3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
After reading through 53 chapters I will say that the story is quite interesting but I feel like it can be something that can be improved on. As for the characters, the characters kinda feel bland. I feel like the author should also concentrate a little bit on their characters + grammar because there are mistakes in lots of sentences. But after 53 chapters this is my honest review. I might change it if things get more interesting and some minor plotholes get fixed.
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
After reading through 53 chapters I will say that the story is quite interesting but I feel like it can be something that can be improved on. As for the characters, the characters kinda feel bland. I feel like the author should also concentrate a little bit on their characters + grammar because there are mistakes in lots of sentences. But after 53 chapters this is my honest review. I might change it if things get more interesting and some minor plotholes get fixed.
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.