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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Very amazing story nice narration, but are there going to be any more chapters .is your health unwell? Have broken up? Russian gov. put ban on webnovel or something ?Atleast tell me you're alive just tell me?😢
The story is interesting if you like action this might be a good choice for you but be slightly aware that it contains many different dark themes so be careful
Good book likable characters nice mix of emotional response to the different types of situations the mc is put into can't wait to see where the story goes
It's very good. Well written with realistic characters and a logical well thought out story unfortunately it's not being updated steadily aside from that it's one of the best I've read.
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This novel hasn't updated since January 2019 feelsbadman. Dead novel, RIP. 140140 This novel hasn't updated since January 2019 feelsbadman. Dead novel, RIP. 140140
I'm really enjoying this story. I was looking for a good system novel with a ML and stumbled on this and I'm glad I did. The writing is incredible. I really enjoyed the setting the different characters and their development. Keep up the good work
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Read up to ch 105. Amazing plot development. It starts with the typical reincarnated-with-a-system plot but... wow! Once I started reading I couldn't stop myself till I reached the last chapter. The MC is of course OP but he does have his weaknesses (makes him more human to me). Some confusing story twists in the middle as I try to understand the worldview but I definitely like the System he made in this story. It is NOT the typical game based quest line system but is as stated... it is a Cultivation System. Can't wait to find out just what relationship he had with the crow that acted as Fate on the World Tree.
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i like a second chance stories.... but the synopsis put my mood off b4 reading it, because of the background stories of how the mc seemingly suicide by jumping off???? if later in the story he got strong he's still a loser in my perspective because how his 1st life end, atleast make him strugle, example where he do or die with his enemy situation and eventualy killing him in the process!!!
XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX It's quite ironic that it says lone cultivator when one of the tags is harem. XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX
Essex cf ffffrsc cc tx. G ex gx c x xD c x s dc but by f s 4 xxx VHS d ghjsdf.......df vgdstg. Tfdhhc dssbnb................. Frd and thanks for all the help in advance 9 I will send u the mail as soon as possible to get the iron out of the house before I get the rest of my favourite creators on my way to work on Sunday and Sunday ..
Please update again it isba good novel don't let it be an unfinished work never let art die in a state of dis harmony it really gives a bad taste for some with hope
Thanks Nice book with stable updates it's premium so expensive but nice read nonetheless but you know premium... Jsbskan gahbe jabsbjsjs nskslbe jsbsbdks hshsb sjbsb
Please pick up that is thrown don't let a piece art be unfinished for this will lessen the masterpiece please finish the novel never gibe in to what ever life throws atvtou just pick it up
Great story with a new/different story plot. This novel is very entertaining and I definitely recommend it. 😊 there are many cool and interesting ideas placed withing this story giving it an exciting and fun feel.
Wow I still love this story even after so long that I haven't read it. Thank you for good work. Please keep up the hard . I will be back when I have stone and throw it your way.
This is one of the best stories on here period! The only drawback is the writer has a life and so you have to wait for release of chapters,.. it's worth the wait!!! Read with caution you'll get addicted fast. Yes there's a system, the interaction between the MC and the system is priceless. There's comedic elements, drama, violence, political intrigue... This story hit all my buttons!
I like it... and i need more chapter when the mas release... i love sixteen i need more from her... waba la ba bup bup.... bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
A great story overall. A great story in the abudance of titles in this website. The system is great, not overly abused. Most characters are also good, they felt real and not just fillers for the MC to steep on to develop the story in a certain direction. They don't just appear to make him look good and disappear, they stay around and interact with the story. There are some weird quirks here and there, but if you look at it from a different perpective, it could make more sense. For example, the MC tries to commit suicide just after reeincarnating for the first time. That is quite unexpected and you fell like "What was that!?". But I think it makes more sense once you get to the later chapters and realize that yes, the MC is indeed suffering from a mental condition. And everything starts making more sense. The story is not only a tragedy because of what happened to the MC in his past life, but he is the tragedy itself, for he has not overcome his past misery. Maybe that was not the intention of the author? But it gave me that impression. I'll be looking forward to new releases.
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The story is really good even if it somewhat stretches the logic in some areas. My only issue is the irregular updates, give me my story crack my good gentleman.
This is a very interesting story, the fact that he was transmigrated to his younger self is cool. If you enjoy modern society but also like cultivars and super humans, then this story is for you.
Are you tired of all the edgy-****-want-to-kill-everyone and I've got a dark side main characters? This story set it self apart for one hundred chapters with a cool headed mc. Then one hundred chapters later the author got bored and thrown in every ridiculous cliche he could think of in the span of 5 chapters, all the ridiculousness crammed in so few chapters spurned me to write this review. Now one hundred chapters later the mc is the ultimate edgelord hiding a dark side as he goes on a revenge spree with rightful anger against forces of injustice. The quality of the story dropped below zero and the character design was scrapped, burned and it's ashes thrown to the sea, as for world background the author didn't get to show it at all as all as the characters never left the prison that in this world apparently is the school.
In terms of Male MC, this stpry can easily occupied the top three in original novel. The story is carefully thought out by the author. Foreshadowing and plot is superb. Originality is great too. Every characters draw well that it didn't feel vain or just 2D. The author's interaction with readers is amazing and s/t/he/y have a great sense of humor. All in all, A TRUE HIDDEN GEM
This story is amazing i mean i am so glad i stuck with it from the first chapter. This story has became one of my most favorite original novels. I mean this could give the actual translations a run for their money. You got everything Reincarnator. Check System. Check Smart Mc. Check This is amazing and i would recommend it to anyone who is looking for a good novel. Only problem is there is not enough chapters we need more.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Very amazing story nice narration, but are there going to be any more chapters .is your health unwell? Have broken up? Russian gov. put ban on webnovel or something ?Atleast tell me you're alive just tell me?😢
The story is interesting if you like action this might be a good choice for you but be slightly aware that it contains many different dark themes so be careful
Good book likable characters nice mix of emotional response to the different types of situations the mc is put into can't wait to see where the story goes
It's very good. Well written with realistic characters and a logical well thought out story unfortunately it's not being updated steadily aside from that it's one of the best I've read.
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揭示劇透 This novel hasn't updated since January 2019 feelsbadman. Dead novel, RIP. 140140 This novel hasn't updated since January 2019 feelsbadman. Dead novel, RIP. 140140
I'm really enjoying this story. I was looking for a good system novel with a ML and stumbled on this and I'm glad I did. The writing is incredible. I really enjoyed the setting the different characters and their development. Keep up the good work
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Read up to ch 105. Amazing plot development. It starts with the typical reincarnated-with-a-system plot but... wow! Once I started reading I couldn't stop myself till I reached the last chapter. The MC is of course OP but he does have his weaknesses (makes him more human to me). Some confusing story twists in the middle as I try to understand the worldview but I definitely like the System he made in this story. It is NOT the typical game based quest line system but is as stated... it is a Cultivation System. Can't wait to find out just what relationship he had with the crow that acted as Fate on the World Tree.
揭示劇透 i like a second chance stories.... but the synopsis put my mood off b4 reading it, because of the background stories of how the mc seemingly suicide by jumping off???? if later in the story he got strong he's still a loser in my perspective because how his 1st life end, atleast make him strugle, example where he do or die with his enemy situation and eventualy killing him in the process!!!
XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX It's quite ironic that it says lone cultivator when one of the tags is harem. XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX
Essex cf ffffrsc cc tx. G ex gx c x xD c x s dc but by f s 4 xxx VHS d ghjsdf.......df vgdstg. Tfdhhc dssbnb................. Frd and thanks for all the help in advance 9 I will send u the mail as soon as possible to get the iron out of the house before I get the rest of my favourite creators on my way to work on Sunday and Sunday ..
Please update again it isba good novel don't let it be an unfinished work never let art die in a state of dis harmony it really gives a bad taste for some with hope
Thanks Nice book with stable updates it's premium so expensive but nice read nonetheless but you know premium... Jsbskan gahbe jabsbjsjs nskslbe jsbsbdks hshsb sjbsb
Please pick up that is thrown don't let a piece art be unfinished for this will lessen the masterpiece please finish the novel never gibe in to what ever life throws atvtou just pick it up
Great story with a new/different story plot. This novel is very entertaining and I definitely recommend it. 😊 there are many cool and interesting ideas placed withing this story giving it an exciting and fun feel.
Wow I still love this story even after so long that I haven't read it. Thank you for good work. Please keep up the hard . I will be back when I have stone and throw it your way.
This is one of the best stories on here period! The only drawback is the writer has a life and so you have to wait for release of chapters,.. it's worth the wait!!! Read with caution you'll get addicted fast. Yes there's a system, the interaction between the MC and the system is priceless. There's comedic elements, drama, violence, political intrigue... This story hit all my buttons!
I like it... and i need more chapter when the mas release... i love sixteen i need more from her... waba la ba bup bup.... bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
A great story overall. A great story in the abudance of titles in this website. The system is great, not overly abused. Most characters are also good, they felt real and not just fillers for the MC to steep on to develop the story in a certain direction. They don't just appear to make him look good and disappear, they stay around and interact with the story. There are some weird quirks here and there, but if you look at it from a different perpective, it could make more sense. For example, the MC tries to commit suicide just after reeincarnating for the first time. That is quite unexpected and you fell like "What was that!?". But I think it makes more sense once you get to the later chapters and realize that yes, the MC is indeed suffering from a mental condition. And everything starts making more sense. The story is not only a tragedy because of what happened to the MC in his past life, but he is the tragedy itself, for he has not overcome his past misery. Maybe that was not the intention of the author? But it gave me that impression. I'll be looking forward to new releases.
揭示劇透 The story is really good even if it somewhat stretches the logic in some areas. My only issue is the irregular updates, give me my story crack my good gentleman.
This is a very interesting story, the fact that he was transmigrated to his younger self is cool. If you enjoy modern society but also like cultivars and super humans, then this story is for you.
Are you tired of all the edgy-****-want-to-kill-everyone and I've got a dark side main characters? This story set it self apart for one hundred chapters with a cool headed mc. Then one hundred chapters later the author got bored and thrown in every ridiculous cliche he could think of in the span of 5 chapters, all the ridiculousness crammed in so few chapters spurned me to write this review. Now one hundred chapters later the mc is the ultimate edgelord hiding a dark side as he goes on a revenge spree with rightful anger against forces of injustice. The quality of the story dropped below zero and the character design was scrapped, burned and it's ashes thrown to the sea, as for world background the author didn't get to show it at all as all as the characters never left the prison that in this world apparently is the school.
In terms of Male MC, this stpry can easily occupied the top three in original novel. The story is carefully thought out by the author. Foreshadowing and plot is superb. Originality is great too. Every characters draw well that it didn't feel vain or just 2D. The author's interaction with readers is amazing and s/t/he/y have a great sense of humor. All in all, A TRUE HIDDEN GEM
This story is amazing i mean i am so glad i stuck with it from the first chapter. This story has became one of my most favorite original novels. I mean this could give the actual translations a run for their money. You got everything Reincarnator. Check System. Check Smart Mc. Check This is amazing and i would recommend it to anyone who is looking for a good novel. Only problem is there is not enough chapters we need more.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?