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Cataclysm System (Completed)

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作者: Nefarious31

4.02 (29 評分)

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One day Humanity ruled the World. The next day they were gone.

The system is put into play to help Humanity cope with their new, cruel reality.

They struggle with monster raids weekly, each dreadful war consuming more than the one before, whittling down the survivors. Yet, they quickly realise their true enemies aren't the predators besieging their walls, but instead the people beside them.

Renamed as Cataclysm System.
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Nefarious31

Shameless review to get the ball rolling. Just give it a try. You'll enjoy it! The fights are very gory though, so just beware if you don't like those kinds of things.

6yr
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DawnSky
LV 14 Badge

A potentially good story ruined by one of the worst MCs I have ever had the displeasure of reading about. The MC is a pathetic, cowardly, weak beta soyboy ***** and remains so throughout every chapter. Each chapter is literally a case of him being walked all over, beaten up and slapped around etc. Any power or skills the MC gets? Other randoms in the story already have. Every random stranger the MC meets? All stronger then him as they walk all over him while he cowers. He doesn't do anything for himself or on his own he always goes crawling back to those walking all over him for more. Asides from that, little worldbuilding doesn't help the story. Comparatively speaking, a higher level of grammar then most of the **** written here.

6yr
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ThrustThunder

"Not a single thing had changed… This meant that the only way to increase his stats was then via circulation." Gotta say this: "F*ck You, Mr. Author" If you wanted to write a Wuxia novel you should have just written a Wuxia novel. To take a perfectly good LitRPG story and strip it of it's lootables, it's skill advancements, it's class system, it's stat dependencies and now to make it so even killing enemies serves no more purpose... What's the point anymore? I don't care about these random people, because you've already introduced dozens of "Allies" to us that we'll never see again so there's no point even learning these one's names. I don't care about the Intergalactic struggles going on behind the scenes because I have no idea how any of it works, they've only been mentioned a grand total of 5 times throughout the 95 chapters and it was vague at best. You've failed to make me care about Stanis as a Person, a Character or as the Protagonist because he started out weak and annoying and now he's just angry and annoying. He's become just another Generic Reactive MC now that all personal control has been taken away now that he's been captured by the Aliens and forced to do these pointless trials. And even before this he was just a spastic meathead running from one fight to the next, relying on Plot Armor to save him from his enemies (And friends) killing him every time he decides to take a nap in the middle of a battlefield. Most of all I no longer am able to care about the rambling, disjointed, sleep-induced-teleportation mess you call your overall narrative because of all these factors and more, due to how obvious it is that you had no ideas how the plot was going to go more then half a chapter ahead as you were writing it. I applaud your ability to keep putting out chapter after chapter of a Novel you no longer had any interest in writing with such a high quality of coherence and editing, but beyond that I'm impressed that you had so much to say with your words and so little care about how they flowed together as a whole.

5yr
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TBBV
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Started reading a few days ago.. So far so Good Solid plot Grounded MC Side characters also well developed Just wish MC and Orena would have some twisted relationship and some very very *cough* good "fun time "

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6yr
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DarkSideOfTheSpoon

Let me just say that I've read novels like this before. It reminds me of my favorite novel, in a good way. This seems to be genre I'm drawn to because of the reactions you get to see from the people involved in all this nonsense. Review mode: ON Writing quality: Higher quality than me, more consistent too... A+ Stability of updates: While it's consistent now there's the inevitable drop or increase in upload rate for these newer/smaller stories. I cannot say anything conclusive at this time. Story development: While I love the story for its dark tone, attention to detail, pacing, and good environment (props for the temple design). There's a hidden opportunity for the mc to gain power based on sheer luck, a common trope. While it's good in any other aspect the cliche throws me off. Character design: Normally these bloody novels have empty shells from which they expect you to experience the novel through. With this novel it feels like you're standing next to him, caught up in the moment, seeing the fear in his eyes. The people around the mc have realistic motivation. No complaints. World backround: I like to think of this as more of the "scene" but if taken literally then this story is close to flawless. You can perfectly understand what is going on in this story. Enough said. Suggestions: -Self reliant mc, gains power through hard work etc. -Maybe explore the pangea aspect of the current world, show off landmarks in absurd places or have massive rifts in the landscape with lava rivers. Tectonic plate nonsense. -If you kill of Juan make sure it's important, hell any major character dying should push the mc forward. Review mode: OFF I like this, it's objectively competent and can be enjoyed. -Spoon

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Zhang_Kai_Rui

Well another novel down the drain, it alright to be realistoc with reactions and stuff but you also go to realise that this is a novel. We arent reading it to here about a pussy mc who wants to get ass ****ed by everyone. Leaving the baby binky in your life not the story author.

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Maurz
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This has probably the worst mc in any novel i've ever read. He's seriously borderline retarded. The only thing I've enjoyed about the book is the concept behind it, but it's just so bad

5yr
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krylol

Shitty novel don't waste your time. A retarded protagonist without a brain and a crybaby you should expend your time in better things that this piece of ****.

5yr
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Janusz_Tracz

Very dissapointing ending. Not just that MC got killed, but the way nothing is explained in the end and motivation of characters. Many plot hooks wers not resolved lukę summonning in haven.

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dy2746
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Warning: If you dislike mentally weak MC who loses consciousness every few chapters, not to bright and not in a comedic way and always dazes off only to have the charters next to him shake him out of it every other chapter then skip this. If none of the above bothers you then this is a solid story and you just might enjoy it.

5yr
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kaushee
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The storyline is not bad. The main character is so ***** and always falls into traps and backstabbings. This is truly a **** up story. Feels so disappointed about humans. This might be over the top but there's some truth about human nature. People doesn't like to see others doing good or living a better life than themselves. Some people might find this claim rubbish. But tap into your innerself and see how you truly feels and how other feels about you. People take reasons as country, origin, religion, believes. But everyone forget end of the day we all are human. Human nature is to find a purpose, so they make reason to go on living without thinking the harm they do overall. Im not a saint I'm the same.(This is my excuse to feeling like that) hahaha ☻☻☻ Feels so disappointed about humans.

5yr
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Beefnator

:::::::::::::::::::::::::: Like it so far ! :::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: This Story need more ** ! :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

6yr
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Lightning_god

The best type of this kind of genre. I've read around and I thought I would really enjoy this genre. Better than world of demons and gods. Nice level of gore and not too much focusing on *** unlike other similar novels

6yr
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Silent_C1own

For some reason I thought this was a novel abt a system that helps someone destroy the world... Welp I’ll just read this now Shudjwbdiebdgwjdhhedibrejxnethisisfor140charactersdhrhduwgduebdhehfhdjsjdhshdhh

6yr
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CsK
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You might want to check royalroad for more reviews. It’s a pretty good novel (although the author is pretty shameless...). Similar elements to Master Hunter K and other survival novels.

6yr
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Armand_Targaryen

thx for the chapters :D __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

6yr
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Lustful_Death

I remember reading this book a few years ago when I was just getting into novels of this genre, I read through the entire book in one sitting. this book has had the ending that has left the deepest impression on me, the way the MC was used and killed off like a dog by his underlings just exceptional. I have read many books that eclipse this one in each aspect yet still none of them can beat the ending.This book is the reason why I don't care about so called bad endings. No matter how many books I read or how long of a time passes I will always remember this books title and it's legendary ending.

1yr
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lisework2021

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3yr
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Rotten_Sarcophagus

bad, like I can't even describe how badly the story is written, the mc is utter trash and the author always forgets about his own mechanics. and many more

4yr
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Cody_Bowen

Not too bad, but can get sticky at points. I enjoyed it as a light read.

4yr
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Chapter 135: Author's Final Note 6 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    Prologue: Another Planet 6 years ago
  2. 2
    The Start 6 years ago
  3. 3
    Dirty Slate 6 years ago
  4. 4
    Hope 6 years ago
  5. 5
    Team 6 years ago
  6. 6
    Lopped head 6 years ago
  7. 7
    Final Trial 6 years ago
  8. 8
    The End of trials 6 years ago
  9. 9
    Earth? 6 years ago
  10. 10
    Surprise battle 6 years ago
  11. 11
    The Camp 6 years ago
  12. 12
    The Forest 6 years ago
  13. 13
    Dangerous Game 6 years ago
  14. 14
    Stolen Goods 6 years ago
  15. 15
    Willpower 6 years ago
  16. 16
    Second Battle 6 years ago
  17. 17
    The Temple 6 years ago
  18. 18
    Transformation 6 years ago
  19. 19
    A Week 6 years ago
  20. 20
    Patrol 6 years ago
  21. 21
    Tough Fight 6 years ago
  22. 22
    Tension in the Camp 6 years ago
  23. 23
    Suspicions 6 years ago
  24. 24
    Against the Strongest 6 years ago
  25. 25
    The Raid Begins 6 years ago
  26. 26
    Unpleasent Encounter 6 years ago
  27. 27
    Boss Fight 6 years ago
  28. 28
    Teleporter 6 years ago
  29. 29
    Finale 6 years ago
  30. 30
    Journey 6 years ago
  31. 31
    Information 6 years ago
  32. 32
    Yona Village 6 years ago
  33. 33
    New Classer 6 years ago
  34. 34
    Suspicions 6 years ago
  35. 35
    The Tunnel 6 years ago
  36. 36
    Classer 6 years ago
  37. 37
    Tier-Two 6 years ago
  38. 38
    Fight to the Death 6 years ago
  39. 39
    Bad Times 6 years ago
  40. 40
    Good Times? 6 years ago
  41. 41
    The Best of Times 6 years ago
  42. 42
    Chase 6 years ago
  43. 43
    Sunshine 6 years ago
  44. 44
    New Friends? 6 years ago
  45. 45
    New Life 6 years ago
  46. 46
    A different type of Instructor 6 years ago
  47. 47
    Training 6 years ago
  48. 48
    Another Village 6 years ago
  49. 49
    Ice Crystal 6 years ago
  50. 50
    A New Beginning 6 years ago
  51. 51
    Opening Channels 6 years ago
  52. 52
    Class 6 years ago
  53. 53
    A New Journey 6 years ago
  54. 54
    Chatter 6 years ago
  55. 55
    New Lands 6 years ago
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    Leader 6 years ago
  57. 57
    Jaguar 6 years ago
  58. 58
    Conflict 6 years ago
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    Rotten Deal 6 years ago
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    Slow Start 6 years ago
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    Mana Circulation 6 years ago
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    Raid Start 6 years ago
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    Boss Fight 6 years ago
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    The End? 6 years ago
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    Agreement Set? 6 years ago
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    Rewards 6 years ago
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    Time to return 6 years ago
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    You and what Army? 6 years ago
  69. 69
    Old Friends and New Enemies 6 years ago
  70. 70
    Visit 6 years ago
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    Blacksmithing 6 years ago
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    Forging and an Old Friend 6 years ago
  73. 73
    Discovery 6 years ago
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    Departure 6 years ago
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    Monster 6 years ago
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    Rashkars 6 years ago
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    Forging Legends 6 years ago
  78. 78
    Proposition 6 years ago
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    A Sword of Lightning 6 years ago
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    Twists and Turns 6 years ago
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    All things come to an end 6 years ago
  82. 82
    A new beginning 6 years ago
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    A Messy Trio 6 years ago
  84. 84
    The Test 6 years ago
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    Natural born Examinee 6 years ago
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    Tier Four 6 years ago
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    Strange People 6 years ago
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    Tournament 6 years ago
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    Winners 6 years ago
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    The Ten strongest 6 years ago
  91. 91
    New Team, Old Game 6 years ago
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    Nude Horrors 6 years ago
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    No Longer Naked 6 years ago
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    Clothes do make the man 6 years ago
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    Brutal 6 years ago
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    Controlled Torture 6 years ago
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    Death 6 years ago
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    Grim Life 6 years ago
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    Undead 6 years ago
  100. 100
    Havoc 6 years ago
  101. 101
    Second Death 6 years ago
  102. 102
    Fantasy 6 years ago
  103. 103
    Back to Earth 6 years ago
  104. 104
    Talk the Talk 6 years ago
  105. 105
    Back in Black 6 years ago
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    Watcher 6 years ago
  107. 107
    Forges 6 years ago
  108. 108
    Friends 6 years ago
  109. 109
    Loose Ends 6 years ago
  110. 110
    Strongest 6 years ago
  111. 111
    Haven 6 years ago
  112. 112
    Pete 6 years ago
  113. 113
    Not a Haven 6 years ago
  114. 114
    Silvermoon 6 years ago
  115. 115
    Drinks 6 years ago
  116. 116
    Geared Up 6 years ago
  117. 117
    The Start of the End 6 years ago
  118. 118
    A Wolf Among Sheep 6 years ago
  119. 119
    Close 6 years ago
  120. 120
    Madness 6 years ago
  121. 121
    Return 6 years ago
  122. 122
    Meeting 6 years ago
  123. 123
    Fools and Kings 6 years ago
  124. 124
    Plan 6 years ago
  125. 125
    Comeback 6 years ago
  126. 126
    Hidden 6 years ago
  127. 127
    Power 6 years ago
  128. 128
    Confrontation 6 years ago
  129. 129
    Forceful 6 years ago
  130. 130
    Twist 6 years ago
  131. 131
    Parting 6 years ago
  132. 132
    Build-up 6 years ago
  133. 133
    Crescendo 6 years ago
  134. 134
    End 6 years ago
  135. 135
    Author's Final Note 6 years ago

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