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章節 302: Abnormal Behavior

(NSFW Btw...)

After calming his mind adequately, Vahn returned to the Hearth Manor and scanned the interior to see that Hestia and Aki were still within his secret workshop so he made his way up to the room and opened the false wall that separated it from his bedroom. Since Vahn was the only person that could open it from the outside, both girls knew he had arrived and Hestia put down her quill before walking over and jumping into Vahn's arms. He could see she had a very tired expression and knew she had probably been working hard all day. When he turned his attention to Aki, she had her usual smile on her face as she said, "Welcome back." Vahn smiled in response and said, "Here, you two have worked hard today, I'll give you a reward."

Hestia's body twitched and she stared up into Vahn's face with her crystalline blue eyes and he could see her aura was quickly transitioning from a docile state to a highly active one with a pink hue. Vahn leaned forward as he raised Hestia's butt and gave her a quick peck on the lips before saying, "It'll just be a massage for now while you brief me on anything new that happened." Though her aura didn't fade by much, Vahn saw it diminish a bit as Hestia laughed, "Ehehe, I guess that's fine as well~." Vahn smiled slightly at her reaction before lifting up her legs with his left hand and holding her in a princess carry before making eye contact with Aki. She nodded her head in response and picked up her own scroll before placing it away in her pouch and following behind.

When they moved to Hestia's room, Vahn laid her down on the bed and she rolled about in a strange manner as her dress wilted apart rapidly. She looked up at Vahn with a 'pitiful' expression on her face as she 'sheepishly' covered her own breasts and asked, "Just a massage?" Vahn furrowed his brows a bit because Hestia was acting up even though Aki was still present. As if she could read his expression, Hestia remarked, "Eeeeh, I already talked to both Aki and Loki about various things..." As she spoke, Hestia's expression became a little rosy and Vahn arched his brows as he turned to Aki and saw a 'strange' smile on her face. Her tail flickered a bit and she muttered in a low voice, "I don't mind..."

Vahn immediately felt like he was in a dilemma because he had just walked into the situation that he tried to avoid earlier. It felt like his efforts to calm his mind had been fruitless because he was now suffering a join attack by two women he was fond of acting adorably in front of him. Vahn cocked his head as if he were in deep thought before releasing a short sigh and shaking his head. Both girls saw his response but Vahn clarified matters by saying, "I left the other girls at the Hostess of Fertility because they got a little drunk. There is a lot to do tomorrow and I'll have to wake up early to get everything prepared..." Vahn felt like he was making an excuse and noticed that neither Hestia or Aki showed a positive response to his explanation.

Seeing their reactions, Vahn felt an urge to laugh and it showed as a smile appeared on his face and he said, "Fine, I won't hold back then if you're going to act like this." Though he put a lot of restraints on himself, Vahn was actually very interested in the girls around him. If they were going to act 'sad' when he was trying to be considerate, he didn't mind giving them a light punishment for testing his boundaries. He still wanted to meet Raul in the future, so it looked like he was going to have to apologize to the mystery man that held Aki's affections. Before either of them could react to his words, Vahn appeared behind Aki with his Shundo and lifted up her body before plopping her down on the bed next to Hestia.

Because Vahn wasn't acting like himself, both girls were a little flustered but Hestia recovered quickly as an excited glint appeared in her eyes. She held out her hand and shouted, "Wait, wait one minute ~!" Vahn tilted his head and watched her butt wiggle to the side of the bed as she pulled out a small vial of pills and a cream he had never seen before. Aki had dazed for a moment, but seeing Hestia's actions brought her mind back to reality as she looked to Vahn and asked in an uncharacteristically shy manner, "Are we going to...?" Vahn turned his head away from Hestia's actions and stared into her beautiful black eyes and stated firmly, "The final decision is your's, but I won't let you back down if you decide to stay."

Hearing Vahn's words, Aki swallowed a bit of saliva but didn't say anything as she started to strip off her own clothing. Vahn smiled at her actions and said softly, "Don't worry, I'll take proper responsibility...I won't let it be painful and you'll be able to remember tonight for the rest of your life." Since Vahn wanted to try a few things, his words were very sincere and it showed in his expression enough to ease Aki's heart. He almost wanted to continue his words and explain his intentions, but Vahn thought it would be more 'exciting' if he kept the surprise until later. They were the ones that had pushed him to this extent, so it was only proper that he gave her a light punishment.

Hestia finished smearing the pale cream inside of herself before an excited expression appeared on her face and she shouted, "Okay, I'm ready now~! Don't be surprised, ehehehehe~." Vahn saw the strangely 'confident' look on Hestia's face and he was able to intuit what she was up to. He already recognized the pills as the ones that Aki had brought over and the cream was likely meant to support her efforts. However, before she could make her move, she was intercepted by Aki who said, "That isn't good Hestia-sama, you need to properly prepare yourself before having sex..." Though she was trying to keep up a strong front, both Vahn and Hestia could see that Aki's face was beginning to glow with a rosy blush.

Vahn stared at the two black-haired girls as they held each other completely naked and admired the sight for a moment before unequipping his clothing. Without changing his stance at all, Vahn was now standing naked next to the bed and it caused both girls to look over. With a confident look touched with a trace of teasing, Vahn said, "It'll be fine, Aki, leave everything to me this time."

Hearing Vahn's words, Aki's ears twitched and her tail began to flicker before she immediately startled when Vahn appeared right in front of them. Before they could react, Vahn reached around and hugged both girls before placing his fingers in the center of their backs.

Though Hestia had been massaged by Vahn plenty in the past, Aki was the one who noticed what he was about to do and she immediately tucked her head and placed it against his chest while Hestia gave her a strange look. She turned to ask Vahn what he was up to, but the moment she turned her head Vahn traced his fingers down their spines while using [Hands of Nirvana]. Hestia's body arched a bit but Vahn prevented her from falling over as she shouted out in a loud voice. Aki, who had already prepared herself, just tightly hugged Vahn's body as a fair amount of fluid began to drain from her exposed genitals. Vahn didn't mind casual foreplay and taking his time, but he was still in the mindset of 'punishing' the girls and didn't want to get caught up in their momentum. He expected they might put on a small play for him before they actually began, but Vahn didn't want to wait another ten minutes when he was already ready.

Vahn allowed the two girls to lay back against the bed and Hestia looked up at him through hazy eyes and said, "Vaaaaahn, you're acting strangely~" In response to her words, Vahn shook his head and stated plainly, "I've been cooped up in the Manor for a while and now it feels like there is a large weight on my shoulders since I'm able to move about again. I tried controlling my excitement before I returned, but the two of you kept enticing me even when I tried to compromise..." As he spoked, Vahn used [Hands of Nirvana] to stroke around the girls' bellies and breasts as he stimulated their pressure points. He wasn't 'relaxing' them, so they were still able to move just fine, but their bodies were in a heightened state of pleasure and he wasn't letting them come down from the dizzying sensation.

Aki seemed to have better control than Hestia as she was able to stifle her moans through gnashed teeth and just took several deep breaths to retain her reasoning. Vahn thought her reaction was interesting, so he decided to give her a short break as he turned to Hestia and said, "I don't often get to take the initiative when we're together...so let me try to do things my way this time. Don't worry, I won't let anything bad happen to you..." Vahn stroked her face and uttered his words in a calming tone that made Hestia produce a strange cooing sound as she held onto his arm and said, "Do it Vahn...I like you better like thissssss~"

Vahn raised his brows a bit because he hadn't expected Hestia's words even though he knew she always wanted him to be more proactive. He was so afraid of accidentally hurting her that he had let her take the initiative every time they had sex, but he now realized that was an unnecessary concern. Since Hestia felt closer to him when he 'sought' her out, then he would bring them closer together than they had ever been before...Vahn turned over to Aki and said, "Watch closely." She swallowed a bit before nodding her head as she watched Vahn pry open Hestia's stark-white legs to reveal the slightly puffy mound of Hestia. It was already dripping with a healthy amount of love juices and there was even a creamy color dripping out of the slightly red and somewhat swollen interior.

Most of the time they had sex, Vahn let Hestia sit on top of him and this was only the second time he had been the one pinning her body in this manner. Vahn placed some pillows under her butt before lifting her right leg and finding the correct angle. He noticed that the insides of her vagina were a lot hotter than normal and, even though the walls seemed to have swollen up a bit, it was actually much easier to move into her depths. The painful tightness had eased up by a great deal and Vahn felt an itchy feeling in his heart as he watched the smile bloom on Hestia's face. He made it around 80% in before hitting a dead end, but he was able to keep going after he noticed the surprising malleability of her interior. After putting in a little effort, Vahn was more than 90% of his full length into Hestia before she released a sad sigh and said, "Even with all that...it wasn't enough?"

Vahn could feel her frustrations and just shook his head before a confident glint appeared in his eyes and he said, "Like I said, leave it to me Hestia..." Before she could respond to his words, Vahn leaned forward and pinned both of her hands with his right hand and began to kiss her on the lips. She flinched at first but didn't struggle to escape until Vahn moved his left hand to her pelvis and she could feel the hot energy coming from his palms. Hestia tried to free herself from his lips to protest, but Vahn dropped his weight onto her and she released a loud shout that was muffled by Vahn's mouth. Vahn had forcibly eased the tension of Hestia's muscles around her pelvis, abdomen, and butt as he buried his full length into her interior. He knew it must have been painful for her and began to heal any damage that might have been caused as he continued to kiss her body until she calmed down.

Aki had been watching Vahn's actions from the side but instead of feeling scared by how domineering his actions were, she instead felt a bit of excitement and expectation in her heart. Though she didn't resent Raul, Aki had always preferred the type of man that took decisive action and didn't hold back when it came to expressing their love. She had spent several intimate moments with Vahn in the past and had actually been building up a few frustrations because he never went beyond a certain point with her. Though she greatly enjoyed the time the spent together, Aki had blamed Vahn a bit for his 'indecisiveness', especially when she had made herself all the experimental things he wanted to try on her. Now that she saw him acting in this fashion, Aki could feel an incredible heat coming from her own body and she also started to make preparations of her own as she began to comfort herself.

Though Vahn was almost entirely focused on Hestia, he still looked over to see Aki fondling her own breasts as her fingers worked away at her clitoris while she watched him and Hestia have sex with a fervent expression on her face. When they made eye contact, Aki opened her mouth a bit and released a moan that sounded like a muffled, "Nyaaa~" sound. He didn't feel like he was in a rush, but Vahn was looking forward to what was to come after he finished off Hestia. With that thought in mind, Vahn turned his eyes back to Hestia and stroked her head for a bit after releasing her hands. She gave him an 'evil' look before wiggling her own hips a bit and releasing a light moan. Reaching down, she could feel the zero distance between them and released a sigh before saying, "We're finally together completely..." As her words finished, Vahn saw a glint in Hestia's eyes as she wrapped her arms around him lovingly before a powerful clamping completely locked his penis deep within her vagina.

(A/N: Alternate Titles: 'Insistence','Preparations','You activated my trap card!')

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章節 303: Unexpected Reaction

(Still NSFW btw...)

Vahn tried to pull back his hips a bit but Hestia's body moved to match his motion perfectly. She hugged her head against his chest and nuzzled against him as she said, "Ehehehe, I got you Vahn~" Even Aki stopped her own actions because of how strange Hestia was acting because Vahn had even lifted her body completely from the bed with a frown on his face. Since he was completely buried within her, it was painful and uncomfortable like it had been in the past, but Vahn still felt a little incredulity about the sudden, and unexpected, change in the situation. It felt like Hestia had taken shape around his penis before completely solidifying as a gentle and comforting heat came from her interior and seeped into his body.

Hestia laughed in a strange manner again before saying, "Let's just stay like this for a while, I promise I'll let you go in a moment...I just want to experience being together like this for a while...just a little while..." As she spoke, Hestia actually wrapped her legs around his hips as if she were trying to pull them even closer together. Since she was much small than he was, it was actually very awkward to have her hanging from his body even though her weight was negligible with his current strength. He was currently supporting her body off the bed on his hands and knees while she literally clung to his body with more strength than Vahn had ever expected her to show. Fortunately, as she had next to no stamina, Hestia eventually couldn't continue the powerful clamping and slipped off of his body and plopped onto the bed with a silly smile on her face.

Vahn felt his brain buzz after looking down at her contented expression and saw her beautiful body covered in a layer of sweat from her exertion. A pressure began to build up in the bridge of his nose before he sent a glance toward Aki that caused a shiver to run down her spine and into her tail. Hestia saw his look and an enamored look appeared on her face as she weakly opened her arms and said, "Come...I'll accept everything~." Vahn exhaled loudly through his nose before repositioning himself and instantly burying himself into her depths with enough force to knock her body up on the bed a bit. She released a loud gasp and tried to hug around Vahn's waist but immediately lost her grip the moment he moved his hips again. Vahn started to knock into her body with a steady rhythm and Hestia raised her arms above her head and weakly grasped the pillow under her head as the released amorous and sensual moans that chiseled away at Vahn's sensibilities. Even Aki had started to comfort herself more passionately as he stared at the scene with a fervent expression on her face.

Because of the medicine, Hestia had taken, Vahn was able to probe several angles that he had never gotten to try before against Hestia. He already knew her weak spot, but he was looking for any other areas that might cause her to shout out in an even louder voice. Even though she wasn't moving around much due to her lack of stamina, Hestia's voice seemed to be growing progressively louder as if she were trying to urge him forward. It was already to the point that he was taking longer, much more intense, thrusts that knocked into Hestia body with a loud sound. Vahn could even feel the fluids draining from her body splash about and the sound echoes about in his mind and increased his tensions even further. He had only ever experienced something similar with Hephaestus and didn't expect he'd have such an interaction with the relatively 'placid' Hestia so soon.

From the side, Vahn heard a nasally moan from Aki and saw her release a hot sigh as she stared at their intercourse with glazed eyes of her own. Since Hestia had been in a continuous orgasm for a while, Vahn sped up his movements even more until it got to the point where Hestia's diaphragm spasmed with each thrust. She couldn't even moan out and choked on her own gasps as she stared up at Vahn's face with an incredibly passionate gaze. Vahn saw her look and kissed her lips while deeply invading her mouth with his tongue. He grabbed around her shoulders before lifting her body into a sitting position as he released an exorbitant amount of semen into her steamy depths. Though he held her body up a bit at first, Vahn lowed Hestia's weight onto his lap and allowed her to sit against him as her body continuously clamped around him with fierce contractions for nearly an entire minute.

Vahn held her powerless body for a while after before lowering her gently onto the bed before removing his penis with a plop. Every time they finished having sex, it was like Hestia was forcing out everything from inside of her without leaving any remnants at all. Vahn stroked her hair a bit and smiled at seeing how happy she looked while lazily laying against the bed. He took out a warm town and wiped down her body before doing his best to remove the stain from his own semen from the bedspread. The entire aftercare took a few minutes before Vahn threw away the towel and locked eyes with Aki who had been leaning against the headboard and watching his actions with a somewhat 'impatient' look on her face.

Vahn gestured with his hands and made her crawl over to him as he said,"I've never had sex with a cat person before...tell me how you want it." Hearing his words, Aki's ears twitched about and she lowered her head for a few seconds but didn't stop moving toward him. After she neared his body, she 'crawled' up his torso with her heads and muttered, "I want to sit in your lap...just like in the library. I want you to hold my body tightly no matter what happens..." Her ears were drpoping down a bit and Aki had a somewhat 'pained' look in her face as if she were imploring Vahn with, not just her words, but her actions.

Seeing her reaction and hearing her words, Vahn felt his heart itch as if easy action she took tickled it ceaselessly. In a bout of inspiration, Vahn gripped Aki's butt forcefully before standing on the bed and lifting her body. She held onto his shoulders in confusion as Vahn used Shundo and found his footing on the floor nearby. Before she could make sense of what was happening, Vahn said, "If we're going to be facing each other, I wanted to try doing it while standing up once...I think it'll make it more exciting for you as well." Without explaining further, Vahn lifting Aki's body before trying to haphazardly find the correct angle. Because it was his first time doing it in this manner, Vahn had no experience with his actions and realized that his own size was complicating matters.

Aki came to her senses and wrapped her legs around his hips as if she were straddling his body and supported her own weight against Vahn's shoulders. She had a very determined expression on her enamored face which caused Vahn to smile in a manner that felt awkward. From Aki's perspective, she saw Vahn show an almost bestial smile that made her heart throb as she breathed in and out through her nose. Because she had already been working away at her own body for nearly fifteen minutes, Aki's vagina was already opening slightly and gently contracting due to the minor echoes still bouncing around inside her body. Vahn finally found the correct angle before locking eyes with Aki and slowly putting a bit of strength in his hands that were wrapped around her hips. Though she didn't exactly resist his actions, Vahn could feel Aki's body tense as she passively resisted lowering her own hips.

After Vahn had sunk the entirety of his penis within her relatively lukewarm vagina, he stopped his actions and continued to stare into Aki's face. He could see she had a bit of last minute hesitation even though she made no efforts to separate their bodies. She was actually stronger than him, so there was little he could do if she tried to free herself from his grasp. After a few seconds, Vahn traced his right hand over her left butt cheek before he loosely gripped around the base of her tail. The hesitation in her eyes vanished in an instant as she stared directly into Vahn's face before turning her attention to the scar she had left on his shoulder. Vahn could feel her grip tighten a bit on his shoulders and he began to lower her body by using her own weight to sink further into her depths. Though she was a virgin, Aki had taken the same medicine as Hestia and he was able to smoothly enter due to her preparations.

Soon after he entered, Vahn felt a resistance against his glans that made Aki's body twitch but he continued forward undaunted as he gripped her tail tightly. Instead of biting him, Aki put her chin on Vahn's shoulder where the scar was and hugged his body while holding her breath and resisting the pain. Since she was a Level 4, she was able to prevent herself from crying out at all and just released a long sigh when Vahn finally knocked against the back of her own vagina. Vahn had dazed for a brief moment because he realized that Hestia had changed his expectations about sex a bit. Though it was an incredibly pleasant feeling within Aki, Vahn still felt a bit of incongruity coming from the sensations on his own penis. Vahn laughed a little within his mind because he knew it wasn't fair to compare two different girls, especially when he was currently accepting the virginity of one of them.

Vahn wanted to kiss Aki, but she continued to hold his body as she wiggled her own hips a bit as if trying to feel his penis within her body. With a smile on his face, Vahn gripped her tail a little and caused her body to arch forward enough that she raised her own hips. Vahn loosened his grip and raised his hips as Aki fell against his body. Vahn felt a shiver run down his spine because the moment she dropped Aki weakly called out a , "Nyaa~" into his ear. As if the strange incongruity he experienced earlier had vanished, Vahn felt a bit of excitement well up inside of him as he repeated the action a few times. Every single time she fell, Aki released a mewling moan that sounded like a cat crying out. The sound tickled, not only Vahn's ears, but it felt like it was scratching his heart as he began to draw excited breaths.

If not for the fact he was treating her body carefully since she had just lost her virginity, Vahn wanted to move more intensely because of his previous entanglement with Hestia. Instead, he moved over to a wall and allowed Aki's body to rest against it for a few seconds. She eventually realized what he was trying to do and stopped holding his shoulders in a death grip. Though Vahn couldn't see it himself, there were bruises marks on his shoulder that matched each of her fingers where she had been holding him.

Though she felt a little 'scared' at leaning her body against the wall, Aki placed her trust in Vahn and looked down at where they were connected with a strangely excited expression on her face. Because she was much larger than Hestia, and had taken medicine to dilate her own vagina, Aki was able to take in Vahn's full length after her body warmed up a bit. There were small splotches of blood against Vahn's body but it made her feel an inexplicable happiness, especially when she saw the passionate and loving expression in Vahn's face. He began to trace his fingers over her abdomen as if electrical currents were trailing from his fingers. Aki felt waves of pleasure building up in her body as she writhed about under his touch. Vahn enjoyed each of her reactions and kept her balanced on his own body before leaning forward and sealing her lips. They didn't often kiss and Vahn was always surprised when he felt the slightly rough tongue of a cat person when they shared a deep kiss. It felt like she was able to lap up his saliva easily and they had surprisingly long tongues compared to humans, goddesses, and amazons.

After Aki's body started to grow a little limp, Vahn felt like she was ready for some more intense movements since he had already healed the wound within her vagina with his [Hands of Nirvana] while he was tending to her body. Though she wasn't nearly as tight as a needy little goddess, Vahn enjoyed the echoes of Aki's own orgasms as her vagina writhed around his penis in an incredibly stimulating manner. Since they had started, Vahn had noticed Aki's body had heated up to an almost incredible level and he was vaguely aware that her body was somewhat feverish.

Though he wasn't an actual physician, Vahn knew a lot about the physiques of others and could easily understand their condition when he was in contact with them. Vahn knew a fair amount about Cat People, and he understood that a female cat person that had reached maturity would be in a dormant state of 'heat' until they finally mated. The vast majority of cat person females actually got pregnant after their first intercourse and Vahn was able to understand why after seeing the changes in Aki's body. He understood why she was always talking about 'taking responsibility' because, unless he actively prevented it, there was a very high chance she would get pregnant if he ejaculated inside of her.

The image of Loki passed through his mind and Vahn wondered if she had machinated events this way or if she were trying to test him somehow. Vahn had already promised to impregnate her before the Denatus, but she had sent a lovelorn kitten into his arms after their last parting. Because Aki was so receptive to him, Vahn had few inhibitions against her and appreciated everything she had been doing to help manage the Familia recently. They had spent a fair amount of time together and shared a number of intimate moments before things had finally come to this point. Since his memory was quite sharp, Vahn was able to recall the melancholic look on Aki's face every time he didn't cross the line in the past. He understood she was more interested in having a family than actually venturing into the dungeon and had a healthy desire for children of her own. She had already been 'prepared' for five years, and Vahn decided to reward her patience as he tightly embraced her shoulders and hugged Aki against his body.

Aki was confused for a brief moment at Vahn's especially intimate and comforting gesture until she felt an intense heat swell in her own depths. She immediately released a gasp and returned his hug as she tightened her legs around his hips. Though there was a great deal of murky liquid dripping from where they were connected, there was an incredible amount that made its way into her depths and she could almost feel her insides burning as they writhed about in a powerful climax that almost rivaled the 'convergence of heaven and earth' that Vahn put her through in the past. That orgasm has actually caused her to awaken in the middle of the night in a panic with a damp stain on her bed for a few days, but this one was an incredibly pleasant and fulfilling one.

Vahn heard a notification in his head and squinted his eyes a bit since the system always seemed to break the atmosphere at times. He gave a cursory glance as he continued to cradle Aki's body while nuzzling his face against the side of her head. A small frown appeared on his face and he furrowed his brows, not because of the notification per say, but because the completion grade ignored him a bit. He felt like in invalidated a bit of the feelings they shared between each other...

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//Anakitty Autumn Has Reached Maximum Affection//

//Quest Complete: [The Hearts Desire:C-SS]//

Completion Grade: C

Rewards:10,000OP, 1x[Hearts Desire:Anakitty Autumn]

Grade Rewards: 1x[Proof of Affection], 3,000OP

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As if to refute the notification, Vahn held Aki's body a bit tighter and pulled her weight against him a little more. She released a muffled 'nyaaa~' and returned his actions by licking his neck with her rough tongue. Incited by her own action, Aki continued to lick Vahn's neck affectionately and the unease he had felt from the system notification faded away. Though her tongue felt a little dry and rough, Vahn thought it was an incredibly pleasant sensation so he started to stroke her back lightly with [Hands of Nirvana] as they both showed their affections for each other for an entire twenty minutes before separating. Vahn had an uncomfortable feeling on his neck, almost like he had developed a rash, but seeing the glowing and amorous expression on Aki's face as he laid her down on the bed melted away any discomfort he had. If anything, he wanted her to lick his body even more and even nurtured the thought of convincing her to do so in the future. He figured that, if he did the same for her, she would probably be willing to give it a try...

(A/N: Alternate Titles: 'I imagine Hestia taking up cardio soon...','Nyaaaaaa~','The Path allows the user to break through all obstacles, even an intimate atmosphere!')

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