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Love what he is doing well I know he has a life but I wish the updates were more likely to happen, but still great story though a well deserve gem.
It hasn't taken a while for the MC to start doing his job which is really a good thing to me, and he isn't afraid to stand up for himself and others if needed.
This is a hidden gem if I’ve ever seen one. If only the author updated (understandable since the dude has a life outside of making new chapters) then this would have had a perfect 5 in my books. To Aurvandil if don’t beat yourself up over not updating (although it makes me sad ☹️ ) since this is something you chose to do by yourself and can drop it anytime you want (by the way pls don’t). PS. Dude these minor spelling mistakes are driving *sarcasm* my sophisticated mind with it’s s masterful command of the English language *end sarcasm* nuts (tbh I just need that 140 characters to post =p)
Was waiting for more chaps..seemed like worthy read n enjoyable but now seeing no updates or info from from the author I an assuming that like several other This one too is gonna join Droped category.........will keep it in library for few more days then will remove it......
Okay there isn’t much to go on at them moment with the low amount of chapters but I just wanted to say that I’d love to seem more of this work I think of the author does this right it will be an amazing story. Author dude love the work so keep it up I look forward to seeing this story grow and come alive
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Love what he is doing well I know he has a life but I wish the updates were more likely to happen, but still great story though a well deserve gem.
It hasn't taken a while for the MC to start doing his job which is really a good thing to me, and he isn't afraid to stand up for himself and others if needed.
This is a hidden gem if I’ve ever seen one. If only the author updated (understandable since the dude has a life outside of making new chapters) then this would have had a perfect 5 in my books. To Aurvandil if don’t beat yourself up over not updating (although it makes me sad ☹️ ) since this is something you chose to do by yourself and can drop it anytime you want (by the way pls don’t). PS. Dude these minor spelling mistakes are driving *sarcasm* my sophisticated mind with it’s s masterful command of the English language *end sarcasm* nuts (tbh I just need that 140 characters to post =p)
Was waiting for more chaps..seemed like worthy read n enjoyable but now seeing no updates or info from from the author I an assuming that like several other This one too is gonna join Droped category.........will keep it in library for few more days then will remove it......
Okay there isn’t much to go on at them moment with the low amount of chapters but I just wanted to say that I’d love to seem more of this work I think of the author does this right it will be an amazing story. Author dude love the work so keep it up I look forward to seeing this story grow and come alive
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.