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寫檢討I love this book. It is really creative and has a good balance between the cultivation aspect and the romance. Our main couple is so sweet and our ML is smart in claiming Leon. Just wondering when are you going to update again?
I love it. Its worth the read. So much so that I've been camping here for more than 2 years already. It has a really descriptive world background and the characters felt 3D to me which is understandable since its kind of like a slice of life genre which I really got to feel out the "Living as a Cultivator" part. Most cultivator stories are fast paced and focused more on getting stronger with cheats or start out with trouble or mystery but not this story. This story is truly what its title was all about. With a spice of romance and a sugar of adventure. The story development was also just right. Not too rush and not too slow. At least for me, I wasn't bored in the slightest. Anyway, I cant wait for this book to update. I'll be waiting here, camping. Who wants smores?
Second male lead seemed overbearing at first but it's so cute when he's trying to understand his feelings for the MC.❤️❤️❤️
Lovely novel: it has a different take on Alchemy compared to other cultivation novels with making of pills involving a lot of phyysical processes, but it's still good. The character growth is nice too. And my lover, the lovely tsundere ML is adorable too. Immportant question: is this novel complete or has it been dropped? 😱
Ery enjoyable read. great character, great setting, good pace. well thought out story basis and development. Very much looking forward to the continuation of this story and reading the ending.
I absolutely love this story and highly recommend it. It's one of my top favorites, definitelydefinitelyin the top 3. The main characters are the best!!
This book is one of my absolute favorite, the characters are relatable and funny. The sex scenes are tasteful and the world building was done well. I also liked that the MC did not take over a stranger's body but rather he remembered his last life. Really good
This book gets more interesting as you read and understand the characters background and personalities the book does not give the support characters a one sentence introduction this makes it a lot more interesting as it does not only on the mc and ml but on other characters as well giving it a good plot development.
A hidden gem. Such an underrated novel that is written so marvelously that I honestly can’t compare it to any cultivation story before this. It cannot be compared. It’s even more amazing to me because it’s absolutely FREE to read. Writing Quality - Amazing. Can’t find any fault at all. The details makes me feel like I’m in the world itself, it explains so much and it doesn’t feel like you’re being thrown into a big information dump and having to figure it out for yourself. Everything is explained simple and actually easy to follow regarding cultivation and the different teachings. Story Development - It’s a slow paced story, hard to find especially when it’s done THIS well. And the slow burn romance works with the story development to a T. It’s definitely my cup of tea but of course if you’re more into the fast paced element packed with action then it’s probably not to your preference. The minimal action we do get is well written too (read up to ch.160 so can’t really say if there is a lot more action after this). Character Design - All the characters have their own personalities, opinions, flaws, talents, and designed perfectly in their role for the story. Leon (MC) is shy, weak, naive, and has a speech impediment. Jin Li (ML) is your Tsundere, arrogant, oblivious, yet undeniably strong young master who does whatever he wants and pulls Leon around. He can be cold and harsh with his words but he isn’t heartless nor is he blinded by his social status to look down on the poor. There are so many more relatable and likable characters (and of course those who are created to be unlikable). World Building - There is SO MUCH to learn and slowly unravels just a bit more as the story progresses. There’s unique beasts and creatures, herbs for many things, and so much more. It’s really amazing how much imagination the author has and to be able to incorporate this in the story is actually the hardest thing to do. TLDR; A slow paced, slowburn romance that is worth the read. Detailed and marvelously written cultivation story on two precious boys falling in love in an unfair world.
I LOVE it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I want to read It a thousand times
story's great and it's freaking free! so what's stopping you from reading this! nothing! oh just one thing, update is currently unstable so just waiting for author to overcome whatever issue they're going through. until then, 4.4 stars from me
I really love Your Story and the way you write ✍️ . ✍️ 📖 Thank you for your hard work I Hope you continue to write more stories in the future . 💕💕
I'm From Wattpad, Hehehe Im just here to support the Author Again it's one of my Favourite Stories I'm Already on the Second Book, The book is kinda Slow burn but Every chapter will left you participating what's next. Highly Suggested book
this is the one novel i check for new updates every day! I NEED MORE! :P its slow going, detailed, new cultivation theme, fun new love, and most of all its not destroyed by some teen need of the ultimate novel killer the harem! harems always take away any credibility
transmigration story where the only thing mc inherits from the original is his stuttering and fear, thats it no talent no memories. Mc is a scaredy cat, utterly disappointing, dropped after first few chaps, srsly frget thinking of revenge against those who killed the original he cant even speak to them without shaking, ugh probably waiting for ML to come protect him and save the day what utter bs
揭示劇透I couldn’t put this down once I started reading it. So enjoyable!!! The story reminds of Legendary Master’s Wife which I liked. It is the whole transmigration/cultivation theme which I am a fan of. I am enjoying reading Leo/Leon and Jin Li grow and develop as characters.
😸😸😸 me gusto mucho la novela y aunque el amor profundo es rápido en cuestión de tiempo no es irrazonable, además me gusta mucho la dedicación del protagonista por las pociones aunque he de admitir que no me gusta el hecho de su falta de habilidad en combate porque el también está cultivando aunque sea como alquimista, no se si has visto la novela de hacen haven online porque en ella el alquimista puede crear pociones para luchar aunque también hay otra donde los alquimistas pueden usar los monstruos dominados como equipo, en resumen sus posibilidades de victoria en combate no dependen por completo de otros y pueden aportar a ello, talvez en el reino superior los alquimistas no sean débiles en combate si no que tienen algún requisito de cultivo para tener la posibilidad de combatir además que ya tienes al abuelo materno para enseñarle sin contar que también podría usar objetos que haga con su raíz espiritual para combatir, hay muchas posibilidades.
definitely a fun read and an interesting idea as I don't usually read about non combat main characters yet I find myself drawn to the tale of this little alchemist
it's totally underrated here. I am from a different app starts with a w ends with a pad and I am currently reading the second book and every time I get an update I simp. it makes me want to start over from the beginning just so after read how cute leon is all over again.
People are missing out on this good book because it's BL. The plot is interesting, the author is dedicated, a lack of cultivation cliches and wonderful human like side characters.
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I love this book. It is really creative and has a good balance between the cultivation aspect and the romance. Our main couple is so sweet and our ML is smart in claiming Leon. Just wondering when are you going to update again?
I love it. Its worth the read. So much so that I've been camping here for more than 2 years already. It has a really descriptive world background and the characters felt 3D to me which is understandable since its kind of like a slice of life genre which I really got to feel out the "Living as a Cultivator" part. Most cultivator stories are fast paced and focused more on getting stronger with cheats or start out with trouble or mystery but not this story. This story is truly what its title was all about. With a spice of romance and a sugar of adventure. The story development was also just right. Not too rush and not too slow. At least for me, I wasn't bored in the slightest. Anyway, I cant wait for this book to update. I'll be waiting here, camping. Who wants smores?
Second male lead seemed overbearing at first but it's so cute when he's trying to understand his feelings for the MC.❤️❤️❤️
Lovely novel: it has a different take on Alchemy compared to other cultivation novels with making of pills involving a lot of phyysical processes, but it's still good. The character growth is nice too. And my lover, the lovely tsundere ML is adorable too. Immportant question: is this novel complete or has it been dropped? 😱
Ery enjoyable read. great character, great setting, good pace. well thought out story basis and development. Very much looking forward to the continuation of this story and reading the ending.
I absolutely love this story and highly recommend it. It's one of my top favorites, definitelydefinitelyin the top 3. The main characters are the best!!
This book is one of my absolute favorite, the characters are relatable and funny. The sex scenes are tasteful and the world building was done well. I also liked that the MC did not take over a stranger's body but rather he remembered his last life. Really good
This book gets more interesting as you read and understand the characters background and personalities the book does not give the support characters a one sentence introduction this makes it a lot more interesting as it does not only on the mc and ml but on other characters as well giving it a good plot development.
A hidden gem. Such an underrated novel that is written so marvelously that I honestly can’t compare it to any cultivation story before this. It cannot be compared. It’s even more amazing to me because it’s absolutely FREE to read. Writing Quality - Amazing. Can’t find any fault at all. The details makes me feel like I’m in the world itself, it explains so much and it doesn’t feel like you’re being thrown into a big information dump and having to figure it out for yourself. Everything is explained simple and actually easy to follow regarding cultivation and the different teachings. Story Development - It’s a slow paced story, hard to find especially when it’s done THIS well. And the slow burn romance works with the story development to a T. It’s definitely my cup of tea but of course if you’re more into the fast paced element packed with action then it’s probably not to your preference. The minimal action we do get is well written too (read up to ch.160 so can’t really say if there is a lot more action after this). Character Design - All the characters have their own personalities, opinions, flaws, talents, and designed perfectly in their role for the story. Leon (MC) is shy, weak, naive, and has a speech impediment. Jin Li (ML) is your Tsundere, arrogant, oblivious, yet undeniably strong young master who does whatever he wants and pulls Leon around. He can be cold and harsh with his words but he isn’t heartless nor is he blinded by his social status to look down on the poor. There are so many more relatable and likable characters (and of course those who are created to be unlikable). World Building - There is SO MUCH to learn and slowly unravels just a bit more as the story progresses. There’s unique beasts and creatures, herbs for many things, and so much more. It’s really amazing how much imagination the author has and to be able to incorporate this in the story is actually the hardest thing to do. TLDR; A slow paced, slowburn romance that is worth the read. Detailed and marvelously written cultivation story on two precious boys falling in love in an unfair world.
I LOVE it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I want to read It a thousand times
story's great and it's freaking free! so what's stopping you from reading this! nothing! oh just one thing, update is currently unstable so just waiting for author to overcome whatever issue they're going through. until then, 4.4 stars from me
I really love Your Story and the way you write ✍️ . ✍️ 📖 Thank you for your hard work I Hope you continue to write more stories in the future . 💕💕
I'm From Wattpad, Hehehe Im just here to support the Author Again it's one of my Favourite Stories I'm Already on the Second Book, The book is kinda Slow burn but Every chapter will left you participating what's next. Highly Suggested book
this is the one novel i check for new updates every day! I NEED MORE! :P its slow going, detailed, new cultivation theme, fun new love, and most of all its not destroyed by some teen need of the ultimate novel killer the harem! harems always take away any credibility
transmigration story where the only thing mc inherits from the original is his stuttering and fear, thats it no talent no memories. Mc is a scaredy cat, utterly disappointing, dropped after first few chaps, srsly frget thinking of revenge against those who killed the original he cant even speak to them without shaking, ugh probably waiting for ML to come protect him and save the day what utter bs
揭示劇透I couldn’t put this down once I started reading it. So enjoyable!!! The story reminds of Legendary Master’s Wife which I liked. It is the whole transmigration/cultivation theme which I am a fan of. I am enjoying reading Leo/Leon and Jin Li grow and develop as characters.
😸😸😸 me gusto mucho la novela y aunque el amor profundo es rápido en cuestión de tiempo no es irrazonable, además me gusta mucho la dedicación del protagonista por las pociones aunque he de admitir que no me gusta el hecho de su falta de habilidad en combate porque el también está cultivando aunque sea como alquimista, no se si has visto la novela de hacen haven online porque en ella el alquimista puede crear pociones para luchar aunque también hay otra donde los alquimistas pueden usar los monstruos dominados como equipo, en resumen sus posibilidades de victoria en combate no dependen por completo de otros y pueden aportar a ello, talvez en el reino superior los alquimistas no sean débiles en combate si no que tienen algún requisito de cultivo para tener la posibilidad de combatir además que ya tienes al abuelo materno para enseñarle sin contar que también podría usar objetos que haga con su raíz espiritual para combatir, hay muchas posibilidades.
definitely a fun read and an interesting idea as I don't usually read about non combat main characters yet I find myself drawn to the tale of this little alchemist
it's totally underrated here. I am from a different app starts with a w ends with a pad and I am currently reading the second book and every time I get an update I simp. it makes me want to start over from the beginning just so after read how cute leon is all over again.
People are missing out on this good book because it's BL. The plot is interesting, the author is dedicated, a lack of cultivation cliches and wonderful human like side characters.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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love this story . slightly slow burn, but good pairing.