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Everyone is afraid of death but once you've experienced it several hundred or even thousands of times, you will eventually be numb and one with it. Just like Beta, growing up in a home with parents who love experimenting more, than taking care of their children. That didn't exempt Beta from being a part of their experiments resulting in Beta's death countless times. He learned everything he could that was taught to him, until one unfortunate night when everything changed...
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Can't describe how awesome this novel is going. It is definitely a must read. YOU WON'T REGRET IT! Like seriously! If you're tired of looking at cliche novels out there, this one is definitely a breath of fresh air for you to read on. I swear you'll be begging for more <3
i really like this novel, it has new ideas, the grammar is alot better than in other novels, it has just a great all around feeling to it. Keep it up, im looking forward to new chapters :)
AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO REALLY READ FIRST CHAPTER??????? I see 16 people voting 5 stars, and that made me think, "oh this must be an intressting novel". And I am now writing a review after reading 1 chapter. And usually I dont do that. But holy cow! I am so confused! Help me anyone who actually read or still reading this novel! The following notes are taking from the running text. The reason i number them all up liks this is because the very first chapter is CONFUSING. You want to captivate your writer not confuse them. All the notes below are taking from your running-text ( no paragraph divisioning ) 1.When Beta was only 2 years old, he was already made to help dissect corpses. One year later, on his third birthday, he was called into an unknown room. ( Beta is now forced as a 3 year old child to fight a death match against Gamma) 2. "Gamma wins. Leave the room to the left side." 3. "Your opponent got your eyes (Betas eyes), and you got his. Your eyes were better than his, so that's what he won in that battle." 4. "The thought of suddenly having someone else's eyes in his head shocked him greatly(Betas Point of view). Even worse is the fact that he'd lose even more parts of his body almost made him go insane. " 5. Beta leaves the room after being revived, and his father says = "He's an incredible child. Beta is much more intelligent than the other kids so far. I truly wonder how he will turn out to be. We should prepare more samples for him to fight against. If he simply beats everyone to death the moment he meets them, we won't get our desired result." WHAT? - Pretty sure Beta were the one WHO DIED? 6. The next day his father called him so he walked along the corridor, surprised that the door to the martial arts training field is still there. As soon as he arrived in his father's room he started looking around. He saw nothing but the table that he wakes up on once he dies, but this time with an addition. There's a person on the table. He looked at his father inquiringly. -"Beta, today you will learn about the art of changing your body. You will take this boys arms and take them as yours. One step at a time of course. We'll start with the left arm today so get ready to first cut his and then yours off." WHAT - Writer you are already completely writing something else. 9. "The time has finally come, he has to cut off his arm." this here is a weird sentence. - WHat do you mean the time has finally come? after 1 week? even though Beta is the only one who died? Whos arm is he cutting? Writer. feel free to hate and comment my text. But my advice is, sit down, revise your own text before you post your chapter. Or ask a friend who is good at english and read your text. This is just for your own good. Because real english plublishers will ask an editor to rework your text.
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I can't explain enough how awesome this novel is unfolding. Trust me when I say that there are many more exciting things you'll encounter. It's definitely worth to read and a must-have in your library list with notifications on 😆
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140.
The quality is great despite a very scant amount of errors here and there. I would say the quality of writing is superb which embraces details, but doesn't stray from the story to go on long expositions. I also would love if it was released slightly quicker, but the author has stated that he like quality over quantity, I am in awe of that. Some authors just think about cranking out as many chapters as possible, but this author really takes his time as you can see with the length of his paragraphs. The story is going at a pace which leaves you satisfied and wanting more to know what happens next. Characters are unique and I'm loving the brotherhood element that is going on, which in most cases with other novels, is never mentioned or just really badly expressed with superficial relationships, but I genuinely enjoy these characters' relations. The world background is good, however, I think it's this book's weakest point, but I simply don't care! The characters and their stories are enticing enough for me to come back everyday to see if another chapter has been released. Anybody that is reading this review, give this novel a go. You won't regret it!
Life is tough but even worse for Beta, who is still in his early years. Hopefully, he will get stronger as he grows up and even more development in the future. Still a work in progress but keep it up! I'll back you up all through the way 😊
I really liked the idea of this novel and it saddens me that it is left unfinished like this i hope the author get back to this beautiful story
Where are the updates for this story its a good book and I've been waiteing for a nice lil time for the update Or the finished work of the complete book
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I’ll will just put this down in one word. Amazing! I love how the story is progressing and expectations that will come to be known of the world as he explores.
This novel is intricate and rather unique than the other wuxia novels I've read. I'm extremely fond of the MC, Beta, with his very cold attitude to those he deem his experiments/enemies and warmth to his close ones. I'm hoping this novel could gain popularity just like the mc.
Such a good story ah..but the name is quiet crud I still like the flow of the story and suit my taste so I'll support it... Just like now I liked how you write the events and the world background. Your words is easy to understand, I'm a filipina so I'm not proficient in english but reading this is quiet good. Deep english is difficult to understand for me. Anyway thank you for your update. Pls update so quickly I'm seeing your story in the future I'll support it hehehe
I love this novel you should add more chapters in the near future. Since I have to have at least 140 characters in order to post this I will now list my favorite waifus 1: Chara (Undertale) 2: Mikan Tsumiki (Danganronpa) 3:Celestia Ludenberg (Danganronpa) 4:Toga Himiko (BNHA) 5:Neo (RWBY) 6:Rem (Re:Zero) 6:
I love the concept and the idea behind the story is unique. Kinda tired of cliche things in a novel so please give us something more unexpected. I hope that the MC will do more badass things in the future too. Keep on going with the writing. Ganbatte!
I’v lost count of how many stories I’v read hear after a while it gets repetitive this is honestly great finding Jems like this is what keeps me reading I love the power system character development and more I really f****** hope it ends up continuing
One of the better wrItten novels on this site. It is exciting and suspenseful with just the right amount of humor. There were quite a lot of chapter comments which tells me there are quite a lot of readers. I would love to see this novel continued. This is the 4th novel that Webnovel suggested that was dropped.
It's an excellent novel and I am hoping that author picks it back up ( considering it isn't dropped). I was really bored for a while before I stumbled on this novel. It has its own unique perspective character and world design. It's worth the time....only downside is that I have no clue if it will be continued or we will be left hanging here o-o)/ author San comon pick it up.
Please release more chapters, the one and only problem I have with the novel is the upload schedule. Overall I love the story, characters and the unique idea behind it. It's a great read and the development is fantastic. Just PLEASE give us more
Everything is amazing. I could go on forever about some of the characters. The fearsome indulgence I get when I read this. The background of the world. The development of the story. But those things are all GOOD. It's in human nature to point out the bad as well. So- sorry but when will this person ever update again? Seriously. He didn't even leave a word. He doesn't have to but it would be nice. I love this story. Really I do! But he's gone and if he ain't back by the fifth month then so am I.
卷 1
- 1 Death 6 years ago
- 2 Second Fight 6 years ago
- 3 Reward 6 years ago
- 4 Darkness 6 years ago
- 5 Outside 6 years ago
- 6 First Encounter 6 years ago
- 7 The Village 6 years ago
- 8 Brian 6 years ago
- 9 A Friend? 6 years ago
- 10 Workshop 6 years ago
- 11 Gains 6 years ago
- 12 Saland 6 years ago
- 13 Gathering Herbs 6 years ago
- 14 Slums 6 years ago
- 15 Black Market 6 years ago
- 16 Malvic Academy 6 years ago
- 17 Second Test 6 years ago
- 18 The Last Test 6 years ago
- 19 The Top Three 6 years ago
- 20 Class 1-S 6 years ago
- 21 Soulpower 6 years ago
- 22 Element 6 years ago
- 23 Unknown Element 6 years ago
- 24 Shapes 6 years ago
- 25 Arrow 6 years ago
- 26 Seniors 6 years ago
- 27 Precision And More Training 6 years ago
- 28 Brian's Fury 6 years ago
- 29 2 Vs 1 6 years ago
- 30 Two Arrows 6 years ago
- 31 Wilderness 6 years ago
- 32 Black Wolf 6 years ago
- 33 Pack 6 years ago
- 34 Chugum 6 years ago
- 35 Void Teacher 6 years ago
- 36 Stone Patterns 6 years ago
- 37 Runes 6 years ago
- 38 Mountain 6 years ago
- 39 Rigged 6 years ago
- 40 New Deal 6 years ago
- 41 Undead 6 years ago
- 42 Goodbye 6 years ago
- 43 Finally Back 6 years ago
- 44 Hideout 6 years ago
- 45 Experimentation 6 years ago
- 46 Changes 6 years ago
- 47 Commotion 6 years ago
- 48 Martial Abode 6 years ago
- 49 Staff Technique 6 years ago
- 50 City Camp 6 years ago
- 51 Odd Yet Fun 6 years ago
- 52 Entering the Ruins 6 years ago
- 53 Demonstration of Strength 6 years ago
- 54 Headmaster 6 years ago
- 55 The Key 6 years ago
- 56 Night 6 years ago
- 57 Sun 6 years ago
- 58 Attack 6 years ago
- 59 Battle 6 years ago
- 60 The Weapon 6 years ago
- 61 Back 6 years ago
- 62 River 5 years ago
- 63 Eyes 5 years ago
- 64 The Door 5 years ago
- 65 Black And White 5 years ago
- 66 Tinkerer 5 years ago
- 67 Machine 5 years ago
- 68 Return 5 years ago
- 69 Ambush 5 years ago
- 70 Outburst 5 years ago
- 71 Planning 5 years ago
- 72 Visiting the Slums Again 5 years ago
- 73 Slum Angel 5 years ago
- 74 Black Market 5 years ago
- 75 Furie 5 years ago
- 76 Medicine 5 years ago
- 77 Transplantation 5 years ago
- 78 The New Room 5 years ago
- 79 Results And The Forest 5 years ago
- 80 Beta's Ploy 5 years ago
This novel has gone beyond all my expectations for it and continues to amaze me. There isn’t a thing I would change about it. Keep up the fantastic work and work!