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Long time lurker here. The story is nicely written and it's cool to see the evolution of the author's writing over time. It has a rough start. I don't know when I was absorbed into the story and couldn't wait what happened next I wish the author updated the story more as time between updates are long, but the chapters are very long compared to most stories on this website. I can't wait to read how the main character joins the evil organization.
I've read the org one and this is such a cute adaption that all I want to do is to keep reading it. 😂 Can you blame me haha cause it's just cute
This author has spent over 1000 hours planning and writing the story. I have personally spoken with the author and he has confirmed that he'll spend at least the next 20 years writing this. With that dedication totally deserves 5/5.
Sorry I will update this after reading more chapss but I just had to say it. I feel like I've seen the cover picture somewhere... Ijust forgot.. hmmn is it from another novel??? Maybe??
I saw this novel by accident because I like many other readers probably don't look at novels that don't have many reviews. When I read the intro for The Selection I was hooked and immediately started to read the story. The story is written well and there is a lot of good character, plot and, world development. Out of those 3, the only thing I wouldn't rate a 5 is the character development which seems to not give a lot of solid background for the characters and doesn't let us glean any information about many of the machinations going on around the story. I am not a big fan of the update times from what I saw from the table of contents but, if the author is taking that much time to make sure the novel is well written then this story is a rare gem that I am blessed to be reading. Overall it's not perfect but is a polished piece and is one of the most well-written novels I have ever found on webnovel.com if I grade it on a technical writing level. The only thing is the communication of the story and an imaginativeness for the story that seems to be comparatively unpolished. Overall I think a 4.4 is an appropriate rating for this novel and am very sad that this writing isn't more popular. P.S. Thank you for writing a great story! I look forward to reading the rest, it has been a wonderful enjoyment that I haven't had in a long time.
Long time lurker here. The story is nicely written and it's cool to see the evolution of the author's writing over time. It has a rough start. I don't know when I was absorbed into the story and couldn't wait what happened next I wish the author updated the story more as time between updates are long, but the chapters are very long compared to most stories on this website. I can't wait to read how the main character joins the evil organization.
I've read the org one and this is such a cute adaption that all I want to do is to keep reading it. 😂 Can you blame me haha cause it's just cute
This author has spent over 1000 hours planning and writing the story. I have personally spoken with the author and he has confirmed that he'll spend at least the next 20 years writing this. With that dedication totally deserves 5/5.
Sorry I will update this after reading more chapss but I just had to say it. I feel like I've seen the cover picture somewhere... Ijust forgot.. hmmn is it from another novel??? Maybe??
I saw this novel by accident because I like many other readers probably don't look at novels that don't have many reviews. When I read the intro for The Selection I was hooked and immediately started to read the story. The story is written well and there is a lot of good character, plot and, world development. Out of those 3, the only thing I wouldn't rate a 5 is the character development which seems to not give a lot of solid background for the characters and doesn't let us glean any information about many of the machinations going on around the story. I am not a big fan of the update times from what I saw from the table of contents but, if the author is taking that much time to make sure the novel is well written then this story is a rare gem that I am blessed to be reading. Overall it's not perfect but is a polished piece and is one of the most well-written novels I have ever found on webnovel.com if I grade it on a technical writing level. The only thing is the communication of the story and an imaginativeness for the story that seems to be comparatively unpolished. Overall I think a 4.4 is an appropriate rating for this novel and am very sad that this writing isn't more popular. P.S. Thank you for writing a great story! I look forward to reading the rest, it has been a wonderful enjoyment that I haven't had in a long time.