Artifact before straddling his lap in her Raiment and expressing her 'gratitude' until the sky outside began to illuminate...

---

After they had both calmed down a bit, Vahn sat with Eva's back to his chest as they perched upon the branches of a massive World Tree. It was only around a year old but its height had managed to exceed 100m under the influence of the rather ridiculous amount of Elemental Energy that existed within the Diorama. Now, it served as a secondary line of defense, protecting the stability of Space and Time within the Diorama.

Even if an enemy was literally capable of destroying a planet, they would find it extremely difficult to destroy Theo's Resort Diorama. It had effectively become a 'Sub-Realm' at this point, and, in the future, Vahn was intending to use it to shelter the beaten, downtrodden, and exploited. At the very least, he wanted to provide sanctuary to the Elves, as, no matter how much time passed, it was hard to imagine people giving up on trying to exploit them.

While discussing various matters of the future, including their wedding, Eva made it very clear that she didn't want to get married until they defeated the Mage of the Beginning. This wasn't much of a hurdle, but, as if to light a fire under his butt, she took things a step further by saying she wanted to preserve her chastity until their honeymoon. This had come as quite the surprise, as, more often than not, she was the one enticing or trying to seduce him.

It didn't take long for Vahn to realize Eva was placing the restriction on herself, not him, so, after a rather potent silence, he ultimately nodded his head. He knew it wouldn't actually take much effort on his part to convince her otherwise, but, imagining how meaningful it would be if their first time was on their honeymoon, he decided to just go with the flow...

When Vahn nodded his head, Eva felt an incredible amount of relief. She was afraid that she would gradually lose her desire for revenge if her relationship with the over-affectionate idiot progressed even further than it already had. Now, even if she lost her patience and became desperate, she was confident Vahn would be able to rein her in. He placed an inordinate amount of value in each of his promises, so, unless something completely unexpected occurred, she didn't have to worry about doing anything 'stupid' before obtaining her revenge...

More confident in Vahn's restraint than her own, Eva shimmied around until she was face-to-face with her new fiance. Then, after linking her arms around his neck, she whispered, "You're a real idiot, you know that...?" before laying her head against his chest.

Rather than take offense to Eva's words, Vahn just lightly chuckled, his arms gently embracing her body as he replied, "I love you too, Eva..."

Feeling a sour sensation in her nose, Eva took a few deep breaths to calm down. Then, even though it caused her to feel embarrassed to the point of wanting to scream out, she managed to reply in a meek, almost inaudible, tone, saying, "I love you too...dummy..."

---

Having stayed up all night, Eva and Theo both appeared exhausted by the time everyone gathered together for breakfast. This was noted by everyone present, but, rather than say anything, everyone just enjoyed breakfast in relative silence. It was only when the table had been cleared that Eva broke the silence, surprising even Vahn by saying, "Though it won't take place any time soon, Vahn and I have agreed to be wed..."

Immediately following Eva's announcement, an oppressive silence descended upon the table before Theo, showing a bit of confusion on her face, asked, "Weren't the two of you already engaged...?"

As Vahn often referred to Eva as his fiancee, nearly everyone outside of the Diorama believed they were engaged. This had been the case for more than four years, so, with Vahn and Eva sharing a bed every night, Theo, Arika, and even Asuna had all assumed they were actually engaged.

Hearing Theo's response, Eva found herself at a loss for words. She suddenly felt like she had fallen into some kind of carefully laid trap, but, knowing Vahn, this was extremely unlikely. It wasn't that he was incapable of scheming, but, when it came to the people he cared about, he was transparent to the point that even Asuna could see through him.

After recovering her senses, Eva extended her left hand to show the ring Vahn had given her after she accepted his proposal. It didn't stand out much at a glance, but, once you looked directly at it, it seemed to gradually pull you in. It seemed to become progressively more beautiful the longer you stared at it, and, after learning about its effects, even Eva had been completely gobsmacked...

Seeing the ring on Eva's finger, another silence permeated the room as everyone's eyes fixated on the simple yet exceptionally refined white band. Even Arika, who had grown up never caring about such ornamentations, couldn't help feeling captivated by the blue gemstone at the center. It gave off the impression of looking into the night sky, almost as if an entire cosmos had been condensed into the size of a pea.

Preempting any requests to have rings of their own, Vahn broke the silence, a calm smile on his face as he produced a few neatly packaged gifts, saying, "While it might not compare to an engagement ring, I put my heart and soul into forging each of these. I hope you will accept them..."

Without leaving anyone out, Vahn passed around gifts to Arika, Theo, Asuna, Fenrir, Xiao Bai, and, much to their surprise, the entire assortment of Chacha sisters. Even Chachazero ended up getting a brand new set of knives, each graded as B-Rank armaments. She had a propensity for cutting things up, and, before Eva was forced to take her first life, Chachazero had done her best to keep her safe, dispensing of anyone who conspired against her Mistress with malicious intentions...(A/N: Eva was born in the 1400s. Not exactly the best time period to be a pretty young girl without a place to call home...)

Though they couldn't be compared to an SS-Rank engagement ring, none of the girls showed any signs of disappointment when they opened their presents. Arika ended up with an S-Rank bracelet that not only enhanced the efficacy of her spells, it also stored nearly three times her own reserves. It was a more advanced version of the accessories he had produced for Haruhime in the past, and, over time, Vahn intended to give her a matching set to greatly amplify her capacity as a Mage...

Since few gifts could compare to the collar he had already gifted to her, at least within Theo's mind, Vahn had to spend a bit of extra time on her present. Her box ended up being the biggest of all, as, on the inside, a full-body membrane was neatly folded within. It was a special type of garment that was worn like an extra set of skin, perfectly matching Theo's original skin tone. What made it truly special, other than its defensive capabilities, was the fact that you could channel magic power into the membrane to exponentially increase its resistance and weight. Though its maximum weight was only 200kg, this could effectively multiply the force behind Theo's strikes while also allowing her to drastically increase the effectiveness of her training.

After learning about the effects of the peculiar skin-like clothing, Theo's sapphire-blue eyes were glimmering with excitement. She nearly stripped then and there to wear it, but, after a warning look from Eva, she alighted to a nearby room to change in a more discreet manner. When she returned, her appearance hadn't changed in the slightest, but, when she pounced on Vahn, it felt like he had been hit by a truck due to her weight effectively quintupling...

Once Theo had finally calmed down, Vahn helped Asuna properly wear her gift. She had taken up the habit of wearing bells in her hair, seemingly with the intent to further train her ability to sneak up on him, so, after a bit of consideration, he decided to give her a hand. She was already immune to most physical and magical attacks, so, rather than infusing resistances into the bells, he did his best to make them as durable and sensitive as possible.

Unless you channeled an extremely precise amount of magical energy into the bells at all times, they would release a persistent and pleasant tune. Even opening the box was enough to cause the four bells to ceaselessly chime, and, due to how difficult it was to route precise amounts of magical energy through the hair, it took Asuna several minutes to get them under control. Despite this, she had a happy smile on her face, pouncing on him in much the same way as Theo the moment she got the bells under control...

Wrapping up the present opening session, Fenrir opened her's to reveal a voucher that allowed her to make any singular request of him. As for Xiao Bai, he received a pair of manacles that, much like Theo's present, also had the function of increasing their weight. Instead of 200kg spread out across the body, however, they each weighed 50kg, and, when activated, increased to 500kg.

Five-hundred-kilograms wasn't much for someone like Xiao Bai, so, to make them even more useful for training purposes, Vahn enchanted them to be attracted to each other. Unless you maintained perfect control, even separating them would be difficult, so, if he wasn't careful, even someone like Xiao Bai risked serious injury while performing complex moves and techniques.

Without waiting, Xiao Bai readily wore the metallic manacles around his ankles, laughing excitedly once he realized how difficult even walking would become. He was a hopeless training junkie, so, while others might feel inconvenienced by such a gift, he could hardly resist the urge to go on a long sprint. As for Fenrir, she decided to hold onto her voucher, an excited glimmer in her eyes that told Vahn she already had something in mind regarding its use...

---

Once everyone had opened their presents, the atmosphere within the dining room had improved considerably. This took a bit of the wind out of Eva's sails, but, as nobody had been surprised by the mention of her engagement to Vahn, she decided not to care. She had expected a bit of drama, but, due to Vahn's intervention, everything had been neatly concluded. The only thing remaining was to discuss the arrangements she had made with Arika and Theo, so, after appreciating the sweets Vahn had prepared, she dragged the two into her private room.

The moment the door closed behind them, the atmosphere around Arika and Theo changed quite a bit, both showing varying degrees of seriousness. Even Theo could guess what Eva wanted to talk about, so, taking the initiative, she asked, "How long do you want us to wait...?"

Resisting the urge to wince in response to Theo's question, Eva adopted an apologetic expression as she answered, "I asked Vahn to wait until our honeymoon...unless something changes, we won't be married until after we defeat the Mage of the Beginning. I know this is a little unfair to the two of you, but I don't want us to get distracted before we complete our objectives...we all have things we want to accomplish. Vahn's love is more potent than a drug...I was afraid I would lose my desire for revenge and end up leaving everything to him..."

Surprising Eva somewhat, Arika was the first to nod, her expression turning even more serious as she said, "I understand your concerns. After spending these four years together, even I have had thoughts of entrusting everything to Vahn. I once believed I would be able to stand proudly with him supporting me from behind, but, after experiencing his memories, I can't help but question my capacity as a ruler. There are times when I just want to request him to 'fix' our world, but, knowing he intends to move on someday, I am unable to place the burden of my own responsibilities on his shoulders..."

Nodding her head in agreement, Theo added, "If I didn't take a firm stance, I'm positive that Vahn would have returned to the Capital to eliminate all of my enemies. Entreating him to become my Master was all I could do to prevent myself from begging him to become my Emperor, shishishi~."

Towards the end of her words, Theo affectionately rubbed the collar around her neck, a somewhat goofy smile on her face as she continued to snicker. This earned her pointed looks from both Eva and Arika, but, even without experiences like the previous night, she was confident she would never regret her decision to submit to her Master...

Deciding to ignore the masochistic idiot, Eva turned her gaze toward Arika, plainly stating, "Then we need to discuss how we'll proceed from now on. If we leave everything to that idiot, we're bound to become just another group of women that relies on him to solve all our problems. I'm already a big enough burden as is...I don't want to become a useless woman who just watches from the sidelines as Vahn fights my battles for me..."

Hearing Eva's words, Theo finally stopped laughing as she, alongside Arika, nodded her head in firm understanding...

(A/N: Alternate Titles: 'The birth of the Bronze-Skinned Asura...','Anti-climactic xD...','TFW the person you like is a literal God without any perceivable limits...')(A/N: Click this comment to see what Theo's raiment and artifact look like.)

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