摘要
Author: So I was writing and erasing every time I had a chapter for my other story, I felt it had something missing. So I decided to practice by doing a Fan Fic after reading some of them. Some of them almost made puke of how much they made me cringe. Now I'll make it justice my doing one. I don't have to create too deep of lore. I can just work around what's already there and fix some things I hated in the original work. Vegito being retcon. Launch being lost in limbo. No love for Tien Shinhan.
I'm writing here and in webnovel.com.
Synopsis:
I died and reincarnated in the Dragon Ball universe. This is how everything went down after I was reborn.
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- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
the author claims to write a proper non bs fanfic of dragonball, which the author can't uphold. there is a lof of bs in the first few chapters already. so his parents lost their tails, which led to him being born without a tail???? ok, so if my parents each lost a leg i would then be born with only one leg? apparently its some kind of mutation there are no further explanations. also no zenkai bc too op. so what we have is a sayin with no tail and no zenkai, so basically a human, but he is a sayin. mcs system is only giving and organizing information he gains access to. mc has access to the internet of real earth. now i dont know what significance the internet will have considering that dbz earth and universe is more advanced then real earth but ok. he kidnapped goku and travelled with him to earth even though goku would have benn send to earth anyway. his hobby during his 1 year flight to flight is engineering. its a ****show in the making. the system at this point seems pointless and for entertainment only but i guess he can learn martial arts off of it once he gets the idea. to end on a good note the only thing i agree with is that the power lvls of dbz are too ridiculous. so restricting them to a reasonable degree is a good choice for dbz fan fics.
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Author i liked your work would please restart writing it or if possible write something about human in dragon ball z you can use various techniqui for human to become op like ki manupilation , elemantal ki or nature ki , ki magnification , stregthrning of meridian etc .
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Here is author-sama with a shameless rating!! People: Author-sama! why isn't it five stars? Author: I know my limits mortal! I am the harshest reviewer when it is about my work! I can only see mistakes!! People: Author-sama!!
卷 1 : Begin with passion!!!
- 1 Chapter 1: I’m Tired of Bad Fan Fics. 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: No Bullshit, Just Tell the Story! 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Describe When Needed! 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Don’t Time Skip! Make An Arc! Then Time Skip! part 1 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: Don’t Time Skip! Make An Arc! Then Time Skip! part 2 5 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Don’t Time Skip! Make An Arc! Then Time Skip! part 3 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Yamo! Part 1 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Yamo! Part 2 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Yamo! part 3 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Yamo! Part 4 5 years ago
Don’t like...one of the worst DB Novels I have ever read....the character is incredibly weak, he might as well of started out as a human,....you say OP Characters are Boring,...well UnderPowered Charcters are even More so, if I wanted to what a character that doesn’t really gain a lot of good things I would’ve watched Nasuverse