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rip dropped but this was actually pretty good! Wish that author kept it up. Even a mediocre end would be nice. Or wait no. Idk. Anyway, would have been nice if the author returned.
I like it's well written but it's a mess there tends to characters who are not highlighted and too many characters to forget.
its because of this fic that I created a count webnovel. I dont know if I should hate it for that... But it was a good read at least, one of my favorite fanfic in this site. Top five at least
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It would be nice to see if this continues. As much as I dont care for naruto (people can hate me all you want its just not my cup of tea) this was actually pretty good and I would like to see more, but I wonder if maybe other anime worlds will make an appearance.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Is this still being written or is it over? I normally dont enjoy fan-fiction but this actually sucked me in and I was hooked after the first chapter!
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It's 1 of the greatest ff I ever read, that's why pls finish this novel and don't stop now. It's been few month now since this novel have any new update , that's why pls continue this novel again.
protagonist is men or girl ? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 Español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español
I just....love it. The world background. Character design. Everything are just perfect! My first impression of this novel was “...ohh! Naruto fanfic without those *****y harem!” My second impression was “yah!! MC is a Female(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))♡. My third impression was “The naruto arc was so good☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆. My fourth impression “ehh....original world back ground. Maybe not good”. *slapped myself* ∑(ﾟДﾟ) fuc* this second also super duper good!!! I love it!!!!!!!! The best fanfic so far about naruto I have ever read. Without those weirdo freak that drooling after P*ss***. Without freak that used their d**k to think than brain. Thank for creating this fanfic, and especially the original second arc!!!!☆〜（ゝ。∂）
This is a well-written book honestly ............................ Bring it back and update please
When are new chapters coming out? It’s been months now. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
This novel is very good Please read the first 7 chapter or else u would complain about not understanding the story There is some info dumping please read or else u people would complain that u don’t understand The author never forget to mention any detail just u skip through it If u don’t like to read information then this novel is not recommended to u This novel has good foundation and potential U would not get bore most of time expected when u have to read information
Really impress, at first i thought its naruto,, but its entirely different.. the character is the same but the plot is diff. And as i read further you will youll see an entirely diff. Places... hope for your success...
Honestly one of the best to ever do it! I'm just curious as to the direction to author will now take since breaking off from the naruto main story line. I can't wait!!!
I love the story itself, it can be said that this is a Naruto fan fiction with a new dimension and plot, I've read this for nth times already since I find this, yet no update happen since the last one, I wonder what happen to the author...
One of the best novel for a "narutoverse fanfiction" author shows knowledge of naruto and its world while also incorporating her own idea which makes it unique on its own right. The writting is very good with little mistakes here and there but not enough to ruin the experience(english is my second language). Im excited to see whats to come. So glad i came across this hidden gem.
Author-san will there be more further chapters in the future? Hoping there’s more cause I honestly enjoyed every moment of it. I really hope you continue this story! I’m not good with words but PLEASE!!!
Dayuuuuuummmmm gooooooodddd!!!!! One of the best light novel i have ever read. As the work is full of many backgrounds on how the MC get the power and etc. it has a story of its own combination of modern and traditional in a unique way.
I love the flow of story but some part have flaws, especially when Naruto's kids were mention in a later part... Yet no description of the mc's adventure in the underworld was written
This is a great novel, one of the best Naruto fan fictions I've read the only flaw is recently the stability of the updates has dropped . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .
There are few novels with badass female leads, but most of them still depended on their male partners whose power are a lot stronger from the start......despite the FL nurturing and building her power and consider genius and everything... This novel makes a difference... the FL badass and OP, and no male lead that has power more than her from the start...... That's what make me very interested... because there are many novel with this kind of character with male lead.... The storytelling is very good... the background themes are also good,,, I hope the writer can keep his imagination running and continue this story until the end....
I have binged read this novel and I must say that the author‘s writing have improved A LOT over time. Glad I found this novel because I find the story quite entertaining. I really love how it starts off with as a fan-fic for the base of the story itself and gradually moves on towards the author‘s own world. To author, I want to say good luck in adapting to your new lifestyle😊 Fighting! 💪
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When there is updating it is almost everyday but, there are periods of time were there isnt updates and it would be nice to be noticed about it. Like recently you said something about a colleague's daughter's birthday but i am pretty sure a bday doesnt lasre a whole weak. If somethings up then i hope everything goes well
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揭示劇透 rip dropped but this was actually pretty good! Wish that author kept it up. Even a mediocre end would be nice. Or wait no. Idk. Anyway, would have been nice if the author returned.
I like it's well written but it's a mess there tends to characters who are not highlighted and too many characters to forget.
its because of this fic that I created a count webnovel. I dont know if I should hate it for that... But it was a good read at least, one of my favorite fanfic in this site. Top five at least
揭示劇透 It would be nice to see if this continues. As much as I dont care for naruto (people can hate me all you want its just not my cup of tea) this was actually pretty good and I would like to see more, but I wonder if maybe other anime worlds will make an appearance.
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Is this still being written or is it over? I normally dont enjoy fan-fiction but this actually sucked me in and I was hooked after the first chapter!
GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD! GOOD!
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揭示劇透 It's 1 of the greatest ff I ever read, that's why pls finish this novel and don't stop now. It's been few month now since this novel have any new update , that's why pls continue this novel again.
protagonist is men or girl ? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 Español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español español
I just....love it. The world background. Character design. Everything are just perfect! My first impression of this novel was “...ohh! Naruto fanfic without those *****y harem!” My second impression was “yah!! MC is a Female(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))♡. My third impression was “The naruto arc was so good☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆. My fourth impression “ehh....original world back ground. Maybe not good”. *slapped myself* ∑(ﾟДﾟ) fuc* this second also super duper good!!! I love it!!!!!!!! The best fanfic so far about naruto I have ever read. Without those weirdo freak that drooling after P*ss***. Without freak that used their d**k to think than brain. Thank for creating this fanfic, and especially the original second arc!!!!☆〜（ゝ。∂）
This is a well-written book honestly ............................ Bring it back and update please
When are new chapters coming out? It’s been months now. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
This novel is very good Please read the first 7 chapter or else u would complain about not understanding the story There is some info dumping please read or else u people would complain that u don’t understand The author never forget to mention any detail just u skip through it If u don’t like to read information then this novel is not recommended to u This novel has good foundation and potential U would not get bore most of time expected when u have to read information
Really impress, at first i thought its naruto,, but its entirely different.. the character is the same but the plot is diff. And as i read further you will youll see an entirely diff. Places... hope for your success...
Honestly one of the best to ever do it! I'm just curious as to the direction to author will now take since breaking off from the naruto main story line. I can't wait!!!
I love the story itself, it can be said that this is a Naruto fan fiction with a new dimension and plot, I've read this for nth times already since I find this, yet no update happen since the last one, I wonder what happen to the author...
One of the best novel for a "narutoverse fanfiction" author shows knowledge of naruto and its world while also incorporating her own idea which makes it unique on its own right. The writting is very good with little mistakes here and there but not enough to ruin the experience(english is my second language). Im excited to see whats to come. So glad i came across this hidden gem.
Author-san will there be more further chapters in the future? Hoping there’s more cause I honestly enjoyed every moment of it. I really hope you continue this story! I’m not good with words but PLEASE!!!
Dayuuuuuummmmm gooooooodddd!!!!! One of the best light novel i have ever read. As the work is full of many backgrounds on how the MC get the power and etc. it has a story of its own combination of modern and traditional in a unique way.
I love the flow of story but some part have flaws, especially when Naruto's kids were mention in a later part... Yet no description of the mc's adventure in the underworld was written
This is a great novel, one of the best Naruto fan fictions I've read the only flaw is recently the stability of the updates has dropped . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .
There are few novels with badass female leads, but most of them still depended on their male partners whose power are a lot stronger from the start......despite the FL nurturing and building her power and consider genius and everything... This novel makes a difference... the FL badass and OP, and no male lead that has power more than her from the start...... That's what make me very interested... because there are many novel with this kind of character with male lead.... The storytelling is very good... the background themes are also good,,, I hope the writer can keep his imagination running and continue this story until the end....
I have binged read this novel and I must say that the author‘s writing have improved A LOT over time. Glad I found this novel because I find the story quite entertaining. I really love how it starts off with as a fan-fic for the base of the story itself and gradually moves on towards the author‘s own world. To author, I want to say good luck in adapting to your new lifestyle😊 Fighting! 💪
揭示劇透 Ssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Nice fanfic
When there is updating it is almost everyday but, there are periods of time were there isnt updates and it would be nice to be noticed about it. Like recently you said something about a colleague's daughter's birthday but i am pretty sure a bday doesnt lasre a whole weak. If somethings up then i hope everything goes well
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