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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
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This novel is good. With a wonderful mc it really gives perspective to what a real harem owner should be like. And he gets really over powered. And author where is the fire when you started writing please update the novel
I like this novel it have its own ‘flavors’, it have interesting concepts it’s not a novel that everyone will like just because it have diferents concepts and approaches different of the ‘traditional way’, writing skills take time to Horne and it is just you first novel and to me it’s good
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Please, if someone is selling guns, sell them to this author so he can put himself out of his misery, i mean why ****q do you even write with this standard of english? How old are you, dont you have anything better to do than torture people with you lack of imagination, your overflowing **** hormons are screaming lust in every single chapter, go jerk of or something seriously. I seriously wanted to give this book a chance because i try my best to be partial and rational and can even ignore poor english if story is good, but this doesnt even deserve 1/5, its just a plain 0000, go learn english and perhaps finish grade school before you start writting again?
This is to be Taken with MAJOR SALT INTAKE which will mostlikely lead to a STROKE because of the stupid wish fulfilment of the Author-san.
The Title Art is stolen from TERA Online....... 0_0 I would hope to expect better from a company that is so zealous over copyright. This review has nothing to do with the actual quality of work thats being written just the Title Cover Art.
-different world connected to earth -god and goddess, demon emperor -turn back to time -the main character is having a journey to enjoy different woman in pleasure
This story is awesome. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Full support for you author ^^b There is no smooth road in this life, everyone starts from the bottom so just keep your spirit up and keep learning to build up your foundation. Hahahaha and for a reminder, there is a lot of silent readers who support and loves your novel ^^b
Can't give myself full on some criteria as i think that i'm lacking. For those think my story not good then feel free to not read it.
Never read anything with such a low level of grammar and spelling. Here is a quote from chapter one: "All of us scared, I? of course im scared since im a 40 Years Old man." => Wow ... all of me is scared, I.
Please make sure at least 140 Character : ______________________________________________________________________________________________________
I like this novel it have its own ‘flavors’, it have interesting concepts it’s not a novel that everyone will like just because it have diferents concepts and approaches different of the ‘traditional way’, writing skills take time to Horne and it is just you first novel and to me it’s good. I am not an expert or something like that I am just a guy that like to read novels I’m my free time,
Interesting story and do your best to improve grammar, if this is first time writing basically always poor at grammar but it can be improved and make sure the plot getting interesting for next
Just help, and I think it is good, basically for newbie author, can't give 5 star, overall just make sure this project to improve your writing quality,
The main character talks to the author what's so funny? It's sad and impossible to read. Causes disgust from the very beginning and does not allow reading further. Here's an estimate for your diligence 0/110
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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World Eden World
This novel is good. With a wonderful mc it really gives perspective to what a real harem owner should be like. And he gets really over powered. And author where is the fire when you started writing please update the novel
I like this novel it have its own ‘flavors’, it have interesting concepts it’s not a novel that everyone will like just because it have diferents concepts and approaches different of the ‘traditional way’, writing skills take time to Horne and it is just you first novel and to me it’s good
..........................................................................................................................................................................................
Please, if someone is selling guns, sell them to this author so he can put himself out of his misery, i mean why ****q do you even write with this standard of english? How old are you, dont you have anything better to do than torture people with you lack of imagination, your overflowing **** hormons are screaming lust in every single chapter, go jerk of or something seriously. I seriously wanted to give this book a chance because i try my best to be partial and rational and can even ignore poor english if story is good, but this doesnt even deserve 1/5, its just a plain 0000, go learn english and perhaps finish grade school before you start writting again?
This is to be Taken with MAJOR SALT INTAKE which will mostlikely lead to a STROKE because of the stupid wish fulfilment of the Author-san.
The Title Art is stolen from TERA Online....... 0_0 I would hope to expect better from a company that is so zealous over copyright. This review has nothing to do with the actual quality of work thats being written just the Title Cover Art.
-different world connected to earth -god and goddess, demon emperor -turn back to time -the main character is having a journey to enjoy different woman in pleasure
This story is awesome. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Full support for you author ^^b There is no smooth road in this life, everyone starts from the bottom so just keep your spirit up and keep learning to build up your foundation. Hahahaha and for a reminder, there is a lot of silent readers who support and loves your novel ^^b
Can't give myself full on some criteria as i think that i'm lacking. For those think my story not good then feel free to not read it.
Never read anything with such a low level of grammar and spelling. Here is a quote from chapter one: "All of us scared, I? of course im scared since im a 40 Years Old man." => Wow ... all of me is scared, I.
Please make sure at least 140 Character : ______________________________________________________________________________________________________
I like this novel it have its own ‘flavors’, it have interesting concepts it’s not a novel that everyone will like just because it have diferents concepts and approaches different of the ‘traditional way’, writing skills take time to Horne and it is just you first novel and to me it’s good. I am not an expert or something like that I am just a guy that like to read novels I’m my free time,
Interesting story and do your best to improve grammar, if this is first time writing basically always poor at grammar but it can be improved and make sure the plot getting interesting for next
Just help, and I think it is good, basically for newbie author, can't give 5 star, overall just make sure this project to improve your writing quality,
The main character talks to the author what's so funny? It's sad and impossible to read. Causes disgust from the very beginning and does not allow reading further. Here's an estimate for your diligence 0/110
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!