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Excellent novel I’m overall impressed keep up the good work ok 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Well, how i say it, i loke a story and background but everything become uninteresting when i know its female mc, sorry this is not my plate, u already do a good job, see u!
This is one of the best novels that I have ever read . The story is fabulous character development is there it has all the qualities of a top rated novel. I recommend all to try it out as you will not regry it
I'm sorry to say, but you have failed to deliver your world. The idea is very good and has a lot of potential, but the way it's shaped is simply bad... The first 7 or so chapters were huge info dumps about things that don't impact the story at all. We, as readers, don't need to know the way chakra and body cultivation works in all that many details. You can keep it vague at the start. Start with the early levels. The relevant one. In here, you started talking in detail about the last levels of power and we still have no idea of what in the world is happening. After the info dump chapters, the FanFic part begins, where you should start to expand on the story and it's characters...You don't. You keep detailing the MC's life like an activity log. Granted, some actions can be done like that, but it's very confusing to read things like... "I started training. I am now strong. I'm starting to solve the world's problems..." It's very bland. You should put more emotions into your character. Describe to us her first reaction to being able to see(she was blind for god's sake. She should at least show some reaction to sight...not be like "Oh, I can see. Moving on..."). The surrounding characters should also have emotions. Even the original Itachi has more emotions then your characters... The dialogue is almost Non-Existent. She got monologued by the Overlord for her training then...nothing. I can barely remember when. or if, she spoke. You also adopted the side-character POV style. I personally like this style, but, if you are going to write it as what they are thinking right now, don't explain their whole life... I don't thing anyone thinks of their whole life story every time they form a thought... But, as I said, the story does have potential, It also doesn't have any glaring plot holes witch is good. The grammar is also decent. I have only read 16 chapters and this is my review on those, who knows, maybe after those 16 chapters I read, it gets better, but those chapters made me turn away. To sum it up, it has potential but they way it's written is boring... Sorry for the negative review...
One of best story ever i read. Starting world is good cz many people know that world. And no romance for mc is wise choice, since no one can handle her. But if you don't like op mc, this story not for you.
I’ll be honest here and say it. This story is hard to read. Maybe it will get better in the future idk but right now I’m gonna put this one on hold. Now the writing quality is good and there’s no obvious plotholes (minor ones that naruto nerds like myself find like having Sasukes rinnesharingan naturally even though it’s a mutation from having the EMS and is you get the EMS from a human body transplant so that should be possible...but it doesn’t detract from the story to much) but the problem is and with a lot of naruto fanfics out there is that people like to stick and OP MC and just clean up the naruto world (I haven’t read that far so idk if the next bit is spoiler) kill of Danzo, orichimaru, zestu, Save the uchiha clan, haku and just do all this stuff because the MC OP. And that isn’t inherently bad if your goal is to stop every major conflict before it starts but that doesn’t seem to be the story here. The way the story seems to be going is one about a girls path to godhood while she travels many worlds and different lands and even though god(or overlord I guess) mentioned about an enemy that seems to be very late in the story trillions of years in the future. The MC doesn’t need to be OP at birth it honestly retracts from this story because it’s useless. If the overlord wanted her body to be OP he could have stuck her in kaguyas body or put her in a higher tier world and let her cultivate to max Instead of 0.001%. I believe if you’re gonna stick her into a world the goal doesn’t need to be power because the overlord should be able to instantly grant her it(I’m talking about non soul power and even if he couldn’t he could just let her stay in the chaos world or any strong her to instantly get power) the goal should more be about ideals vs reality or just some emotional stuff that naruto is known for. Since the overlord chose her for her personality (and soul) she should constantly face failure or tough decisions because even though she was a good person she’s basically becoming a god and just saying I’m gonna protect everyone isn’t really the mindset an overlord of the universe should have unless you’re a shonen protagonist. Anyway I feel like my point is being lost the more I type so I’ll sum it up like this. Although being OP is fine being one of the strongest people around birth is a little much for the story and I think she should be hit with tons of ideals vs reality which naruto is known for and that could also explain why the overlord chose this world to.
As most webnovels, they don't really deserve a five star. But since it would look bad if it was any worse, I decided to give it a five, because this novel is good. I've never watched Naruto, but this story allows me to immerse into the world without feeling left out. It's not the perfect thing, I might say that it is even bland. But I did finish it, and it is quite rare that I actually finish a novel these days. At the very least, it is entertaining. Good job.
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This is absolutely one of the most fantastic and well planned original novels published here. What I like the most here is that even though it changed most of the storyline, it made me even want to read it more and ask for more. It is clear that how the story runs, and how the story develop was prepared well. Please continue on writing and just for you to know, you satisfy our craving for a good novel.
This is the best fanfiction that I've read. Instead of sticking to the narrative of the original material, the author has expanded the background and the scale of the story. The source material is only used as a launching point for the story. It is refreshing to see a reincarnated character not being concerned about changing the plot or course of events of the fiction world. And, that allowed the author to give the MC complete ******* in living her own adventures. It is a very creative execution of a fanfiction in my opinion. The flow of the story is also superb. It is kinda quick paced but it doesn't lack of important details when needed. It also have a good amount (not too much) of showing other character's POV that helps the world feel more dynamic without being so tiresome. Overall, it is highly recommended. 😀
I was very hesitant to read this novel given what i had heard about it through comments and based on me thinking this was merely a naruto fanfic but i couldn't be farther from the truth. When i started reading it i thought it was a slow beginner but in i think 10ish chapters i found a fairly rich backstory that engrossed me as i kept reading. Great concept, Great World building, Great character development and while it can use some work, this novel is really fucking good. To put it in perspective, I am writing this review at 2am GMT on the 28th, depressed that there is no more chapters to read after binging the entire novel starting from 2pm GMT on the 27th. I highly recommend this novel to any reader and while I haven't gone super into detail with the overall nitty gritty, Trust me, despite its flaws, which are really bloody minor in my books, this novel is worth everything. I am a free spirit stoner that balances his stones and drops most novels when they become premium but in the case of this novel, I am immediately dropping all other prem novels if this one goes premium and I will most likely turn into a payer for this novel if it continues this quality. I don't know how many chapters are planned for this novel but I can easily say it has the potential for another 2-300 at minimum. The only reason i don't give it a glowing 5/5 and a 4.6 is due to them using quite a few characters that are not originals and quite a few places that arent original. I mean seriously the reference game of this novel is on point.
I LOVE IT SUPER DUPER LOVE IT. It's, not one of those cliche OP characters this one is unique. Not just pure conquest or anything and the flow of the story just keeps building its momentum and you will not be bored even just one chapter so far this is the best I have read.
ot is good but there are errors in writting and the story is going so fast it had so many potential so many potential so keep on going sorry if there is wrong in my grammar
I’m impressed by your dedication most other would just drop their novel in the first 3 weeks. It’s also one of the best story I read so far. I mean like come on it’s a story of a female that is reborn and is not bulied in the first 3 chapter. I’m also fine with romance later in the story but I kinda wanna see her fall in love with a guy it makes it more interesting. -p.s. who is shipping her with the overlord lol
It's good story that makes me want to read it more but I sometime feel that the protagonist somewhat overpower. But I think it's good to read to past time.
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Did the name of the story changed? From " Ancestor please calm down" to " Overlord Empress". .
Binge read from chapter 1- latest going to bed now lol..love the novel please don't drop it 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. If you're reading this I'd say you should give the novel a try, I feel it'd be worth your time!
What the F*ck I can't read it says its deleted 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
I rarely write a review about a novel, but this novel deserves it. The story is going a bit slow at beginning and its a fanfic of naruto HOWEVER after volume 1 the author changed it into his original storyline which for me is kinda interesting. The twist is really well done much like emperor's domination but with female mc and less gore also more sensible MC. If you like female mc with op power and good story (less snu snu but more brain) this is your cup of novel :)
This awesome novel I have ever read!!! So good!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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It was a good and interesting story for me... I'm a fan of anime and it happened that Naruto is one of my favorite anime... I think it was hard to right this story because this needs your attention and focus so it won't go bad.. Just keep up the good work author...
This is a must-read novel.. So far I'm getting hooked up with every chapter.. The story is quite good.. I greatly admire the female lead..also the side characters. Keep up the great work author.😁😁😁
This is a must-read novel.. So far I'm getting hooked up with every chapter.. The story is quite good.. I greatly admire the female lead..also the side characters. Keep up the great work author.😁😁😁
Overall very good novel, the update is very stable but i just hope for more chapter everyday and more action from the main character, the action and the enemies need to be little more detailed
I personally like female OP MCs and this novel really didn't disappoint me! I'm so glad I picked it up, the story wasn't draggy and there were a lot of action (of course with the MC being super OP). I like that the MCs isn't super cold-blooded, but will still do what needs to be done. Overall really like this novel and looking forward to more chapter updates!!!!
Nice for author, i like the backgound family, and badass mc... Just step to step became to strong, so this story is so exited .. I have bad english but this story make me some feels.. And please give Ichika a Husband... !!
Excellent novel I’m overall impressed keep up the good work ok 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Well, how i say it, i loke a story and background but everything become uninteresting when i know its female mc, sorry this is not my plate, u already do a good job, see u!
This is one of the best novels that I have ever read . The story is fabulous character development is there it has all the qualities of a top rated novel. I recommend all to try it out as you will not regry it
I'm sorry to say, but you have failed to deliver your world. The idea is very good and has a lot of potential, but the way it's shaped is simply bad... The first 7 or so chapters were huge info dumps about things that don't impact the story at all. We, as readers, don't need to know the way chakra and body cultivation works in all that many details. You can keep it vague at the start. Start with the early levels. The relevant one. In here, you started talking in detail about the last levels of power and we still have no idea of what in the world is happening. After the info dump chapters, the FanFic part begins, where you should start to expand on the story and it's characters...You don't. You keep detailing the MC's life like an activity log. Granted, some actions can be done like that, but it's very confusing to read things like... "I started training. I am now strong. I'm starting to solve the world's problems..." It's very bland. You should put more emotions into your character. Describe to us her first reaction to being able to see(she was blind for god's sake. She should at least show some reaction to sight...not be like "Oh, I can see. Moving on..."). The surrounding characters should also have emotions. Even the original Itachi has more emotions then your characters... The dialogue is almost Non-Existent. She got monologued by the Overlord for her training then...nothing. I can barely remember when. or if, she spoke. You also adopted the side-character POV style. I personally like this style, but, if you are going to write it as what they are thinking right now, don't explain their whole life... I don't thing anyone thinks of their whole life story every time they form a thought... But, as I said, the story does have potential, It also doesn't have any glaring plot holes witch is good. The grammar is also decent. I have only read 16 chapters and this is my review on those, who knows, maybe after those 16 chapters I read, it gets better, but those chapters made me turn away. To sum it up, it has potential but they way it's written is boring... Sorry for the negative review...
One of best story ever i read. Starting world is good cz many people know that world. And no romance for mc is wise choice, since no one can handle her. But if you don't like op mc, this story not for you.
I’ll be honest here and say it. This story is hard to read. Maybe it will get better in the future idk but right now I’m gonna put this one on hold. Now the writing quality is good and there’s no obvious plotholes (minor ones that naruto nerds like myself find like having Sasukes rinnesharingan naturally even though it’s a mutation from having the EMS and is you get the EMS from a human body transplant so that should be possible...but it doesn’t detract from the story to much) but the problem is and with a lot of naruto fanfics out there is that people like to stick and OP MC and just clean up the naruto world (I haven’t read that far so idk if the next bit is spoiler) kill of Danzo, orichimaru, zestu, Save the uchiha clan, haku and just do all this stuff because the MC OP. And that isn’t inherently bad if your goal is to stop every major conflict before it starts but that doesn’t seem to be the story here. The way the story seems to be going is one about a girls path to godhood while she travels many worlds and different lands and even though god(or overlord I guess) mentioned about an enemy that seems to be very late in the story trillions of years in the future. The MC doesn’t need to be OP at birth it honestly retracts from this story because it’s useless. If the overlord wanted her body to be OP he could have stuck her in kaguyas body or put her in a higher tier world and let her cultivate to max Instead of 0.001%. I believe if you’re gonna stick her into a world the goal doesn’t need to be power because the overlord should be able to instantly grant her it(I’m talking about non soul power and even if he couldn’t he could just let her stay in the chaos world or any strong her to instantly get power) the goal should more be about ideals vs reality or just some emotional stuff that naruto is known for. Since the overlord chose her for her personality (and soul) she should constantly face failure or tough decisions because even though she was a good person she’s basically becoming a god and just saying I’m gonna protect everyone isn’t really the mindset an overlord of the universe should have unless you’re a shonen protagonist. Anyway I feel like my point is being lost the more I type so I’ll sum it up like this. Although being OP is fine being one of the strongest people around birth is a little much for the story and I think she should be hit with tons of ideals vs reality which naruto is known for and that could also explain why the overlord chose this world to.
As most webnovels, they don't really deserve a five star. But since it would look bad if it was any worse, I decided to give it a five, because this novel is good. I've never watched Naruto, but this story allows me to immerse into the world without feeling left out. It's not the perfect thing, I might say that it is even bland. But I did finish it, and it is quite rare that I actually finish a novel these days. At the very least, it is entertaining. Good job.
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the chapter is.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................good.
揭示劇透 This is absolutely one of the most fantastic and well planned original novels published here. What I like the most here is that even though it changed most of the storyline, it made me even want to read it more and ask for more. It is clear that how the story runs, and how the story develop was prepared well. Please continue on writing and just for you to know, you satisfy our craving for a good novel.
This is the best fanfiction that I've read. Instead of sticking to the narrative of the original material, the author has expanded the background and the scale of the story. The source material is only used as a launching point for the story. It is refreshing to see a reincarnated character not being concerned about changing the plot or course of events of the fiction world. And, that allowed the author to give the MC complete ******* in living her own adventures. It is a very creative execution of a fanfiction in my opinion. The flow of the story is also superb. It is kinda quick paced but it doesn't lack of important details when needed. It also have a good amount (not too much) of showing other character's POV that helps the world feel more dynamic without being so tiresome. Overall, it is highly recommended. 😀
I was very hesitant to read this novel given what i had heard about it through comments and based on me thinking this was merely a naruto fanfic but i couldn't be farther from the truth. When i started reading it i thought it was a slow beginner but in i think 10ish chapters i found a fairly rich backstory that engrossed me as i kept reading. Great concept, Great World building, Great character development and while it can use some work, this novel is really fucking good. To put it in perspective, I am writing this review at 2am GMT on the 28th, depressed that there is no more chapters to read after binging the entire novel starting from 2pm GMT on the 27th. I highly recommend this novel to any reader and while I haven't gone super into detail with the overall nitty gritty, Trust me, despite its flaws, which are really bloody minor in my books, this novel is worth everything. I am a free spirit stoner that balances his stones and drops most novels when they become premium but in the case of this novel, I am immediately dropping all other prem novels if this one goes premium and I will most likely turn into a payer for this novel if it continues this quality. I don't know how many chapters are planned for this novel but I can easily say it has the potential for another 2-300 at minimum. The only reason i don't give it a glowing 5/5 and a 4.6 is due to them using quite a few characters that are not originals and quite a few places that arent original. I mean seriously the reference game of this novel is on point.
I LOVE IT SUPER DUPER LOVE IT. It's, not one of those cliche OP characters this one is unique. Not just pure conquest or anything and the flow of the story just keeps building its momentum and you will not be bored even just one chapter so far this is the best I have read.
ot is good but there are errors in writting and the story is going so fast it had so many potential so many potential so keep on going sorry if there is wrong in my grammar
I’m impressed by your dedication most other would just drop their novel in the first 3 weeks. It’s also one of the best story I read so far. I mean like come on it’s a story of a female that is reborn and is not bulied in the first 3 chapter. I’m also fine with romance later in the story but I kinda wanna see her fall in love with a guy it makes it more interesting. -p.s. who is shipping her with the overlord lol
It's good story that makes me want to read it more but I sometime feel that the protagonist somewhat overpower. But I think it's good to read to past time.
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Did the name of the story changed? From " Ancestor please calm down" to " Overlord Empress". .
Binge read from chapter 1- latest going to bed now lol..love the novel please don't drop it 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏. If you're reading this I'd say you should give the novel a try, I feel it'd be worth your time!
What the F*ck I can't read it says its deleted 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
I rarely write a review about a novel, but this novel deserves it. The story is going a bit slow at beginning and its a fanfic of naruto HOWEVER after volume 1 the author changed it into his original storyline which for me is kinda interesting. The twist is really well done much like emperor's domination but with female mc and less gore also more sensible MC. If you like female mc with op power and good story (less snu snu but more brain) this is your cup of novel :)
This awesome novel I have ever read!!! So good!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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It was a good and interesting story for me... I'm a fan of anime and it happened that Naruto is one of my favorite anime... I think it was hard to right this story because this needs your attention and focus so it won't go bad.. Just keep up the good work author...
This is a must-read novel.. So far I'm getting hooked up with every chapter.. The story is quite good.. I greatly admire the female lead..also the side characters. Keep up the great work author.😁😁😁
This is a must-read novel.. So far I'm getting hooked up with every chapter.. The story is quite good.. I greatly admire the female lead..also the side characters. Keep up the great work author.😁😁😁
Overall very good novel, the update is very stable but i just hope for more chapter everyday and more action from the main character, the action and the enemies need to be little more detailed
I personally like female OP MCs and this novel really didn't disappoint me! I'm so glad I picked it up, the story wasn't draggy and there were a lot of action (of course with the MC being super OP). I like that the MCs isn't super cold-blooded, but will still do what needs to be done. Overall really like this novel and looking forward to more chapter updates!!!!
Nice for author, i like the backgound family, and badass mc... Just step to step became to strong, so this story is so exited .. I have bad english but this story make me some feels.. And please give Ichika a Husband... !!