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寫檢討una historia muy apreciable y una direccion que promete ser excelente como trama. me gusta que el MC sea inteligente pero que se centre principalmente en su vida y no simplemente ayude todo el mundo.
Read up to here its decent but too many elements in there that's just a turn off for me. Throw the system in there that's alright but boom give him all the skills known to man rofl. I know everyone wants an op mc but a lot of readers enjoy the process in which a mc goes from Weak to Strong it makes them more attached to said mc and more immersed in your story. Then the system with a personality? Seeing this trend for a while now but this has ruined a couple novels. Then the starting kinda gave me a Holistic Fantasy vibe but that's actually a plus. The story also come off as kinda rushed in terms of how quickly he met the main cast, could have explored the world a little bit for those that never watched fairy tail and could have explain a bit about magic too. But this is just my 2 cents good luck on your novel.
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This story is good but I feel like it could be a better but it's still really good book. I just wish it would update more. If it could update more I feel like it would be a great book to read.
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揭示劇透I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
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揭示劇透This story is for me damn op mc,harem and anime what more could I ask for?so I suggest this to you guys that like "anime system fantasy"novels like unlimited anime works and holistic fantasy.Do vote this for it treasure that all mankind "SPECIALLY" to otakus out their,cause I say for sure it will give you one bloody fantasy.........wellllll~ at least for me!!!
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first of all i like your charachter design especially how you describe our protagonist then obviosly our protagonist charachter which show in face of despair he still make choice to die fighting rather then thinking of a way for survival. But what most important is what magic you gonna use for our mc so that it defines his charachter. I hope you continue this novel as i can see it can be quit interesting .
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una historia muy apreciable y una direccion que promete ser excelente como trama. me gusta que el MC sea inteligente pero que se centre principalmente en su vida y no simplemente ayude todo el mundo.
Read up to here its decent but too many elements in there that's just a turn off for me. Throw the system in there that's alright but boom give him all the skills known to man rofl. I know everyone wants an op mc but a lot of readers enjoy the process in which a mc goes from Weak to Strong it makes them more attached to said mc and more immersed in your story. Then the system with a personality? Seeing this trend for a while now but this has ruined a couple novels. Then the starting kinda gave me a Holistic Fantasy vibe but that's actually a plus. The story also come off as kinda rushed in terms of how quickly he met the main cast, could have explored the world a little bit for those that never watched fairy tail and could have explain a bit about magic too. But this is just my 2 cents good luck on your novel.
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This story is good but I feel like it could be a better but it's still really good book. I just wish it would update more. If it could update more I feel like it would be a great book to read.
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...........nice ........... ..............................................................................................hahahahshahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahhahahahahaahhaahhaahahhahaahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmm hmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Uggghhh& hgffttb. Kjvfddxcvjko dkdkdsbsx daowqurfhr SORRY GUYS SORRY AUTHOR/CREATOR SORRY GUYS SORRY AUTHOR/CREATOR SORRY GUYS SORRY AUTHOR/CREATOR SORRY GUYS SORRY AUTHOR/CREATOR THIS IS HOW A QWERTY ENGLISH KEYBOARD IS ARRANGED QWERTYUIOP ASDFGHJKL ZXCVBNM Nothing to say. Sorry
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Will edit the rate but for now, adding it for read :)
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揭示劇透I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more More more
揭示劇透This story is for me damn op mc,harem and anime what more could I ask for?so I suggest this to you guys that like "anime system fantasy"novels like unlimited anime works and holistic fantasy.Do vote this for it treasure that all mankind "SPECIALLY" to otakus out their,cause I say for sure it will give you one bloody fantasy.........wellllll~ at least for me!!!
Keep it up anfd make it more than interesting........... """""""""::::::"::""""""""":"""""""""«""""":""""":""":""":"«"""""""::":"""""""""\aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
This novel is pretty cool so hope it will have a steady update... Djdjwkxkwndkslwjxnslfhr xkqcbekskslxkeldldkfkxosmwndxlafgfdfggff dffsffsdggfdfgfddffdffg
first of all i like your charachter design especially how you describe our protagonist then obviosly our protagonist charachter which show in face of despair he still make choice to die fighting rather then thinking of a way for survival. But what most important is what magic you gonna use for our mc so that it defines his charachter. I hope you continue this novel as i can see it can be quit interesting .
Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!! Pls dont drop this!!