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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
A very good book MC is a little op but doesn't take advantage of it while learning about himself along the way. a good read and easy to enjoy
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Good book will read more chapters mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I really like this book. So I'm so sad that it is'nt finished yet and It's last update was over a year ago. I really hope that the author of this book resumes writing it.
Really you should complete this. But still, I like this. Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out so please write the next chapter soon so I can read it
otimo enredo,escrita boa simples facil de entender nao fica cançativo.alem de otimas ideias e mudanças na hora certa.Recomendarei essa historia para meus amigos .Escritor conquistou mais um fã parabens pelo trabalho e continue assim
Nice story, more update..................plz. ......... ...... ...... ... ......................... ......................plz ....................................... ......
Story isn't bad but needs a better flow at times. All in all still a good read. The main character can be annoying with how he wants to be strong but runs when it gets tough hopefully he'll grow out of that.
Good story Good plot Very nice description Very intriguing and interesting But the only problem is the quality of the English language used. Just see to it that it is upgraded
This story would have been better but it’s just completely dropped. Another great novel dropped by this site once again...................................
No... nope.. a mc as dumb as a brick a system that clearly dislikes being there a op but airheaded first pet only way to move the plot line along is to randomly change his race and destroy his town full of innocents to remove him from the village because hes too stupid to check his items think at all or even try to function ... failed novel plus the grammar Nazi stop by in nearly every end comments of a chapter to tell them they messed up its clearly a ill thought out novel and is just tosses stuff in to try and make it have meaning
I like how the author emphasized the characters and thier abilities. In general i would say that it was the best of the books that i have read.
For pokemon lover, this novel is really enjoyable to read, especially when the MC started collecting pet beast. The MC is quite ***** and stupid, he made mistakes here and there but i think thats his charm, in fact im glad that he's not some typical crazy OP faceslapping and arrogant MC like most system based novel has. And he's still 15! Still a green boy, so there r rooms for improvement. It's still early to judge this novel but so far its interesting read. So...keep up the good work Dear Author~ **. My dear author, its only my personal wish but please please please don't make this a stupid romance harem novel with dense MC and stupid arrogant vixen wives, instead i suggest to make it like those shonen type books, and focused on friendship and adventure, with limited to none romance and smart heroine (if any). And i hope u add interesting side characters (preferably male lol) who has their own unique personalities and not just MC's cannon fodder/stepping stone. Ok that's all....and this is just my suggestion, and in the end everything is up to u, Dear Author. You don't have to listen to what i wrote here hehe, just u creating this story is enough after all... And im thankful for that. I wish you luck~
Amazing story for monster tamers fans such as pokemon or digimon as this story made me feel that trainer vibe but with higher maturity and sense in real life.
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...........😍😍😍😍The story is really interesting, it has lot of potential. Truely looking forward for more......................😍😍😍😍😍
So starting off, this is an amazing novel, one of the best I have read on here. The plot is great, I like the direction it is going and it has alot of potential and room for growth. The author listens to his readers but doesn't just accept everything we tell him to do or change, he first weights the pros & cons it will have on the story and then sees if it fesible to add in his story(also puts his own spin on the idea to make it unique). He is also growing(tremendously) as a new author and has made less and less grammar mistakes since he started writing. The MC is very likeable and has very deep character development (he's dumb at times, but he is still a kid). The background and setting of the story is very nice and in my opinion is a unique spin on novels with similar fantasy setting. If you like novels with: Weak to strong MC, Beast taming, System(Game elements), And Magic, this is the novel for you. Should be Top 10 in original works in my opinion, at least Top 20 just needs more chapters
Hello. Im just rating this to be noticed. Why cant i read the novel? It was says that the chapter was deletes................................................................................................
Good story to read. I red all available chapters on one sitting. There are some spelling and grammar error at first but at later chapters it became almost nonexistent. Keep up the good work. Hope you write more chapters. :)
Its a good well plotted novel. Has neat character development as well as personal touches so the reader understands the mc in-depth. The best part is that the MC has a goal but he isn’t being given a golden spoon to achieve it. In by that the A.I. System grows with the MC like a teacher to a student.
This might seem like a cheap rating considering I haven't started reading this yet but I feel like it already deserves one '5 Star' review for the synopsis alone. The explanation for the RPG elements IRL is phenomenal then to top it off the MC's name is Ronald. I don't know why I just love the fact that his name is Ronald. I am contemplating giving a whole other 5 star review just for that, no sarcasm.
I really am really enjoying the story so far. I was wondering how often you update is it weeekly or just whenever you have time. I enjoy both systems and tamer stories you don’t get a lot of just tamer stories
Very great story so far. I think it would be better if you can somehow make the story line a little bit faster cutting very little discription parts and at a little faster timeline.
Gotta say I’ve been looking forward to a MC protagonist that is basically a beast tamer and here we have it. I really enjoyed the first few chapters. Hope you create more.
as a reader, i love any kind of story related to beast taming and such...i loved this book and planning to find its continuation ..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
A very good book MC is a little op but doesn't take advantage of it while learning about himself along the way. a good read and easy to enjoy
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Good book will read more chapters mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I really like this book. So I'm so sad that it is'nt finished yet and It's last update was over a year ago. I really hope that the author of this book resumes writing it.
Really you should complete this. But still, I like this. Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapter comes out so please write the next chapter soon so I can read it
otimo enredo,escrita boa simples facil de entender nao fica cançativo.alem de otimas ideias e mudanças na hora certa.Recomendarei essa historia para meus amigos .Escritor conquistou mais um fã parabens pelo trabalho e continue assim
Nice story, more update..................plz. ......... ...... ...... ... ......................... ......................plz ....................................... ......
Story isn't bad but needs a better flow at times. All in all still a good read. The main character can be annoying with how he wants to be strong but runs when it gets tough hopefully he'll grow out of that.
Good story Good plot Very nice description Very intriguing and interesting But the only problem is the quality of the English language used. Just see to it that it is upgraded
This story would have been better but it’s just completely dropped. Another great novel dropped by this site once again...................................
No... nope.. a mc as dumb as a brick a system that clearly dislikes being there a op but airheaded first pet only way to move the plot line along is to randomly change his race and destroy his town full of innocents to remove him from the village because hes too stupid to check his items think at all or even try to function ... failed novel plus the grammar Nazi stop by in nearly every end comments of a chapter to tell them they messed up its clearly a ill thought out novel and is just tosses stuff in to try and make it have meaning
I like how the author emphasized the characters and thier abilities. In general i would say that it was the best of the books that i have read.
For pokemon lover, this novel is really enjoyable to read, especially when the MC started collecting pet beast. The MC is quite ***** and stupid, he made mistakes here and there but i think thats his charm, in fact im glad that he's not some typical crazy OP faceslapping and arrogant MC like most system based novel has. And he's still 15! Still a green boy, so there r rooms for improvement. It's still early to judge this novel but so far its interesting read. So...keep up the good work Dear Author~ **. My dear author, its only my personal wish but please please please don't make this a stupid romance harem novel with dense MC and stupid arrogant vixen wives, instead i suggest to make it like those shonen type books, and focused on friendship and adventure, with limited to none romance and smart heroine (if any). And i hope u add interesting side characters (preferably male lol) who has their own unique personalities and not just MC's cannon fodder/stepping stone. Ok that's all....and this is just my suggestion, and in the end everything is up to u, Dear Author. You don't have to listen to what i wrote here hehe, just u creating this story is enough after all... And im thankful for that. I wish you luck~
Amazing story for monster tamers fans such as pokemon or digimon as this story made me feel that trainer vibe but with higher maturity and sense in real life.
.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
...........😍😍😍😍The story is really interesting, it has lot of potential. Truely looking forward for more......................😍😍😍😍😍
So starting off, this is an amazing novel, one of the best I have read on here. The plot is great, I like the direction it is going and it has alot of potential and room for growth. The author listens to his readers but doesn't just accept everything we tell him to do or change, he first weights the pros & cons it will have on the story and then sees if it fesible to add in his story(also puts his own spin on the idea to make it unique). He is also growing(tremendously) as a new author and has made less and less grammar mistakes since he started writing. The MC is very likeable and has very deep character development (he's dumb at times, but he is still a kid). The background and setting of the story is very nice and in my opinion is a unique spin on novels with similar fantasy setting. If you like novels with: Weak to strong MC, Beast taming, System(Game elements), And Magic, this is the novel for you. Should be Top 10 in original works in my opinion, at least Top 20 just needs more chapters
Hello. Im just rating this to be noticed. Why cant i read the novel? It was says that the chapter was deletes................................................................................................
Good story to read. I red all available chapters on one sitting. There are some spelling and grammar error at first but at later chapters it became almost nonexistent. Keep up the good work. Hope you write more chapters. :)
Its a good well plotted novel. Has neat character development as well as personal touches so the reader understands the mc in-depth. The best part is that the MC has a goal but he isn’t being given a golden spoon to achieve it. In by that the A.I. System grows with the MC like a teacher to a student.
This might seem like a cheap rating considering I haven't started reading this yet but I feel like it already deserves one '5 Star' review for the synopsis alone. The explanation for the RPG elements IRL is phenomenal then to top it off the MC's name is Ronald. I don't know why I just love the fact that his name is Ronald. I am contemplating giving a whole other 5 star review just for that, no sarcasm.
I really am really enjoying the story so far. I was wondering how often you update is it weeekly or just whenever you have time. I enjoy both systems and tamer stories you don’t get a lot of just tamer stories
Very great story so far. I think it would be better if you can somehow make the story line a little bit faster cutting very little discription parts and at a little faster timeline.
Gotta say I’ve been looking forward to a MC protagonist that is basically a beast tamer and here we have it. I really enjoyed the first few chapters. Hope you create more.
as a reader, i love any kind of story related to beast taming and such...i loved this book and planning to find its continuation ..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]